5-7-5 Senryu's In 10 Minutes

I swung at heaven
And now I write poetry
Such a loving God
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litttle time to pay
rent to the landlord's unknown
wont see me again
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funky basslines race
through a weird obsticale course
called the mind of james
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2 minutes to go 
a masterpiece wasn't wrote so
aint got no mojo
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 21, 2009 at 1:38 PM
Enjoyed this one. I think you've got that mojo going. Thanks for giving me a chance to chuckle and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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April 15, 2009 at 1:54 PM
good job. jhl
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April 12, 2009 at 3:12 AM
Nice sequence James, you have the form down, great flow. Happy Easter to you and your family...Raul
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