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In Awe of the Moon

At night I'm in awe of the moon and breezes that carry her tune breathless I seductively swoon for the attraction I'm not immune through glorious fields we do tread passions spilt out slowly have bled chapters once scripted are read together our fears now have fled footsteps a plenty I've taken sights I have seen not mistaken beauty in eyes now awakened bonds were built but not shaken dreams coming true that are real a soft kiss on your lips I shall steal two hearts draw close I can feel an infinite love we reveal at your side I do gallantly stand pledged firmly on your left hand each day spontaneous not planned capture riches of this bountiful land sweet smells of honey dewed grass a doe and her new fawn quietly pass the pond peaceful unblemished glass in harmony it's God's perfect mass 03/22/2016

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Date: 5/16/2016 9:30:00 AM
So lovely, Tim. Your poem flows beautifully, as do your emotions. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2016 11:38:00 PM
Tim, I couldn't have said it any better than Timothy, you are a weaver of words!
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Date: 3/23/2016 11:48:00 PM
Enchanting and sincere, Tim. You have such a graceful way of writing, that manages to keep a steady rhythm and rhyme scheme, without being too obvious of the fact. You're so tenderhearted.
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Date: 3/23/2016 2:22:00 PM
Wow Tim. You are the man! Love this one my friend as always touching, heartfelt, and deep.
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Date: 3/23/2016 1:17:00 PM
Tim, oh this is lovely, so well penned and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 3/23/2016 10:50:00 AM
I am in awe of the way you write, so eloquently and beautifully. You are not scared to put emotion to paper, and this is a FANtastic result. I am favouring this extremely beautiful poem . Charma
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Date: 3/23/2016 4:28:00 AM
- Beautiful in the moonlight, Tim - I wish you a lovely Easter with egg hunting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2016 4:04:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/22/2016 11:22:00 PM
Ahhhhh! Tim, the moon, what a wonderful sight as you look up above, it sends down messages, I absolutely love the moon, thank you so much for this brilliant read and take care......Vera
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Date: 3/22/2016 7:27:00 PM
Beautiful write Tim love how you have wrote this and how you interacted with the moon.
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:45:00 PM
I too am in "awe of the moon" Written from the heart and very tenderly. Love it. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:17:00 PM
I love spontaneity and soft kisses... and this poem. Well done, Tim.
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