5-7-5

Five seven five
For rhyming senyrus I strive
Aint no stinking jive


by Robb A. Kopp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 1:47 PM
I think rhyme adds a nice quality to the haiku and senryu, Robb. To me they read better that way. If this is for the contest, best wishes for sucess. Love, Carolyn
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September 15, 2010 at 12:38 PM
OK u did all the things Chris did not want but is cool anyway... enjoyed u poking fun at the form and syllable count... but to enter read his rules again luv.. or it will get disqualified ..see his blog..
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September 15, 2010 at 12:04 PM
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