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I Awaken

I Awaken a child to the nearness of my mother; Feeling her breath of warmth-- (apparent is the joy on her face a labor well done); my eyes maturing not quite focus I trustingly reach for her special day and mine our discovery; it is the grasp of a newborn, and the surrendering of an infinite universe to love....

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Date: 1/3/2022 11:20:00 AM
This is lovely and profound, yet with over 1700 views is mine the first comment? What are folks doing out there in poetrysoup land?
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/3/2022 4:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, L.J.. I always loved this work. Could never understand why so few comments and yet so many reads. Well, your beautiful comment will be treasured. Bless you, bless you, bless you! Joe.

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