Awaken Bagpipes

awaken bagpipes riled up in broguish accent traversing drawbridge of Cawdor Castle enchanting chanter and drones

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/24/2022 6:48:00 PM

I can hear the unique sound of those bagpipes between the lines of your fine poem, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2022 7:23:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/24/2022 7:47:00 AM

This is cheerful :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2022 5:13:00 PM

Thank you, Swetha!

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/24/2022 7:34:00 AM

Love bagpipes! I can hear them now, crossing the bridge. The tenacity of the ancient wood, and rattle of metal brackets and chains vibrating in sync, as marchers proudly enter the castle, dressed in bright regalia. Love your poem!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2022 5:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for adding to the music! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/24/2022 5:50:00 AM

I want to put on my Celtic garb and dance to the tune of the bagpipes I heard as I read this Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2022 5:20:00 PM

Thank you…lol

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/24/2022 12:29:00 AM

Love the Celtic image Kim, and I love the sound of the pipes, my name is of Scottish ancestry so it's in the blood. Hope you're well Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2022 4:42:00 AM

Thank you, Tom! Doing fine and hope you are too.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/23/2022 8:19:00 PM

Love the flavour of your Tanka, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2022 4:35:00 AM

Thank you, Harry!