Heidi Sands Poet Free verse

Awaken

I drift on a cloud above all the physical pain
I am eased by the wind and released like a balloon
Blue skies surround me with peace in the air
All I see are prominent, beautiful views below
I drift on a cloud for many miles
Not a seed of worry is in my mind
As it changes formation, I rest, I dream, I hope
Then, I hear the soft wind chime sing
I am awakened to relief of recovery 

Heidi Sands 

11/2/22

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 30, 2023 at 11:56 AM Hello Heidi, It is a lovely way to wake upIt is a lovely dream. Hugs. /Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu July 2, 2023 at 11:41 AM Hello Heidi, You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene\ Heidi Sands June 30, 2023 at 1:42 PM Thank you very much Darlene. Hugs :)

Joe Maverick November 3, 2022 at 3:00 PM Good to hear of your reviving interlude here Heidi, good news is really needed ( more than we realise ) Heidi Sands November 3, 2022 at 3:18 PM Thank you Joe. I think we all need as most good news as possible in times like this. I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a nice evening :)

Tom Cunningham November 2, 2022 at 1:30 PM Those dreams are so soothing and on awakening and our spirits are totally revived. Tom Heidi Sands November 2, 2022 at 1:41 PM Thank you Tom. I hope you are having a nice day :)

Barry Stebbings November 2, 2022 at 12:17 PM Calm and Serenity are healing. Well expressed in this piece, Heidi. // Barry Heidi Sands November 2, 2022 at 12:32 PM Thank you Barry. It is. I am trying to focus on that :)

Darlene De Beaulieu November 2, 2022 at 10:46 AM Hello Heidi, I like this poem. It is beautifully done. I read this poem twice and now will make it my fav. Hugs Darlene De Beaulieu November 2, 2022 at 12:19 PM Hello Heidi , you are very welcome. Hugs. Heidi Sands November 2, 2022 at 10:48 AM Hi Darlene That is so nice to hear. Thank you for your kind comment and the Fave. :) hugs

Sam Kauffman November 2, 2022 at 10:24 AM Healing and restoration so beautiful expressed Heidi. I love your metaphoric cloud of the healing process expressed with wonderful, innovative, fresh images. Thank you for sharing this serene picture. Blessings! I floated right with you! Heidi Sands November 2, 2022 at 10:35 AM Thank you Sam I am happy to see your comment. You are welcome :)