5/7/5 Haiku With a Kigo

ICED, admonition …
                       
                             Cut with colon dash elipsis,

                                                                          no rhymes are served up!


For Haiku contest
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May 14, 2010 at 4:06 PM
You have me chuckling. I think you addressed the rules. Fun poem. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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May 14, 2010 at 10:17 AM
well done John, enjoyed your haiku, have a nice Friday,..p..d
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