To be loved by a poet -2


You ignite the 
romance of my dreams. 
I wish to encroach your 
lips with my 
tasty sandwich of perfected 
rosemary teat.
I'll make your brain 
immune to my soul
so you become out 
of breath when far
from your source. 
                                    
My toes will python
your emotions, 
make you feel good with
motions that can't be 
found in Neptune. 
Oh! my Fairy prince, 
should I Massage 
those fire clay 
masculinity and 
blow your mind out of its organ?

I'm devoured by the 
moans of your consistency.
Devoted to the strings of 
your intentionality.
Should I delineate your 
cubes of grip so it
illuminates the lines 
of storytellers? 
Or are you too shy to 
tell the world that,

You're the heel of 
my heart, the calf
of my stamina. 
The spine of the moon 
and the Larynx of the dark stars. 
Honey!
I'll let you dance to the rhythm of Calla
Lily while I paint in the beams of Zinnias.
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Buehler Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 10:38 PM
So lovely and sensual, Tonye. Great writing! Best wishes.
George Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 8:53 PM
"Oh! my Fairy prince, should I Massage those fire clay masculinity and blow your mind out of its organ?" This is sensuality at its peak. You can deal with hot emotions without getting burnt. You deal with it with so much ease...while many fumble and feel embarrassed when it comes to speaking about sensuous relationships. I wonder if this will have a third part when desire culminates into reality. Great twin poems on love and romance, dear Tonye.
George Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:01 AM
Thank you, Dear Valsa. You're so kind. Thank you for your support always.
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 8:05 PM
Such creative descriptions like the python line. Loved that one. I would have to write my poem on hubbie and call it. To be Loved By a Redneck. Haha
George Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:02 AM
Hàhaha. That would be lovely Dear, Andrea. You should do it. He'd love it so much. Thank you for your support.
Wolf Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Somehow I missed the fire extinguisher sale on your website, Tonye. Hot, hotter, and hottest. ~ Blaize
George Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:03 AM
You didn't really miss.. we still have a few up for grabs. Think you could get here on time? Thank you for your support Gersh.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 12:27 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. What a great ending. Have a blessed day...................
George Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:03 AM
Thank you Paula. Hope you have been well.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 1:18 AM
Quite a passionate poem. Your metaphors delight.
George Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Hey friend. Thank you so much. Been away.
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Ohh, a message of open persuasion topped with spiced come _ ons? If that was the intent, I gotcha...womanpower!
George Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Hahaha Nette. I'm glad. Thank you so much.
Empress Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 2:27 PM
Hah and you talk about my metaphors, your metaphors left me speechless , so creative and what a way to describe such intense passionate love and romance? Well i sometimes want to make my partners brain immune to my soul and leave him out of breath :D haha. I love “Oh! my Fairy prince, should I Massage those fire clay masculinity and blow your mind out of its organ?” Ah lord! You sound like one that loves from not just the heart but from deep within! Your wordplay here is impressive! Love it
George Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 8:22 PM
Thank you, Dearest Ink. This comment made me smile so good. hahaha. I found a worthy muse and I'm trying to bring out the other side of a poet that's not dark. Thank you so much, hope you have been well.
One Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 2:02 PM
A lovely and romantic second part to your being loved by a poet series.. Love the last two lines.. The poem vividly explores themes of passion and longing through rich and imaginative imagery. The use of metaphors, such as the "python" and "fire clay masculinity," creates a sensuous and dynamic atmosphere. The language is playful yet intense, reflecting a deep emotional connection. The poem effectively blends celestial and earthly elements, enhancing the romantic tone.
George Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, Dear Silent. some feelings do need celestial elements to express them. Thank you for your warm insights, always. It's always a pleasure.
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 1:58 PM
Very passionate write! I love it! I struggle with free forms but you do it well!
George Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 3:12 AM
hello lovely Karen, thank you so much.
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