Anthropomorphic

If food for finer thoughts we did not crave, If sense of purpose we did not apply, If we did not critique how we behave, If dormant laid Alert Judgmental Eye… If float and breed were our exclusive wish, If instincts solely spurred us to survive, We might as well be just a school of fish - Not learning about deep currents of Life. If we ran loose, not playing by the rules, If years weren’t measured by the days we seize, We might as well be just a pack of wolves - With hungry jaws and reflex to appease. If loyalty and trust weren’t our guide, If fam’ly failed to withstand the Time, We might as well be lions, without pride - Where govern male rivalry and crime. If we ignored the term - Personal Growth, Meandering complacently in awe, We might as well be just a slack of sloth - With sluggish status quo, seeking no more. If benefits of thought we didn’t reap, If mindful property we didn’t hold dear, We might as well be just a herd of sheep - That sacrificed their free will out of fear. Brushing aside the Kingdom of the Wild, Place on a pedestal a Human Mind. With love and progress equally aligned Let’s be the best we can, one of a Kind. As to Judgmental Eye, its primal goal - To keep our planet safe and civil, By virtue of Grey Matter, above all - To distinguish between good and evil. January 20, 2021
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Turner Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Excellent, Maggie.
Moore Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 2:09 PM
Very thoughtful and creative, Margarita, as well as easy and enjoyable to read. nicely done!
Lillico  Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Thank you Molly! It’s one of my own favourites in my humble opinion:) M.
Gondolf Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Back with congrats on your win my dear friend!
Kauffman Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Powerful, thought provoking and very melodic Margarita. There is a depth that flows line from line and stanza from stanza all leading to your final stanza. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you.
Lillico  Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Thank you Sam. M.
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Wow that's a wonderful write. Congratulations on your win. Take care Rama
Y. Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Hi Margarita, You've penned a well-written poem with a powerful message. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 7:24 AM
Amazing poem ~ Very clever lines one being "lions, without pride". Your overview is thorough and you penned this superbly ~ Congrats on your well deserved win !
Seeker Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Thanks for participating in the contest and congrats on your placement! Yes, if we can discern good vs evil, the world will become heaven!
Gondolf Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 5:46 PM
Wow, Maggie, this is really a wonderfully written piece. Humankind does hold a higher place than the other creatures of the earth though sometimes you would never know it by the way we act. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
Lillico  Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Thanks John, your Wow is a Wow! :) M.
Cohen Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 3:01 PM
This is an inspired and inspiring poem. You had me at "just a slack of sloth ..." ~Eric
Lillico  Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 6:01 PM
Thanks Eric, sloth, eh?!I must have belittled the lions :) Cheers! M.
Hamilton Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 7:07 AM
A wonderfully written work with a powerful message, thanks for posting Margarita, I think I found my new fave poet!
Lillico  Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Thank you John, it means a lot! And means I have to keep up with the new standard to be new fav :) Cheers! M.
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