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Unrhymed tercets

When Eyes Awaken

Unto the dawning light opening curtains 
one thousand dreams answered 
within your beam angel rays touch deeply 

Under the folds of love apple of the eyes 
as our lips join golden delicious bites 
a silent whisper sighs softly an air 

Escaping gently in song breathtaking beauty 
saying I love you until the breath dies 
my mornings bliss your sunlight will forever shine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Fiery Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 7:37 PM
This is a romantic piece Liam.... mornings bliss your sunlight will forever shine... You have a power to engage your readers... A7 from me.. ~Red
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 11:56 AM
- Eternal love in your heart live .... beautiful poem, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 2, 2016 at 1:14 AM
"Escaping gently in song breathtaking beauty /saying I love you until the breath dies / my mornings bliss your sunlight will forever shine" .......These are beautiful lines, love this image from you sweet
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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