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Awaken For School

awaken for school-dad is there with hot coffee Date Written: 2/26/2021 Note: In junior high and high school my dad would wake me up each school day with a hot cup of coffee. A dad's loving touch. 1 Place Without Saying I LOVE YOU Contest Judged:3/3/2021 Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Date: 3/20/2021 6:18:00 AM
love this show don't tell poem ~ congrats on your top win, Paula
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2021 8:37:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. It is the little things that we remember and that really count. My dad was one in a million. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Date: 3/6/2021 1:40:00 AM
This is too good.. yes nothing like love of parents.. Congrats on your win Paula.. Hugs ~ Ani
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2021 7:03:00 AM
Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Yes, my dad was one in a million. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 3/4/2021 6:33:00 AM
Hi Paula, This is so touching and heartwarming, it caused me to think about my on dad.Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/4/2021 1:03:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this true write. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 3/4/2021 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Paula, great to have such a wonderful dad:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/4/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. It is a great memory. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 3/4/2021 3:11:00 AM
- Back with congrats, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/4/2021 1:00:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day with hugs...............
Date: 3/2/2021 6:01:00 AM
That is certainly a reminder of how hard it was to wake up to go to school, Paula! Afforded ample time to open eyes:) I'm sure we were not the only ones to be spoilt! Regards // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2021 4:53:00 PM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. 5:30 AM came too early. It has been a great memory. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Date: 2/28/2021 7:24:00 PM
Paula, Now there is a Monoku in education, with a teaspoon of love. -Richard
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/1/2021 7:55:00 AM
Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, with a teaspoon of love and a teaspoon of sugar in the mug. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Date: 2/28/2021 6:33:00 PM
this is so sweet. Wish I'd had that with my dad.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/1/2021 7:53:00 AM
Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this write. We all have different lives to live. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Date: 2/27/2021 1:23:00 PM
Nice monoku; a wonderful memory of you and your dad. When I read this in my mind I heard the tune, " The best part of waking up is Foldgers in your cup." - Jacob
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2021 10:56:00 AM
Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write from the past with my dad. Amazing how commercials like "Folgers in your cup" will stay with people. Guess that is what makes a great product jingle. Have a blessed day/week...............
Date: 2/26/2021 2:53:00 PM
My Dad couldn't make coffee, but I can still relate to the special attention a father pays to his daughter. You are blessed with a wonderful father! Hugs, Carolyn
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2021 6:50:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write from the past with my Dad. He has been gone for many years but the memory lives on. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs.....................
Date: 2/26/2021 2:02:00 PM
Just like the coffee, this leaves a warm feeling Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2021 6:45:00 AM
Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write from the past. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 2/26/2021 11:25:00 AM
- Coffee is important ... we just have to have it to wake up, Paula :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2021 6:43:00 AM
Thanks for your note. It was good to hear from you. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs................