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Cosmic Wonder

when I look up at the milky way
and the nebulousness beyond
my heart skips a beat in awe
i see the miracle of life
the timelessness of splendor
i see a grandiose enigma
the vastness of eternity
and mystery of infinity
i see the magic of creation
recognizing the authorship
of an omnipotent mastermind
in the most cosmic way
providential ubiquitous
i feel the mystique of his love



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~MINDFULLY~ 2021

Submitted on February 8, 2019 for contest TELL ME- WHAT DO YOU SEE sponsored by JAMES EDWARD LEE SR  -  RANKED 3RD

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

appreciationcreationgodinspirationalspiritualfree verse

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/9/2019 2:47:00 PM

I'm racking up, "Fav's" of yours today. Love this.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2019 3:48:00 PM

Awesome, ML. It's so wonderful that my poetry connects with you.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/9/2019 1:00:00 AM

Beautifully done, Line. I think you can drop the mike or if you are Jerry Lee Lewis, set the piano on fire.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2019 1:07:00 AM

LOL Thanks, Caren, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 2/8/2019 11:34:00 PM

I believe the Milky Way looks 'milky' because it's a disc, and we are seeing it from the edge, thus, the density of concentration of stars seems greater. Anyway, I love this poem, especially 'providential ubiquitous'! It gives me faith, and I really needed that, today! Thank You!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2019 1:07:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrew.