Best Awaken Poems


Awaken the Dawn

The east began blushing behind the trees
While the moon hung over the lea
And the velvet of night turned to sapphire hue
Like the blue of a newborn sea.

No breeze cared to move the whispering leaves
But they whispered themselves alone
And the first rays of sun kissed the cool of the morn
Before mounting the aerial throne. 

The dew-spangled grass glittered pure and unspoilt
As if hundreds of diamonds were strewn,
Or like dozens of tears had been carefully dropped
From the pearlescent eyes of the moon. 

Blue shadows hung shyly beneath the boughs 
Of the emerald, sylvan-king;
The ancient pine swayed and held his court
With the swallows on the wing. 

With a glorious, final shout of gold
The sun was now enthroned
While the world rejoiced like a sinner saved
That the night's dark was atoned.

Premium Member Watching a Farm Awaken in Early Spring

I love to watch a farm awaken in the early spring,
Especially as the birds in the forest happily sing, 
The farm knows how to be itself, profound and true,
Like the faded red barn, quietly beholding the view.

In this moment, the farm finds its serenity,
Between sips of morning coffee, so heavenly,
Tempting songs of cardinals, a melodious cheer,
Chips and whistles carried by the breezy air.

Who wouldn't be captivated by this wondrous sight,
As darkness surrenders to the emerging light,
The old barn stands, with no complaints or pleas,
No need for a fresh coat of red, at ease it sees.

The morning fog, a gentle, subtle trace,
In the fields unplowed, it finds its place,
Soon, corn will grow in rows so neat,
And crows will gather for a sumptuous treat.

Gently I inhale the farm's awakening charm,
Especially in the early spring's tranquil arm,
Where the soul knows no bounds, it's free,
Across an undefined horizon, a painting, you see.

Quiet repose, a vastness, the soul's delight,
A pretty picture as the new day takes flight,
The farm awakens with beauty untold,
In the early spring, where dreams unfold.

Premium Member Engaging the Senses

I believe that long ago, the universe’s most artistic landscaper 
mixed woodlands with tropics, rock formations with mountains,
volcanic craters with lush valleys, and cascading waterfalls with
pristine still waters before blending all with an ocean and 
topping it off with sunshine.  Man named this place, Hawaii.  
The absolute awe that defines Hawaii, is bound to awaken 
any slumbering faith and rejuvenate any emotion grown numb 
to the brilliance of life.  While visiting the Islands of Hawaii, I 
absorbed a joy and wonder from the plants that delightfully 
startled my own routine senses.  I have been blessed in my life 
to personally view beautiful and eye-catching plant life in many 
regions of the world.  In Hawaii, the plants adorning and tending 
the islands are the most dramatic, glorious and enchanting that 
my vision has ever drunk.  There is an otherness to Hawaiian flora 
that suggests plants are empowered with the ability to uplift, 
stimulate and captivate even the most withdrawn human vision.

entrancing colors
paint a wonderland terrain ~
landscaped free of charge

bodacious flora
thrives in hawaii's landscape ~
no mute legs walk there


Awaken

Fever dreams and rusted scissors. There’s only two ways to look at this night. I awake only to have a gritty taste of bone dust in my throat. A reminder of events past. Sweating plagues, rebuilding strength for the hunt that’s to come. I can barely open my eyes. Thoughts of old cloud my judgment. I shouldn’t think these things, but the thoughts commence infernally. My glands are swollen. I know there’s an infection within, Viral?? Mental? I’ve seen these nightmares up close and have fed deep into their madness. It’s autumn now and yet I long to sit in the garden. Bleed upon the stone, Lost in lucid trance. No more memories, no more hauntings. I must purge these inside weaknesses to start anew. Arise structured forms, sway and move at my command for I am creator. This sickness shall fall and wither as the leaves of change. Skin, fall, wither so the insects will consume. Light dwelling within must surface and speak.  I no longer fear change, I embrace it.     

  Spread my ashes in the bloom of nature’s glow, for Memories on wings of a hymn shall be rebirth. Give power to symbols and names.  The children swarm down the swamp’s end, Awaiting the movement.  Unsung, Blood fills our lungs as we go. The whispers from the dead keep me up at night. There’s fear outside your door. That the devil may bite. Reside in my garden and drink deep the waters of my insanity.    
Buried within one’s self is the creator of existence. A god inside an animal. Acknowledgments bring growth. Watch it flourish.

Premium Member When Eyes Awaken

Unto the dawning light opening curtains 
one thousand dreams answered 
within your beam angel rays touch deeply 

Under the folds of love apple of the eyes 
as our lips join golden delicious bites 
a silent whisper sighs softly an air 

Escaping gently in song breathtaking beauty 
saying I love you until the breath dies 
my mornings bliss your sunlight will forever shine

Premium Member Awaken For School

awaken for school-dad is there with hot coffee


Date Written: 2/26/2021
Note: In junior high and high school my dad would wake me up each school day with a hot cup of coffee. A dad's loving touch.

