Best 5 7 5 Poems
ancient branches break
with weight of winter season
fresh born fawn stands straight
heaven touches earth
corrupt clouds torn asunder
rain of revival
no caps
5-7-5
Wooden window creaks -
Tree branch swing hanging lowly
Peeking sun thaws snow
ICED, admonition …
Cut with colon dash elipsis,
no rhymes are served up!
For Haiku contest
The ship drifts to sea
Behind left is a life loved
Though it just can't be
God is kind and wise
Food, shelter, shade, play, paper
Trees are versatile
Holidays gone past
Hearts ate sad, yet happy
Why not in between?
broken barn in wind
under rusted weathervane
death song squeaks all day
fragmented droplets
reflect, refract light through prisms
bent spectrum delights
a true haiku should only be about nature i. freaking e.
ROOTS GREW LEAVES OF LOVE
WEEDS TRIED TO STRANGLE THOSE LEAVES
ROOTS OF ROMANCE WON
if you people weren't so adverse to reading me i could teach you all a lot of interesting facts, for instance, in the entire English language which i revere there is only one adjective that should never be modified by an adverb and that singular adjective is the word "unique". one should never say "that woman is VERY unique" the chick is either unique or she ain't unique...the word VERY is inherent in the word "unique" itself...one day, if i feel you are reading me enough and i deem you all worthy i will post a unique poem entitled "A UNIQUE EUNICH" also...take the word "LAUGHTER" AND LEAVE IT JUST AS IT IS ONLY ADD THE LETTER "S" TO THE FIRST LETTER "L" AND YOU GET.......
(c) PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~
all about nature
vivid lines of imagery
verb free the hardest
I swung at heaven
And now I write poetry
Such a loving God
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litttle time to pay
rent to the landlord's unknown
wont see me again
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funky basslines race
through a weird obsticale course
called the mind of james
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2 minutes to go
a masterpiece wasn't wrote so
aint got no mojo
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i once read this comment that said
you and your haikus
then i get the definition
it was like my haikus are a cancer without a chance for remission
yet and still they swirl in my mind like a green candy cane
i reply to the comment by saying
what about you and your haikus
then i highlight certain parts of the definition
i read other haikus like a textbook without a sedative feeling
your style inspires my style....only mine is slightly left of your corner write
how can she speak up
without breaking the format
confined by learned rules
words picked carefully
essence of mind and message
precision poet
Five seven five
For rhyming senyrus I strive
Aint no stinking jive
by Robb A. Kopp