Screen of Awareness- POTD

Born into this earth one day quite unaware,
We grow with time and eventually age.
Pass through stages many and varied,
And in activities manifold, we busily engage. 

We do not know what tomorrow unveils,
Or where the road we tread may lead.
But within us is a realm that will never change.
It is something that to vagaries, never shall yield.

Beneath all fluctuations, it stays static.
It is the light of consciousness that in us shines,
That has been slowly built in us through our breeding.
Through values garnered and what God in us aligns.

This screen of awareness is something so palpable,
But can never be seen yet stays securely intact.
It is the consciousness that God has planted in us.
Defeating all deceptions, it helps us choose the right act.

When we experience pain and heaviness of heart
On the screen of awareness may appear a shining star
It will sure pilot us through the dank and dark corridors of life.
Help us stay firm in fluidity, showing who we truly are.

Beliefs and concepts may evolve and change with time,
But as long as we are insulated within the protective screen
Of awareness, it will distinguish the genuine from the sham, 
And our life will glitter in all radiance and heavenly sheen!

May.18.2023

~ Placed Fifth~

The Screen of Awareness Poetry Contest
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Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 4:43 AM
A great poem inspiring positivity and hope, the vicissitudes of aging yeah wow! Kudos!! Congrats ON YOUR POTD!!
Alex Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 7:02 AM
I do not know how I missed it earlier. A very beautiful work. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 8:48 PM
Congratulation on your win dear Valsa and your POTD! This is a journey of the seeking heart! Love the last line "Glitter in all radiance and heavenly sheen!" What a beautiful thing to look forward to as your words give us a glimpse into this wonder! Blessings dear friend! How wonderful to share the podium with you!
Poet Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 11:56 AM
Back with sincere congratulations to you, Valsa, on your well-deserved win for this spiritually uplifting piece of art.
M  Avatar
May 25, 2023 at 2:25 AM
Congratulations on POTD Valsa…Debx
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Congrats on POTD! Very well done and a very deep thought well expressed!
George Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 9:06 PM
Thanks a lot dear Krish for your appreciative comment.
Lane Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 2:43 AM
Congratulations on your potd verses, Valsa. So sorry I missed reading it when it was first posted.
George Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Thank you very much Lin. I too miss POTD's by accident.
Poet Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 8:45 AM
Well written, Valsa! Your thoughts are really meaningful and thoughtful. A heartfelt congrats for being chosen as POTD
George Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Thanks a lot dear Lasaad ! Your encouragement has always been a boost to me.
Seeker Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 10:36 PM
Beautifully penned, Valsa! Your contemplations are deep and profound. Warmest congratulations on POTD ~
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 3:09 AM
Yes, I am aware. Technically, as per unwritten protocol I should therefore not have commented on this poem but that’s a farce, isn’t it? It’s out in the open, as POTD. Of course, having said that, each poem stands in its own merit, as perceived by the sponsor of the contest ~ let’s see how this one fares vs other entries!
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:17 AM
Hi Seeker friend. This I have entered this in your contest. So glad to know you liked it ! Thanks a lot ....
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Valsa, congratulations on POTD! Nice!
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:15 AM
Thank you so much sweet friend Kim.
Nicole Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 7:29 PM
I completely agree, Valsa. This 'screen of awareness keeps us on the right path. We all have that shining light within us, because God placed it there. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations my dear sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:14 AM
Brandy, once again let me affirm--- your comments are always a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for your most encouraging and generous response. Enjoy your weekend, sweet friend!
La France Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Valsa, wonderful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM F THE DAY honor !
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:11 AM
This comment from a great poet like you is much appreciated !
Hind Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 12:18 PM
I've already been to this one, but it's a wonderful poem-- congrats on your POTD!!!
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:10 AM
Thanks a lot Paige for your second visit to my page and for your sweet comment
Edmonds  Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Lovely poetry Valsa - “When we experience pain and heaviness of heart, On the screen of awareness may appear a shining star” - this happened to me recently and took me from the depths of despair. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:09 AM
So happy to know that you had a beautiful experience of being lighted by this inner awareness when you were feeling very glum ! Thank you so much Belle for sharing your ecperience with us.
Anaya Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 9:32 AM
A theme made for your expertise, what is this ever-present awareness? You've enlightened us gracefully with your spiritual sense and loving-kindness, your light! Congratulations on POTD Valsa! xhugs~
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:05 AM
Hi Anaya, so happy for your sweet appreciation. Thanks a lot dear friend. Wish you a very happy weekend!
Roper Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations on POTD my friend. Well said verse.
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:04 AM
Thank you so much dear Eve. Stay Blessed!
Y. Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Wow! Valsa, This is a well written piece on one's " consciousness." I agree, our "God" given consciousness will remain the same and follow us throughout our lives. However, we might may not always listen to it. You expressed your thoughts on it very well. Well done. Its looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:03 AM
You are very encouraging dear Alexis. Thanks a lot for your kind words.
Lawrence Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts and words dear Valsa . I love the light of consciousness. You have described it in an eloquent way . How lucky we are to have the depth of consciousness we do. Screen of awareness ! Love it . Hugs and blessings and congratulations on your POTD. Susan :)
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:59 AM
Much gratitude to you for your sweet words of appreciation dear Susan. Have a great weekend.
Baker Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Valsa! A fine entry for the contest to boot. Your thoughts remine us of the miraculous gift of our Creator God. Thanks for sharing and enjoy your day of recognition my der friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:02 AM
Yes, God has created in us a natural ability to choose between good and bad. This awareness is innate with all of us. Thanks a lot dear friend Bill for your insightful comment.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Wonderfully written, Dear Valsa. The theme has inspired you to create an excellent verse - deeply spiritual. Congratulations on receiving honour of POTD. Love ~ Mala
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:57 AM
Thank you so much dear Mala. So happy to hear such beautiful words from you
May Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 4:45 AM
Congrats on POTD with this wonderful write Valsa
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:29 AM
Very grateful to you dear Joseph. Wish you a happy weekend.
Pandit Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 4:19 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Valsa. Enjoy your special day today.
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:27 AM
Very kind of you ! Thanks a lot for your second visit.
Kitchin Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 3:53 AM
Valsa, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD!
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:27 AM
Thank you so much dear Tania ! Wish you a happy weekend ....
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 3:32 AM
Excellent POTD Valsa, the screen of awareness is quite difficult, if not impossible to explain, congratulations on a job well done, cheers David
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:25 AM
Thank you so much dear David. Your great words of encouragement are much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:28 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Valsa :) - Enjoy :) - hugs
George Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:24 AM
Thanks a lot Anne. Never expected this would become POTD. Have a great weekend ! Love and hugs.....
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