Best Blow Your Mind Poems
you want to know a secret
when I write a poem and it's perfect
i dont share it
i bury it
deep inside of me
where no one else can see
i mean its perfect
not like this shift
it's elegant, poignant,
simplistic, bueatful
trucking perfect
its not erotic
but i read it
mentally masterbate to it
a euphoric chorus
straight form thesaurus
its just that great
im not being egotistical
if read, it would become universal
a meter tethered in clasical measure
a rythmic flow
with many metaphoric undertows
an iconic harmonic tonic
to make you feel like an embryonic hedonic youth
im not being napoleonic
its an actual truth
factually accurate
high in heaven
it produced a tear in the eye of god
who proclaimed
not a single flaw
not a single flaw
and he only saw what i wrote
well, because hes god
me being me i like to tease
allow me to be inclined to share a few lines
blow your mind
redefine your collective defective perspective
realign your ineffective respective connective tisue
"all my cows milk is homogenized
all my crows are well organized
all my sheep like to stare and creep
like to stare and creep"
but you'll never see
the rest of my secret poetry
that only exsist inside of me
cows will always moo
crows will always ka kah
sheep will always go baah baah baah
and the perfect elagance
of my literary inteligence
will die with me
never being seen
qouted, memorised or plagerized
as i will say with my last gasp
the next line being twice my last
all you super-duper-soupers can kiss my ***
ok all you super-duper-soupers have been slammed. if you want to slam me back just a few things. make it funny. make it a little nonsensical and definitly make it over the top
and if you do slam me back send me a soup mail or leave a comment so i can go read your slam.
The choices we make in love can surprise
Because it sees not with the eyes
It looks within the tender heart
As its healing power it imparts
Love sometimes comes at first sight
And give the soul great delight
It can even grow over time
For reasons with or without rhyme
Love can travel over seas
And catch the whisper of the breeze
Love can drizzle just like rain
It can come and go again
Love can fall like gentle snow
And soothe the soul in summer's glow
Love can blossom in the spring
In its fragrance the heart will sing
Love is what will see us through
Through thick and thin it's there with you
And when you find a love that's true
You'll be glad to say "I do"
Love can do all this and more
For this ailment there's no cure
Love can even blow your mind
And it does all this, while being "blind"
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3/26/16
People who write poetry
Are not so hard to find
You'll find them writing anything
And they'll try to blow your mind
They'll write about true love
Or some truly hateful news
They'll write about the way they walk
Or how they tie their shoes
They'll write about the red hot sun
Or write about the stars
They'll write about the man in the moon
Or our future life on mars
They'll write about their children
Or someone who just gave birth
They'll write about the many wars
Or write for peace on earth
They'll write about politics
Or the presidents, kings and queens
They'll write about their dye-tie shirts
Or their wholly denim jeans
They'll write about nature
Or haiku at it's best
They'll write a song of lyrics
Or a sonnet with some zest
They'll write a catchy limerick
Or a verse about their life
They'll write about their fiancé
Or their soon to be new wife
Poets will write anything
And their not so hard to find
So keep on writing poetry people
And try to blow my mind
For the People Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Richard Lamoureux
6/5/2018
Sharing 1st place honors (6-10-2018)
with Jim Slaughter and his wonderful poem
"Ordinary People" Congratulations Jim!
Thank you, Richard
I thought, love, I would never find. And then suddenly, I was spell bound
It would blow your mind! For the love I have for you is so profound
You came into my life way back when, and like magic you stole my heart
The love was universal poetry and I would follow you from the start
I would follow you to the ends of the earth; beyond the rainbow’s bend
If I die before you, I’ll rebirth! ..For you are my Juliet and I am your
Romeo!
I wasn’t looking for love, just having fun, sharing some inspiration
Never thought I’d come to love again, this was not my expectation
You say I stole your heart, well, mine got stolen too!