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Without Saying I LOVE YOU Contest Judged:3/3/2021                                                          Sponsored by: JCB Brul


Premium Member Awaken From Within a Tomb

LOVE'S LOST IN THE LAND OF NOT 
John (Winged Warrior)- we've not forgot 
Your heartfelt comments and lovely, 
Soul... 
A beacon of light- the way you'd Roll 

He'd spread his wings open wide 
IN THE GALLOWS WHERE WE RESIDE
Across the oceans and over the,  
Seas.. 
His writings ride amongst the breezes 

He came to me in my dream last night 
To wish us well with love and light 
AS WE JOURNEY FROM OUR MAIDEN. 
WOMB... 
To keep our writes like hearts abloom  

From the womb- till his depart 
He left behind, from within his heart 
All his poetry for us to keep, 
When... 
THE CURTAIN FALLS WITHIN OUR SLEEP 


*In dedication to John (Winged Warrior) 


The TITLE and the HIGHLIGHTED LINES are taken from John's very first poem written here in PoetrySoup- titled "Love's Lost"

John had amazingly but not surprisingly won the POTW honors with this brilliant poem. I am sure I speak from most of us who knew you, John. When I say R.I.P. you genuine soul. For those of you who are new to PS I urge you to read some of John's stunning poetry.   


LOVE'S LOST 

We awaken from within a tomb 
As we journey from our maiden womb 
Specks of dust within a storm 
Like a shattered symphony in it's mourn 
Love's lost in the land of not 
Ancient ruins that time forgot 
As the serpent lays the road ahead 
We count love's layers that are shed 
In the gallows where we reside 
Love and fear live side by side 
We shake hands with destiny's vine 
Where past and present intertwine 
The curtain falls within our sleep 
As love's lost approach the deep 
Can hope survive in the dragons den 
For these are tales of sword and pen 

*(Written by Winged Warrior) 
January 24th, 2016

Premium Member Awaken

I drift on a cloud above all the physical pain
I am eased by the wind and released like a balloon
Blue skies surround me with peace in the air
All I see are prominent, beautiful views below
I drift on a cloud for many miles
Not a seed of worry is in my mind
As it changes formation, I rest, I dream, I hope
Then, I hear the soft wind chime sing
I am awakened to relief of recovery 

Heidi Sands 

11/2/22

Premium Member Awaken Bagpipes

awaken bagpipes
riled up in broguish accent
traversing drawbridge
of Cawdor Castle
enchanting chanter and drones

As Long As I Awaken

Some days 
              are bright and sunny,
          While others
              pour the rain.
          Some days 
              are just confusing,
          And strain 
              a tired brain.

          Some days
              are overwhelming,
          While others
              bore the dead.
          Some days
              are aggravating,
          And make
              you wish for bed.
        
           Some days
               are made for working,
           With others
               meant to rest.
            But the day
                that I awaken,
            Is by far
                the very best.

                                       written by, 
                                    Sheri L. Evans

February 5, 2003

Awaken To the Truth

Awareness of everything

Wide open eyes

Asking questions

Kiss the conscious mind

Enabling the self to thrive

Never doubt your light

Time to rise up and revive

Outlandish imagery

Transcend the ordinary

Half-hearted is no good

Entice the passion from within you

Trust your existential self

Resonate ambitions of life

Understand it's with you

Transform everything you do

Hope grows when love is renewed.

Awaken, My Soul

Awaken, my soul, to the rhythm of love, 
Let the breeze kiss you with the song it plays, 
Hearken to its sighs of susurration, 
Let the flower of kindness bloom afresh, 
Shaken when you are, hold fast to firm faith, 
Let the music of hope enliven you, 
Darken not your thoughts with negative gloom, 
Let passion for goodness rule inside you, 
Broken trust, revive with forgiving mind, 
Let the whispers of the wind arouse you, 
Stricken with affection, be Nature's friend, 
Let the sun shine on you with rays of grace, 
Unspoken words cannot hurt you or heal, 
Let the feeling of peace wash over you, 
Quicken, my soul, to the sound of zephyr, 
Let it caress and cleanse you from within.

Premium Member Some never awaken

Some never awaken.
In the endless stream of my consciousness, amidst shadows that open like flowers
In the diffuse light of our drowsy existence,
I also hibernate, a traveler wandering through the crystal labyrinth of time.
Restlessness envelops me like a dark wave,
Each minute slipping into the abyss of monotony.
I no longer feel joy, only faint echoes flickering
In the deep darkness, like the lost whispers of frozen dreams.
Life flows past me, a river of translucent shadows,
Work, roads, familiar faces,
Shadows of a withered existence, wax dolls
Dancing a silent ball in the stearic moonlight.
But then, like a golden spark in the void,
A word, a verse, a melody,
Pierces the thick veil of my hibernation,
A shock treatment that stirs my frozen soul.
I wake up, startle as if I had seen
A falling star in an endless sky.
Blood flows in my veins again,
The warmth of life envelopes me, the scent of pleasure
Blooms on my lips like a forgotten smile.
Through open eyes, I watch these shadows
Carve their paths on darkened trails.
Some will never awaken,
But I have been blessed with the gift
Of feeling my being reborn.
Now I live every moment, every pulse
As a dance of the spirit on the edge of eternity.
Maybe one day, I too will become a shadow again,
But until then, I run through life,
Able to feel, to love, to burn.
Some never awaken,
But I have awakened,
And life flows within me,
A pure flame that defies the darkness.
© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Awaken Screaming

     confusion slips into our beds
        games the minds of gentle heads

     twists familiars to never-beens
        personas dark mask every scene

     far away from hearth and home
        on echoes' endless shouts I roam

     in vain retrieve my former life
        confusion wakes ~ a butcher knife

Premium Member I Awaken

I Awaken a child
to the nearness of my mother;
Feeling her breath of warmth--

(apparent is the joy
on her face
a labor well done);

my eyes maturing 
not quite focus
I trustingly reach 
for her special day
and mine
our discovery;

it is the grasp
of a newborn,

and the surrendering
of an 
infinite universe
to love....

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