Cosmic Wonder

when I look up at the milky way
and the nebulousness beyond
my heart skips a beat in awe
i see the miracle of life
the timelessness of splendor
i see a grandiose enigma
the vastness of eternity
and mystery of infinity
i see the magic of creation
recognizing the authorship
of an omnipotent mastermind
in the most cosmic way
providential ubiquitous
i feel the mystique of his love



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~MINDFULLY~ 2021

Submitted on February 8, 2019 for contest TELL ME- WHAT DO YOU SEE sponsored by JAMES EDWARD LEE SR  -  RANKED 3RD

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/9/2019 2:47:00 PM
I'm racking up, "Fav's" of yours today. Love this.
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Date: 2/9/2019 3:48:00 PM
Awesome, ML. It's so wonderful that my poetry connects with you.
Date: 2/9/2019 1:00:00 AM
Beautifully done, Line. I think you can drop the mike or if you are Jerry Lee Lewis, set the piano on fire.
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Date: 2/9/2019 1:07:00 AM
LOL Thanks, Caren, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 2/8/2019 11:34:00 PM
I believe the Milky Way looks 'milky' because it's a disc, and we are seeing it from the edge, thus, the density of concentration of stars seems greater. Anyway, I love this poem, especially 'providential ubiquitous'! It gives me faith, and I really needed that, today! Thank You!
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Date: 2/9/2019 1:07:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrew.
Date: 2/8/2019 10:40:00 PM
Beautifully put. Cosmic Wonder flows smoothly and is so well thought out. Lot of luck in the contest. Should be a winner. Peace, Love and Joy.
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Date: 2/8/2019 11:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for your most appreciate visit and compliment.
Date: 2/8/2019 10:13:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/8/2019 11:03:00 PM
Thank you, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.
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