Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

In Awe of the Moon

At night I'm in awe of the moon
and breezes that carry  her tune
breathless    I seductively swoon
for the attraction I'm not immune

through glorious fields we do tread
passions spilt out slowly have bled
chapters once scripted   are read
together our fears now have fled

footsteps a plenty     I've taken
sights I have seen not mistaken
beauty in eyes    now awakened
bonds were built but not shaken

dreams coming true that are real
a soft kiss on your lips I shall steal
two hearts draw close  I can feel
an infinite love            we reveal

at your side I do gallantly stand
pledged firmly on your left hand
each day spontaneous  not planned
capture riches of this bountiful land

sweet smells of honey dewed grass
a doe and her new fawn quietly pass
the pond peaceful unblemished glass
in harmony   it's God's perfect mass



03/22/2016

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Sandra Haight May 16, 2016 at 9:30 AM So lovely, Tim. Your poem flows beautifully, as do your emotions. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen May 16, 2016 at 9:21 AM - Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso March 24, 2016 at 11:38 PM Tim, I couldn't have said it any better than Timothy, you are a weaver of words!

Timothy Hicks March 23, 2016 at 11:48 PM Enchanting and sincere, Tim. You have such a graceful way of writing, that manages to keep a steady rhythm and rhyme scheme, without being too obvious of the fact. You're so tenderhearted.

Michael Tor March 23, 2016 at 2:22 PM Wow Tim. You are the man! Love this one my friend as always touching, heartfelt, and deep.

Constance La France March 23, 2016 at 1:17 PM Tim, oh this is lovely, so well penned and I am loving it 7 ~

Charmaine Chircop March 23, 2016 at 10:50 AM I am in awe of the way you write, so eloquently and beautifully. You are not scared to put emotion to paper, and this is a FANtastic result. I am favouring this extremely beautiful poem . Charma

Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2016 at 4:28 AM - Beautiful in the moonlight, Tim - I wish you a lovely Easter with egg hunting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam March 23, 2016 at 4:04 AM Excellent. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Vera Duggan March 22, 2016 at 11:22 PM Ahhhhh! Tim, the moon, what a wonderful sight as you look up above, it sends down messages, I absolutely love the moon, thank you so much for this brilliant read and take care......Vera

Michael Tor March 22, 2016 at 7:27 PM Beautiful write Tim love how you have wrote this and how you interacted with the moon.

Daniel Turner March 22, 2016 at 4:45 PM I too am in "awe of the moon" Written from the heart and very tenderly. Love it. Peace my friend:)

Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 3:17 PM I love spontaneity and soft kisses... and this poem. Well done, Tim.