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Faerie Felt Awe Surrounds the Lake

Daffodil majorettes lead the spring parade Mom fox had lured out a reluctant kit Verdant grasses are growing lovely shade For dainty dulcet purple violet Gentle nurturing rain from day or two Coaxes her lace lilac to gently wake Meadow rainbow chiffon a lovely hue. Faerie-felt awe surrounds beautiful lake. Carpet of tulips arrive on the scene. Growth can be felt every hour or two. Resurrection of weeds, not being mean. Cyclical magic for me and for you. The woodlands, the meadow, the lake and the dale. Rebirth of spring yearly, without fail. Written Feb 24, 2019 Contest: Springtime Rebirth Sponsor: John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/24/2019 4:06:00 PM
Beautiful Caren! And the magic continues...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/25/2019 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Sandra. I appreciate your appreciation, my friend.
Date: 2/25/2019 5:26:00 PM
A sonnet that William Shakespeare would be proud of. Good job.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/25/2019 4:55:00 AM
Wow! Bette, what a terrific compliment. I will re-read this often.
Date: 2/25/2019 10:28:00 AM
Great sonnet with very colorful imagery. Good luck in the contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Eve. I had fun trying to make a sonnet.
Date: 2/25/2019 9:15:00 AM
Love this; so serene and tranquil; had to "fav".
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 4:00:00 PM
Thank you M.L.
Date: 2/25/2019 8:10:00 AM
You have penned a truly exceptional sonnet with this fine gem. Every verse leading beautifully to the closing two. A fav and a true gem..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert. I rarely try things this "fancy" and "poetic", but I was determined this time.
Date: 2/25/2019 12:05:00 AM
Epic sonnet and well-written :) -JWE
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 6:10:00 AM
Thank you so much J.W. I do not often "do" sonnets. This was a stretch.

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