And yes, we did write beautiful poetry which forever stands as good
I’ll always be your angel in and out of time, because of this special bond
And should I die before you, I’ll return! For you are my Romeo and I, your
Juliet!
you claim to be the Poetry Destroyer
but i'll destroy you
i'll kick you into touch because I know Kung-Fu
in linguistics I own a belt thats black
i'll leave you down and out with no chance of a comeback
when it comes to dissing i'm a pro
i spit it fast with a venomous flow
you just can't handle the words that I spit
so here's a razor now get those veins slit
i bathe in the blood of all of my foes
when i'm around better keep on your toes
or i'll leave you dejected
make you feel rejected
you'll begin to wish you'd never been selected
like a sure shot sniper i'll blow your mind
you'll find yourself in one hell of a bind
you'll be without a paddle up a certain creek
my style is strong whilst yours is weak
you've just been slammed by Danny C
now why don't you try and slam me
Would you mind if I kissed you
I mean really kissed you
I mean kissed you where it matters
In your heart, spirit, and soul
The parts of you that you hide
that you keep secret
would you let me inside
and discover what you hide
don't be ashame
we all have some kind of pain
would you mind if I touched you
I mean really touched you
can I caress you up and down
and make your body
mingle and tingle
would you mind if I invaded your dreams
and take captive of your every thought
of course your thoughts of me I would see
I'd change all of your thoughts to positive
all your hopes and dreams would come true
Especially the ones about me and you
would you mind if I sampled your flavor
chocolate my favorite
I can't get enough of it
which should I choose
nuts or whip creme
you know what I mean
would you mind
I don't want to waste your time
I just want to blow your mind
Guaranteed to Blow Your Mind
Farrokh Bulsara a.k.a. Freddie Mercury
British singer, songwriter known universally
Confirmed he had AIDS and then died the next day
His music through Queen still rocks us all the way
Came a man from Zanzibar named Farrokh
Whose tastes were both flamboyant and baroque
For fame he was ready
Changed his name to Freddie
After his death millions still love this bloke
A Heathrow baggage handler prior to fame
Wrote a song about his favorite cat, Delilah by name
In his personal life he was very shy, gentle and kind
His life and times are “guaranteed to blow your mind”
(A Collaboration w/JAM)
I thought, love, I would never find. And then suddenly, I was spell bound
It would blow your mind! For the love I have for you is so profound
You came into my life way back when, and like magic you stole my heart
The love was universal poetry and I would follow you from the start
I would follow you to the ends of the earth; beyond the rainbow’s bend
If I die before you, I’ll rebirth! ..For you are my Juliet and I am your
Romeo!
I wasn’t looking for love, just having fun, sharing some inspiration
Never thought I’d come to love again, this was not my expectation
You say I stole your heart, well, mine got stolen too!
And yes, we did write beautiful poetry which forever stands as good
I’ll always be your angel in and out of time, because of this special bond
And should I die before you, I’ll return! For you are my Romeo and I, your
Juliet!
~*~
For those concerned: This is JAM's Proposition and I obliged...now I already know that this will generate all the talk on Soup!! Have fun guys!
You ignite the
romance of my dreams.
I wish to encroach your
lips with my
tasty sandwich of perfected
rosemary teat.
I'll make your brain
immune to my soul
so you become out
of breath when far
from your source.
My toes will python
your emotions,
make you feel good with
motions that can't be
found in Neptune.
Oh! my Fairy prince,
should I Massage
those fire clay
masculinity and
blow your mind out of its organ?
I'm devoured by the
moans of your consistency.
Devoted to the strings of
your intentionality.
Should I delineate your
cubes of grip so it
illuminates the lines
of storytellers?
Or are you too shy to
tell the world that,
You're the heel of
my heart, the calf
of my stamina.
The spine of the moon
and the Larynx of the dark stars.
Honey!
I'll let you dance to the rhythm of Calla
Lily while I paint in the beams of Zinnias.
Diversity is found in university,
Flows from the Devine, magnified among every kind
Shape of eye, size of body, color of hide
The creativity Of Our Creator will blow your mind
Diversity is found in university,
The deceiver he is a weaver of webs of lies
He want nothing good to flourish,
His’s heart pines for everything created by the Devine to die
He poisons the mind toward diversity,
Portrays it as a strangling vine
Of Hate, violence, death
Diversity proclaims the Glory of the Divine
Diversity in color creates art
Diversity in sound creates music
Diversity in thought creates poetry
Celebrate diversity
It proclaims we are created in the image of the Divine
Written by Stephen J. Vattimo
Feb 27, 2017
I have a flash for you ...
