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Little Proton

When I closed my eyes they swirled before me, like little atoms, protons in my hands, little worlds of their own. The colours and the sounds, the smells. When I opened my eyes for the first time After, I could not see, but for those twirling coloured specks of light. Could not interpret, see what it was, could not distinguish head or tail. Was scared when in the middle of these smithereens a voice appeared saying things I couldn’t distinguish either. Life was frightening and complicated back then. I am a little proton, shining bright in the middle of the night, opposing everything and everyone, just because I am still around, am still here, because I am who I am. I am a little proton, I am allowed to be here. I don’t need to be perfect, don’t need to see, hear or walk faultlessly, I am allowed in your swarm of dancing little colourful atoms, me, your little proton. *** November 24, 2017 Copyright © Darren White
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Marine Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Little proton, you are missed by so many- such beautiful thoughts make my head dance with delight...
Marine Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 10:39 AM
I lovethe perfect swirl of your unique thinking, Darren- wonderful words of self affirmation, reminding us all that no matter how insignificant we might feel, we are still so precious...thank you for being such a positive influence on others!
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November 27, 2017 at 10:20 PM
Beautiful , Darren Hugs Eve ~`*
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November 26, 2017 at 9:24 PM
What a fun, new-to-me idea and a great poem.
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November 25, 2017 at 3:00 PM
It makes small valuable. Perhaps even more so than great. Lovely lyrical reading.
Ella Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 5:38 PM
I love this poem :) We all are protons in one big soup! <3 <3 <3
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November 24, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Oh and the reading, also amazing!!
Ella Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 5:46 AM
Thank you Art :)
Vaso Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 1:12 PM
So creative and beautiful, loved this Darren!
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