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Wooden Window , Traditional 5-7-5

Wooden window creaks -
Tree branch swing hanging lowly 
Peeking sun thaws snow

farmpeaceskysnowspringhaiku

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Skat A

June 9, 2016 at 10:32 PM

What a fun way to read a haiku David. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

September 20, 2013 at 5:32 PM

David, stopping by to say hi... thank you for the nice Texas Haiku.... xox~ Linda

David Graham

October 1, 2013 at 10:26 AM

Hello hello and your of course welcome :) How are things going Linda?

Poet Destroyer A

September 14, 2013 at 1:03 PM

Waiting on my Texas Haiku.... xox..Linda

David Graham

September 16, 2013 at 6:37 AM

Wooden window creaks- Tree branch swing hanging lowly Horses chasing shade .... :)

Poet Destroyer A

September 13, 2013 at 10:16 AM

Good day David.. :-) I know the squeaking sound... however I don't know the snow.. I'm from the lower end of Texas, down here we are not blessed with such amazing imagery. nicely pinned haiku. always~ LINDA

David Graham

September 13, 2013 at 10:51 AM

Good morning Linda :) Thank you again for your kindness. Honestly thee forms are new to me. I come from a song writing background...very diff. Maybe I should make a Texas haiku version 3rd line...Horses chasing shade :) I'm in Virginia myself but spent many years up north in the New England area. Hope your day is cheery! :)

Wooden Window , Traditional 5-7-5

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