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He showed up dressed in black leather Dates aren’t meant to last forever It wasn’t just fun He was on the run A hostage date was --quite clever

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/16/2022 2:03:00 PM

Hilarity at her best!

Bill Baker
Date: 9/16/2022 3:21:00 PM

Thanks, Caren, glad you liked it. :-) Bill

Valsa George

Date: 9/11/2022 8:15:00 PM

What an interesting limerick ! This has brought a smile to my face. Thank you Bill for sharing this hilarious writing ! All blessings, sweet friend !

Bill Baker
Date: 9/12/2022 6:39:00 AM

I know it was a little different, I'm trying to write a few Limericks, with a little humor in them. Glad you got a smile out of it. Hugs, Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2022 11:11:00 AM

Whoa!! Interesting work penned here. I enjoyed reading it. I don't think I would want that date. Thanks for sharing this one and for stopping by my blog. We did have a nice day. Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 9/4/2022 4:11:00 PM

Woderful and again congratulations on your 60th. Sara and I celebrate 40 years together next Apr 30th. Thanks for the visit and comments, Sara. Enjoy the rest of your day! Bill

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/4/2022 4:53:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. How adorable is this. Very. Yes, the harley date to last forevermore. You say the date was clever. I say you were clever within your entry and scene. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings now and always. (smile) PS, here is a toast to the harley date (another smile)

Bill Baker
Date: 9/4/2022 8:21:00 AM

Thanks for the sweet comments, Lisa. It probably turned out well in the end. Glad you got a few smiles out of it my friend. :-) Have a pleasent day! Hugs, Bill

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/3/2022 7:04:00 PM

I love this Bill…still laughing! Very funny and with perfect imagery. Blessings xxoo I think I have to fave this one!

Bill Baker
Date: 9/4/2022 8:22:00 AM

Thank you for the FAV, Connie and for reading my poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/3/2022 3:39:00 PM

A hostage to a date..' Such a peculiar fate.' Here's hoping my comment gives you a smile At least for a while; Bill.'

Bill Baker
Date: 9/3/2022 4:16:00 PM

It worked, Joe. An unusual poem from my pen. lol Thanks for reading and commenting my friend. Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/2/2022 7:54:00 PM

I pictures Al Bundy slamming the door in his face…lol!

Bill Baker
Date: 9/3/2022 2:58:00 PM

Made me giggle, Kim. Al Bundy would have slammed the door in his face. lol Thanks for reading my friend. Bill

Len Gasun

Date: 9/2/2022 7:24:00 PM

A delightful and well-crafted poem my dear friend Bill. The last line paints smiles on my face. I enjoyed your poem my dear friend. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Bill Baker
Date: 9/3/2022 3:00:00 PM

Happy you liked it, Len. A little different kind of poem for me, but I liked figuring out that last like. :-) Hugs, Bill

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/1/2022 6:10:00 PM

What a date it was, hostage or not who could resist a man dressed in black leather. A great Limerick Bill… Belle

Bill Baker
Date: 9/2/2022 5:52:00 AM

:-) Glad you liked it, Belle. Fun to think of and write. Hugs, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 9/1/2022 1:33:00 AM

So very witty and clever ! Unique too. Have a happy weekend dear Bill !

Bill Baker
Date: 9/1/2022 5:41:00 PM

Thanks, Valsa, You have a nice weekend too my friend. Bill

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/31/2022 6:02:00 PM

Great rhyme, all in fun I hope! Have a nice day! ;)

Bill Baker
Date: 9/1/2022 5:42:00 PM

It was, Anaya, made up for humor. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/31/2022 2:10:00 PM

Bill, the conclusion left me with a grin on my face. Wonderfully astute and humorous poetry. I had fun reading it, blessings my dear friend.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/1/2022 5:43:00 PM

Thanks, Lasaad, a litle humor for a change. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings My dear friend, Bill

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/31/2022 6:08:00 AM

This would really spark up a waning romance lol, Who can resist the bad boys. SuZ

Bill Baker
Date: 8/31/2022 11:39:00 AM

:-) Thanks for the comment, SuZ I liked it! Have a great day! Bill

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/30/2022 9:00:00 AM

Ha! Gotta watch those guys in black leather Bill. :) Linda

Bill Baker
Date: 8/30/2022 4:40:00 PM

Yep, some girls just fall for bad boys. lol Have a great week my friend, Bill

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/30/2022 5:38:00 AM

Love it, yes i agree this is so witty. Bill. Harry

Bill Baker
Date: 8/30/2022 4:39:00 PM

Thanks Harry, I thought the ending might add a little twist to the story. lol Thanks for the comment my friend. Bill

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/30/2022 4:47:00 AM

However did this come to you Bill! As so many have stated, clever indeed! Happy Tuesday!!

Bill Baker
Date: 8/30/2022 4:38:00 PM

Thinking about dates on a bike and wearing leathers, switched it around fromthe dates persepective and thought how can I make this humorous, a Limerick and wala. :-) Thanks for the comment, Mike. I've been have time issues again, hard toi find time to read,write, and answer comments. LOL Have a great wek my friend, Bill

Michael Tor

Date: 8/26/2022 8:28:00 PM

Bill the ending had me smiling . Great clever, witty, poem. Enjoyed reading, my frined...

Bill Baker
Date: 8/27/2022 7:31:00 AM

It always good to she you've visited and commented on my poems, Michael. It's hard when not feeling well. Bless you and strength and healing for you. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Gary Radice

Date: 8/26/2022 6:20:00 AM

..as was your poem Bill. :) Very clever actually. Cheers - Gary

Bill Baker
Date: 8/27/2022 7:31:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Gary. Thanks for the compliment. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/25/2022 1:46:00 PM

Not a date I would want, but some like the dangerous type~

Bill Baker
Date: 8/25/2022 4:26:00 PM

Me neither! lol Just trying to be humorous. Have a great weekend, Michelle. Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/24/2022 10:06:00 PM

Now that is an original idea, and clever to boot. Great limerick, Bill! ~ Gershon

Bill Baker
Date: 8/25/2022 4:28:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. I like the twist at the end. :-) Have a great weekend my friend. Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2022 3:51:00 PM

oh my, that is quite the situation. Good one, my friend.

Bill Baker
Date: 8/25/2022 4:28:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I was hoping to get a few smiles with the ending. Have a great weekend my friend. Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/24/2022 3:16:00 PM

Hello Bill, now that is clever. A hostage date. Wow! Clever! Your poetess friend. Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/25/2022 5:00:00 PM

Hello Bill, yes I enjoyed this poem. Your poetess friend, Darlene

Bill Baker
Date: 8/25/2022 4:29:00 PM

Glad you liked it my poetess friend. Have a great weekend! Bill

Eve Roper

Date: 8/24/2022 2:01:00 PM

Was the girl dressed as a man :) that would be cute ... Like the limerick.

Bill Baker
Date: 8/24/2022 2:58:00 PM

LOL that would be cute. Thanks for the humor, Eve. She was waiting for him to show up. :-) I didn't make that very clear did I? lol No it wasn't on purpose. Thanks for reading and commenting, Eve. Have a fun day! Bill