Paula Goldsmith Poet Monoku

Awaken For School

awaken for school-dad is there with hot coffee


Date Written: 2/26/2021
Note: In junior high and high school my dad would wake me up each school day with a hot cup of coffee. A dad's loving touch.

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Without Saying I LOVE YOU Contest Judged:3/3/2021                                                          Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Line Gauthier March 20, 2021 at 6:18 AM love this show don't tell poem ~ congrats on your top win, Paula Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2021 at 8:37 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. It is the little things that we remember and that really count. My dad was one in a million. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Anitha Jayasankar March 6, 2021 at 1:40 AM This is too good.. yes nothing like love of parents.. Congrats on your win Paula.. Hugs ~ Ani Paula Goldsmith March 6, 2021 at 7:03 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Yes, my dad was one in a million. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.................

Alexis Y. March 4, 2021 at 6:33 AM Hi Paula, This is so touching and heartwarming, it caused me to think about my on dad.Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis Paula Goldsmith March 4, 2021 at 1:03 PM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this true write. Have a blessed day.................

Joanna Daniel March 4, 2021 at 4:46 AM Congratulations on your win, Paula, great to have such a wonderful dad:) Paula Goldsmith March 4, 2021 at 1:02 PM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. It is a great memory. Have a blessed day.................

Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2021 at 3:11 AM - Back with congrats, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith March 4, 2021 at 1:00 PM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day with hugs...............

Paul Callus March 2, 2021 at 6:01 AM That is certainly a reminder of how hard it was to wake up to go to school, Paula! Afforded ample time to open eyes:) I'm sure we were not the only ones to be spoilt! Regards // paul Paula Goldsmith March 2, 2021 at 4:53 PM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. 5:30 AM came too early. It has been a great memory. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Quoth Theraven February 28, 2021 at 7:24 PM Paula, Now there is a Monoku in education, with a teaspoon of love. -Richard Paula Goldsmith March 1, 2021 at 7:55 AM Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, with a teaspoon of love and a teaspoon of sugar in the mug. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2021 at 6:33 PM this is so sweet. Wish I'd had that with my dad. Paula Goldsmith March 1, 2021 at 7:53 AM Thanks, for writing. Glad you like this write. We all have different lives to live. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Carolyn Devonshire February 26, 2021 at 2:53 PM My Dad couldn't make coffee, but I can still relate to the special attention a father pays to his daughter. You are blessed with a wonderful father! Hugs, Carolyn Paula Goldsmith February 27, 2021 at 6:50 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write from the past with my Dad. He has been gone for many years but the memory lives on. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs.....................

Gary Radice February 26, 2021 at 2:02 PM Just like the coffee, this leaves a warm feeling Paula. Paula Goldsmith February 27, 2021 at 6:45 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write from the past. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................

Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2021 at 11:25 AM - Coffee is important ... we just have to have it to wake up, Paula :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith February 27, 2021 at 6:43 AM Thanks for your note. It was good to hear from you. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs................