Best Awe Poems


Premium Member Faerie Felt Awe Surrounds the Lake

Daffodil majorettes lead the spring parade
Mom fox had lured out a reluctant kit
Verdant grasses are growing lovely shade
For dainty dulcet purple violet

Gentle nurturing rain from day or two
Coaxes her lace lilac to gently wake
Meadow rainbow chiffon a lovely hue.
Faerie-felt awe surrounds beautiful lake.

Carpet of tulips arrive on the scene.
Growth can be felt every hour or two.
Resurrection of weeds, not being mean.
Cyclical magic for me and for you.

The woodlands, the meadow, the lake and the dale.
Rebirth of spring yearly, without fail. 



Written Feb 24, 2019
Contest: Springtime Rebirth
Sponsor: John Hamilton

In Awe of the Moon

At night I'm in awe of the moon
and breezes that carry  her tune
breathless    I seductively swoon
for the attraction I'm not immune

through glorious fields we do tread
passions spilt out slowly have bled
chapters once scripted   are read
together our fears now have fled

footsteps a plenty     I've taken
sights I have seen not mistaken
beauty in eyes    now awakened
bonds were built but not shaken

dreams coming true that are real
a soft kiss on your lips I shall steal
two hearts draw close  I can feel
an infinite love            we reveal

at your side I do gallantly stand
pledged firmly on your left hand
each day spontaneous  not planned
capture riches of this bountiful land

sweet smells of honey dewed grass
a doe and her new fawn quietly pass
the pond peaceful unblemished glass
in harmony   it's God's perfect mass



03/22/2016
© Tim Smith  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member In Awe of Your Love

Dear Lord Jesus, this gift of love you give to me
More precious than the breath I breathe
Flows endless as the mighty seas
Bringing countless blessings in times of need

To know that you live inside of me
May I reflect your light on all I see
I feel you always in the rising sun
And I smile through tears when rain clouds come undone!

Amazed, I watch as lightning bolts zip 'cross  darkened skies
And marvel as thunder rumbles through pillars of clouds
Be it day or night constantly by my side
I’m in awe of your love; forever my guide

You gave your life for me; set me free!
Though undeserving, you pour down your loving grace
Upon mankind irrespective of belief
And call to each, 'come taste and see what it means to be free'! 

When my days are done and your light I return
May it be as brilliant as when you  placed it in me
Let me not return empty keeping it to myself
I pray that I give freely to light another’s path
~*~
02/14/12


Premium Member I Stood In Awe

Tonight, I marveled at a magnificent full moon hanging in the Colorado sky!

It spread its mellow glow upon snow-capped Pikes Peak, so pleasing to the eye!

Contemplating its beauty as I gazed heavenward in awe,

It occurred to me that this was the very same moon that Jesus saw!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired

Premium Member Cosmic Wonder

when I look up at the milky way
and the nebulousness beyond
my heart skips a beat in awe

i see the miracle of life
the timelessness of splendor
i see a grandiose enigma
the vastness of eternity
and mystery of infinity

i see the magic of creation
recognizing the authorship
of an omnipotent mastermind
in the most cosmic way
providential ubiquitous

i feel the mystique of his love



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~MINDFULLY~ 2021

Submitted on February 8, 2019 for contest TELL ME- WHAT DO YOU SEE sponsored by JAMES EDWARD LEE SR  -  RANKED 3RD

Premium Member Woods Enthuse Me

Woods enthuse me,
Bring me to a dancing state.
Lilt me, lift me, bring me back to my soul mother.
Bring me home, in pure joy and excitement.

I adore you, Woods.
Your fox, your eagle, your moss, your deer.
I am one with them, for I am one with you, and 
We are all a part of this universal oneness 

Mother sky and Mother meadow 
Was there ever a more cosmic place in this 
Fantasy world that some think is the real world?

Let me dance and sing and throw my arms into the air,
Playing enthusiastically into your eternal oneness, 
Reveling in your stumps, branches, and the roots that
Tie Mother Earth to this heart-felt place.

Let others be of this world. Let me be ethereal,
A faerie whose wings are dancing and prancing in
perfect harmony with the heartbeat of the forest, 
My savior, my friend, the pulse of the woods.
Nurturing my soul in joyfulness.
May I always be in awe of her.
Always.


Shock and Awe, Coming Back Home

My friends come home draped in flags 
I pause at the edge of the airplane door
Facing a tunnel leading me to a muffled joy
Strangers tell me I am related to them...
I deny a woman with three kids... her kiss
My friends are slipping in trucks with flags
They are loaded and back doors explode shut...
..............................................................

I wake up in a trench of blood and clean pillows
The same woman from the airport next to me
 Peacefully breathing...and I thought she was dead...
I think I am finally home, fans are not propellers
Camouflage doesn't bear swing sets in backyards
My friends' helmets, guns and boots line up in my head
Patrolling with weapons made of aluminum foil
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There is too much silence for a dead soldier walking...
I think I FEEL the kiss of the woman with three kids ...

Premium Member In Awe of the Wind

You whine and whistle, ghostlike, when you round
		the corner of my cottage in the cove.
		You sweetly soothe or taunt and terrify.
		No one on Earth dictates where you will rove.
		
		A menacing marauder or a mild,
		melodious, mysterious delight,
		you play your part in nature to the hilt--
		just heard and felt, not subject to man's sight.


June 23, 2017, placed first in Brian Strand's Mid-Summer Premiere Contest

Date: August 19, 2017
Contest Name: Blowing in the Wind
Sponsor: Nicola Byrne

January 26, 2019, entered on Mark Toney's Poetry Marathon, Mile 13

February 18, 2020, entered in the Strand Select T contest

Beholding In Awe and Gratitude Such a Bliss

As I amble along, a trance me shakes

an immense silence, I fear, my tread wakes

A respite from angst in an oasis of rarity

my stroll in timelessness and spirituality

A joy of mind dancing in thrill and ecstasy

lulling my soul into a winsome reverie

Forget me nots calling for vernal breeze

heartseases blooming, poundering throbs I seize

Love in a Mist promising a golden summer

a stunning pallet! a peerless paintbrush to colour

Morning glories, beauty and forbearance

flowering souls, no void and time for abhorrence

Marguerite Daisies dropping a curtsy to shiny sun

a night retreat, then paths of charm to run

One rare of gems from The Master of the Universe

poets ever carving its ineffable beauty in verse

Artists blend their appealing hues and rising perceptions

a work of Art of emotional power and pure impressions

Beholding in awe and gratitude such a bliss

many of God's grace and blessings I miss.

Premium Member From Awe To Indignation

Faint yellow is the first to appear
Leaves march forth in harmonic progression
To autumn’s clock all must adhere
Amber, scarlet and purple in procession
Bring gasps of wonder till winter’s colorless indignation




*Written September 1, 2014
For Francine’s contest

Shooting Stars of Awe

I have always known, 
I was a slender 
pale vein beating
in the throat of the earth
feathering at its nape,
and that I was rarely
noticed


but the hand of a god 
was rested on the pulse 
of me and a speck of dust
has been anointed by his hand


the Snow globe of winter 
cracked open 
as incandescent fingers 
of light dropped through, 
I knew then
this was a day 
unlike any another


I was in 
the thrall of madness 
the last time 
I felt the eyes of a god 
rest on me


but now I’ve been touched


Is this the madness 
of divinity 
or a reality in awe?


I don’t care, anymore, 
this speck of dust
has now been mapped 
by the hand of a god


and in his heart 
there is a place 
ever waiting my return


this simple speck 
has found a home in heaven


kissed by the stars

Shock and Awe

the war was well 

on its way
mottled and coddled
 battled  and  bottled
before the

            front was modeled
      the frontline was hobbled
the forefront was cobbled

dark hearts be doubled
light hearts be troubled

the war is well
on its way

Premium Member In Awe With Aurora Borealis

aurora borealis spiritual realm
ethereal water paint leaves me breathless
God’s handiwork, His paintbrush at the helm.
reverent silence,  heavenly caress,

ethereal water paint leaves me breathless
wonderment complete as I crest evergreen hill
Reverent silence, heavenly caress,
Never have I felt a sense of nirvana, this still.

wonderment complete as I crest evergreen hill
sacred awe for this natural dream state paradise
never have I felt a sense of nirvana, this still
God’s glory flows within me, in this moment of ice.

sacred awe for this natural dream state paradise.
God’s handiwork, his paintbrush at the helm.
God’s glory flows within me, in this moment of ice.
aurora borealis spiritual realm

Premium Member In Awe

One day there walked into the little store
which at the age of sixteen I worked at
a gorgeous boy. I must have dropped my jaw!

Like a Prince Charming – someone to adore -
was that wonderful dark-eyed young man that
I saw!

I pinched myself because it seemed unreal
that he saw me (this boy who had no flaw)
and wanted very much with me to chat.

I think of him today and still I feel
in awe!


Oct. 30, 2020 for Sara Kendrick's 'The Speaker' Poetry Contest

Words Vanish

*** Words Vanish ***

Words vanish!
Disperse — as prayer begun  
Moves to clear the mind 
    And bare the heart,
Swelling the soul to meet Thee
    With love…

Sending on high gratitude’s praises,
Pulsing on into silence — 
Worshipping in awe of Thee!

By Thy grace
Blessing along Faith’s way 
With heavens’ lights leading
Searching souls 
Close, ever closer to Thy presence — 
 Drawn to that touch —  
Of communion with Thee!  

Yet, prayer in a moment might flee 
Back to thought to fruitlessly plea
For the ineffable to reveal
Some phrases of devotion and humility…
From the human to the Holy

…Entering Radiance
Words fail the feelings 
Of the soul’s prayerful flight in adoring love
For Thee God…
God alone





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** The words “God Alone” are etched in the stone
above the arched entrance to the Trappist Gethsemani
Monastery in Bardstown, KY, USA  (home of Fr. Thomas Merton, teacher, peacemaker, author 
of The Seven Storey Mountain, New Seeds of Contemplation, No Man Is an Island, & more.
He also had a great fondness for James Joyce and taught often about poetry.  Lectures of his 
classes at Gethsemani are widely available on-line.)
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(c) sallyyoung eslinger 9/15/2023
Thanks be to God—-

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