Think you can hang with me??
I doubt it ... I keep a pretty quick pace, if you know what I mean!
I may be very small, but I'm pretty special ...
Just the knowledge of my existence
Has led to amazing things!
Things like lasers, Bose–Einstein condensation, Quantum field theory,
And the probabilistic interpretation of quantum mechanics ...
I'm a very particular particle, you see!
A very elementary particle ...
The quantum of the electromagnetic field,
Electromagnetic radiation such as light,
And the force carrier for the electromagnetic force!
I am as fast as fast can be,
Traveling at the speed of light in a vacuum,
Even though I have no rest mass at all!
I am also special in that I can exhibit the properties of a WAVE, too!
I can be refracted by a lens and exhibit wave interference with myself,
And I can behave as a particle,
With definite and finite measurable position and momentum!
I've been applied to photochemistry ...
I've been used for high-resolution microscopy ...
I've even been utilized for measurements of molecular distances!
Recently, I've been studied as an element of quantum computers,
And for applications in optical imaging and optical communication,
(Like quantum cryptography) ...
Too fast and far too tiny to hold, so I doubt you can keep up!
But, oh, am I important!
Einstein knew how important I was,
Even when people told him I didn't exist ...
He KNEW, and persisted!
Oh, you should see what I'm doing at CERN!
You will, you will ...
And it will blow your mind!
You see, I'm traveling light ...
And I'm very, very bright ...
But you can call me ...
PHOTON!
** EIGHTH PLACE in the "Traveling Light" Poetry Contest, Kai Michael Neumann, Sponsor. **
I need to write a poem today
One that will blow your mind away
It must be wild and serene
But that won't fit into this scene
It must be active, visual too
Like something I'd do at the zoo
Maybe, I'll pretend I've got the flu
But that won't work you'd stay away too
Oh my, There's stars, clouds and mountains tall
Oceans or grass to catch your fall
But then, how do I get up high
Now that I've got your attention, I'll fly
Now that you are here with me
I'll zoom and soar and miss that tree
But if I don't what will WE do
Now I've got you thinking too
Thank goodness now that you came
My whole concept was to entertain
Now is the time to confess or admit
It's your turn cause, I'm getting air sick
Tonight we will be lovers
Tomorrow we’ll be friends
With you there’s no beginning
With me there’ll be no end
For just one night I will be yours
And you’ll belong to me
Tonight we’ll set the fire alight
We’ll set our passions free
I need to feel your touch
I need to feel you deep inside
Fulfilling all my needs
Until the sun begins to rise
Tonight, feed every hunger
That’s ever gone unfed
Live out every fantasy
Hidden in your head
Work your magic on me baby
Take me from behind
I’ll drop down on my knees for you
And slowly blow your mind
We’ll lose ourselves between the sheets
Where whispered truths and heartbeats meet
No promises beyond tonight
Just you and me till morning light
With every kiss, with every touch,
With every sweet caress
My body you will own
My soul you will possess
As you make sweet love to me
My juices overflow
In every sense I’ll feel you...
You’ll feel me too, I know
As the dawn draws closer
In your eyes I’ll see
Everything your feeling
As you lay inside of me
And when the sun arises
You’ll whisper in my ear
The word I know you have to say
That I don’t want to hear
We both know "one night only"
Would be all we ever knew
But always I will treasure
Every moment spent with you
By Raina Hutchins
You are witnessing a change in tone,
A new piece of the Rosetta Stone...
It may blow your mind
To find your behind
Has fallen quite far from the throne.
What is the recipe for life
Where can I find the ingredients
Open the Bible and read Gods word
A recipe that is assured
The nutrients that you will find
Will really blow your mind
He wants us to believe in Him
He whose light never grows dim
He never says I don't have time
To answer all our prayers sublime
A sweet smelling savor is this to our Lord
To hear us praying to Him in one accord
Look where Paul was when he was called
Now let's get cooking everyone
Spiritual food, I want me some
Let the Lord come into your heart
If you really want to be smart
A pound of joy goes a long long way
Remember if you should stray
Get back to God as quick as you can
By repenting to Him
He is, was, and is still the main Man
Eat this recipe and you will see
Beloved He will set you free