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If food for finer thoughts we did not crave, If sense of purpose we did not apply, If we did not critique how we behave, If dormant laid Alert Judgmental Eye… If float and breed were our exclusive wish, If instincts solely spurred us to survive, We might as well be just a school of fish - Not learning about deep currents of Life. If we ran loose, not playing by the rules, If years weren’t measured by the days we seize, We might as well be just a pack of wolves - With hungry jaws and reflex to appease. If loyalty and trust weren’t our guide, If fam’ly failed to withstand the Time, We might as well be lions, without pride - Where govern male rivalry and crime. If we ignored the term - Personal Growth, Meandering complacently in awe, We might as well be just a slack of sloth - With sluggish status quo, seeking no more. If benefits of thought we didn’t reap, If mindful property we didn’t hold dear, We might as well be just a herd of sheep - That sacrificed their free will out of fear. Brushing aside the Kingdom of the Wild, Place on a pedestal a Human Mind. With love and progress equally aligned Let’s be the best we can, one of a Kind. As to Judgmental Eye, its primal goal - To keep our planet safe and civil, By virtue of Grey Matter, above all - To distinguish between good and evil. January 20, 2021

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Date: 3/3/2023 7:08:00 PM
Excellent, Maggie.
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Date: 2/23/2021 2:09:00 PM
Very thoughtful and creative, Margarita, as well as easy and enjoyable to read. nicely done!
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Date: 2/23/2021 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Molly! It’s one of my own favourites in my humble opinion:) M.
Date: 2/2/2021 6:46:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win my dear friend!
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Date: 1/30/2021 9:52:00 AM
Powerful, thought provoking and very melodic Margarita. There is a depth that flows line from line and stanza from stanza all leading to your final stanza. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you.
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Date: 2/3/2021 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Sam. M.
Date: 1/29/2021 9:58:00 AM
Wow that's a wonderful write. Congratulations on your win. Take care Rama
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Date: 1/29/2021 7:37:00 AM
Hi Margarita, You've penned a well-written poem with a powerful message. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/29/2021 7:24:00 AM
Amazing poem ~ Very clever lines one being "lions, without pride". Your overview is thorough and you penned this superbly ~ Congrats on your well deserved win !
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Date: 1/29/2021 6:59:00 AM
Thanks for participating in the contest and congrats on your placement! Yes, if we can discern good vs evil, the world will become heaven!
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Date: 1/21/2021 5:46:00 PM
Wow, Maggie, this is really a wonderfully written piece. Humankind does hold a higher place than the other creatures of the earth though sometimes you would never know it by the way we act. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/21/2021 6:04:00 PM
Thanks John, your Wow is a Wow! :) M.
Date: 1/21/2021 3:01:00 PM
This is an inspired and inspiring poem. You had me at "just a slack of sloth ..." ~Eric
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Date: 1/21/2021 6:01:00 PM
Thanks Eric, sloth, eh?!I must have belittled the lions :) Cheers! M.
Date: 1/21/2021 7:07:00 AM
A wonderfully written work with a powerful message, thanks for posting Margarita, I think I found my new fave poet!
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Date: 1/21/2021 11:27:00 AM
Thank you John, it means a lot! And means I have to keep up with the new standard to be new fav :) Cheers! M.

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