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Moon-Viewing


Fingers round the moon...
Tonight I cannot distinguish –
The weight of sake.

allusiondeepmoonnaturehaiku

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Paul Callus

February 4, 2016 at 9:07 AM

A haiku written 'for heaven's sake', Luaer! Love your musing....paul

Luaer Solnox

February 5, 2016 at 1:32 PM

Right you are. Thanks Paul for the kind words!

Vladislav Raven

February 3, 2016 at 2:59 PM

Haiku is one of my favourite forms for reading Luaer. An excellent job on this one. Welcome to the Soup my Friend. May your pen run gold and your heart sing free. This Haiku goes into my faves....Vladislav.

Luaer Solnox

February 3, 2016 at 9:14 PM

Thanks Vladislav! Haiku is my favourite form that I know of so far.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 3, 2016 at 12:50 PM

- Great haiku, Luaer ! - Welcome to P -Soup, hoping to get to know you - hugs from Norway :)

Luaer Solnox

February 3, 2016 at 9:10 PM

Thanks for the welcome Anne; I've enjoyed my stay so far...

Poet Destroyer A

January 31, 2016 at 12:24 AM

Lauer, you are so kind, thank you for the nice reply to my comment. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. XoX LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

January 22, 2016 at 11:30 PM

Luaer, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Luaer Solnox

January 29, 2016 at 5:59 PM

Thank you Linda. I too look forward to our time together.

Ann Roske

January 22, 2016 at 11:09 AM

Nicely penned and lovely soft image. Well timed since Saturday is the full Wolf moon.

Luaer Solnox

January 22, 2016 at 6:53 PM

Thank you. I'm glad someone else thinks so too.

Skat A

January 22, 2016 at 7:28 AM

Lauer, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Luaer Solnox

January 22, 2016 at 7:06 PM

I am simply staggered by the support here. If they are as friendly as those that have been here already, then I can say without hesitation that I look forward to my continued stay. SKAT it is a pleasure to make your acquaintance.