5-7-5

all about nature
vivid lines of imagery
verb free the hardest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:39 PM
This is a very intelligent, interesting Haiku Warren. Well written with carefully chosen words! Thank you for sharing.
Doll Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Christina, thanks do much for your comments and visit. It's greatly appreciated ~ Warren
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 5:54 AM
Clever and fun.
Doll Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Richard, thanks for your comments and visit. Glad that you returned to poetry soup~ Warren.
Gentile Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 4:25 AM
Terrific outlay of the ingredients of a haiku! You would know as you certainly have written some great ones, including the one above!! Happy Thursday Warren !!
Doll Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Hi Mike, great to hear from you. Thank you for your positive comments and visit. Happy Thursday to you too~ Warren
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August 3, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Wow!! Haiku are not easy for sure even though they seem to be until the writing begins. Thanks for sharing this one with us. If for a contest, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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August 4, 2023 at 8:25 AM
Hi Sara, thanks for your comments and visit. I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks again for the visit. All the best~ Warren.
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