Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Rhyme

Beholding In Awe and Gratitude Such a Bliss

As I amble along, a trance me shakes

an immense silence, I fear, my tread wakes

A respite from angst in an oasis of rarity

my stroll in timelessness and spirituality

A joy of mind dancing in thrill and ecstasy

lulling my soul into a winsome reverie

Forget me nots calling for vernal breeze

heartseases blooming, poundering throbs I seize

Love in a Mist promising a golden summer

a stunning pallet! a peerless paintbrush to colour

Morning glories, beauty and forbearance

flowering souls, no void and time for abhorrence

Marguerite Daisies dropping a curtsy to shiny sun

a night retreat, then paths of charm to run

One rare of gems from The Master of the Universe

poets ever carving its ineffable beauty in verse

Artists blend their appealing hues and rising perceptions

a work of Art of emotional power and pure impressions

Beholding in awe and gratitude such a bliss

many of God's grace and blessings I miss.

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Valsa George January 2, 2022 at 3:38 AM A leisurely amble through pathways enjoying the beauty of creation and inhaling the salubrious air is a heavenly experience that drowns our angst and heals our frayed nerves. For a poet like you it will be a wonderful experience filling your heart with awe and delight beholding God's wonderful craftsmanship. Besma, enjoyed the lovely setting and the thoughts you shared Besma Riabi Dziri January 5, 2022 at 11:35 AM Dear Valsa, I highly appreciate your honouring visits and I tremendously enjoy your uplifting feedbacks.. thank you so much is not enough.. I'm deeply grateful to you for granting me your time and beauty to greatly support my humble poetry.. my deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Morgana Moon June 11, 2020 at 11:21 AM "poets ever carving its ineffable beauty in verse Artists blend their appealing hues and rising perceptions" STUNNING!! Besma Riabi Dziri July 12, 2020 at 3:08 PM Morgana, so much obliged to you for the beauty of your feedback and the genuineness of your feelings! Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

Robert Lindley May 15, 2020 at 4:56 PM My friend, a feast, a sumptuous meal is this graceful and very enlightening artistic piece! Such imagery and dance of a true poetic heart and soul! A great beauty, and a fav... God bless.. Besma Riabi Dziri May 16, 2020 at 8:55 AM An enlightened soul and enlightening poet granting me the honour of such a wonderful feedback on my humble work! So pleased and humbled.. thank you so much, Robert for your generosity and remarkable humility.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Timothy Hicks May 12, 2020 at 3:15 PM This reads like honey from the lips when spoken aloud. A magical trip through an enchanted pathway of flowers... your words pull me in through your great execution of language. I wonder what else you have written... this was a treat. Besma Riabi Dziri May 16, 2020 at 8:52 AM I am receiving a so elegant poetry rewarding my humble words! Timothy, I'm so honoured by your visit and generous compliment! I can't find words to render the beauty of your grace.. thank you so much.. deeply humbled and touched.. My best regards and blessings.

Winged Warrior April 22, 2020 at 6:45 AM Truly a work of art, your verse is...well-executed my friend...stay safe...^WW^ :o) Besma Riabi Dziri May 16, 2020 at 8:40 AM Always a pleasure to have you read and appreciate what I compose of humble words from the heart.. thank you so much, Winged Warrior. Regards and blessings.

Silent One April 19, 2020 at 2:24 PM You have developed into an amazing poet...This poem is so beautiful and has so many great lines... You are right so many wonders we so not see and so many wonder some deny. . Besma Riabi Dziri April 20, 2020 at 9:49 AM Looking up to great poetry and highly gifted poets develops in my soul an aspiration for penning a work of Art that would be appreciated and be considered worth reading.. I'm so humbled and honoured by your sincere words of praise.. I'm so pleased by your elevating feedback, Silent One.. thank you so much for your great support. My deepest regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos April 18, 2020 at 2:49 PM A Shakespeare in the making - a serene, breathtaking poem dearest friend - you have such an artistic soul which becomes evident in every single poem you have written - may the spirit that you share with us and your awesome poetry live on for generations to come. Bless you dear soul sister love Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri April 19, 2020 at 5:06 AM I have a thrilling feeling as I think of myself as a composer of words.. on mountain nine when my so respected readers see me as a poetess.. What of feelings would flow into my soul when a dear soul sister and a highly talented poetess and a faithful reader to my humble poetry, compares me to one of the great poets who are peerless and above imitation! Dear Jenny, I'm filled with joy! Your compliment satisfies an aspiration for beauty! You help me a lot to look up to higher levels of fine and true poetry! So humbled, so touched, so grateful.. thank you so much! My most sincere regards. Love and hugs.

M. L. Kiser April 17, 2020 at 3:28 PM Ah, I needed that; tranquil words. Enjoyed. Besma Riabi Dziri April 19, 2020 at 4:52 AM In rough times, Nature is a balm for the spirit.. so happy you found my humble piece of Nature peaceful and soothing.. thank you so much, M.L.Kiser for your beautiful feedback! Regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit April 17, 2020 at 7:17 AM It is such a joy to amble with you in this beautiful scene you depicted, Besma. The imagery is simply awesome in serenity of nature. Indeed a bliss! Besma Riabi Dziri April 17, 2020 at 2:13 PM My honour and delight, dear Vijay! Sharing the bliss of a generous Nature along with the wonders of poetry is a soothing and healing blessing from God.. thank you so much for so delightful a response and highly appreciated a support! Best regards and blessings.

Tom Cunningham April 16, 2020 at 2:14 PM There is so much beauty in our world Besma, we only have to open our eyes and be grateful for all the treasures around us that God has given us. Stay safe. Tom Besma Riabi Dziri April 17, 2020 at 4:09 AM Wonder and blessings are within our reach and breath! Just we are to appreciate and be ever grateful! Thank you so much, Tom, for always honouring my humble work with so generous a presence and response.. My deepest regards and blessings.