Awaken

I drift on a cloud above all the physical pain I am eased by the wind and released like a balloon Blue skies surround me with peace in the air All I see are prominent, beautiful views below I drift on a cloud for many miles Not a seed of worry is in my mind As it changes formation, I rest, I dream, I hope Then, I hear the soft wind chime sing I am awakened to relief of recovery Heidi Sands 11/2/22

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/30/2023 11:56:00 AM

Hello Heidi, It is a lovely way to wake upIt is a lovely dream. Hugs. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/2/2023 11:41:00 AM

Hello Heidi, You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene\

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/30/2023 1:42:00 PM

Thank you very much Darlene. Hugs :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/3/2022 3:00:00 PM

Good to hear of your reviving interlude here Heidi, good news is really needed ( more than we realise )

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/3/2022 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Joe. I think we all need as most good news as possible in times like this. I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a nice evening :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/2/2022 1:30:00 PM

Those dreams are so soothing and on awakening and our spirits are totally revived. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/2/2022 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Tom. I hope you are having a nice day :)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 11/2/2022 12:17:00 PM

Calm and Serenity are healing. Well expressed in this piece, Heidi. // Barry

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/2/2022 12:32:00 PM

Thank you Barry. It is. I am trying to focus on that :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/2/2022 10:46:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I like this poem. It is beautifully done. I read this poem twice and now will make it my fav. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/2/2022 12:19:00 PM

Hello Heidi , you are very welcome. Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/2/2022 10:48:00 AM

Hi Darlene That is so nice to hear. Thank you for your kind comment and the Fave. :) hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/2/2022 10:24:00 AM

Healing and restoration so beautiful expressed Heidi. I love your metaphoric cloud of the healing process expressed with wonderful, innovative, fresh images. Thank you for sharing this serene picture. Blessings! I floated right with you!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/2/2022 10:35:00 AM

Thank you Sam I am happy to see your comment. You are welcome :)