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The wayward wind whirled through all the thick trees, Purple butterflies fluttered in the dream, Ravenous rapture that had to appease, Sending the fairy into purple beam. Melodies cast thrilling waves of rapt joy, Enthralled, she drifted up towards the moon, Purple birds became her most gracious toys, In this rapt swoon, let it not end too soon. The wind was wayward, no more butterflies. Slowly dreamy she floated to the ground. The darkness of the forest hid the skies; She slept steadfast in rapt divine dreams drowned. Placed 1 17 February 2023 Writing Challenge -F Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/23/2023 6:00:00 PM
You should paint this picture. Beautifully done.
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Date: 2/23/2023 9:22:00 AM
Anything about fairies I love! A beautiful poem, Victor. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/23/2023 4:20:00 AM
Hello dear Victor. Well now, your creative mind and pen was with you in this entry. Truly. Allow me to say your words and execution were well thought out. This is poetry. Thank you for sharing. Have a beautiful and peaceful day. Love and Blessings always. (smile)
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/21/2023 12:17:00 PM
What a joyful fantasy Victor! So innovative and full of creative delight. Would make a wonderful children's story in shades of purple and mauve! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 2/21/2023 8:04:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2023 4:33:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved contest win, Victor.
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Date: 2/21/2023 2:43:00 AM
Victor, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge F Words, well done, I like your image too, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/20/2023 6:19:00 PM
Love the alliteration and repetition of 'purple' Victor. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/20/2023 3:51:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Victor a worthy choice for first place. Its a beautiful poem. Make sure you send it to your daughter, I know she will love it. Cheers Wen
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Date: 2/20/2023 3:01:00 AM
Dreamy write of rapturous delight, brilliant, Victor:)
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Date: 2/19/2023 6:53:00 AM
As is all your poetry Victor, a totally enthralling fairy poem. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/19/2023 1:39:00 AM
Lovely engaging poetry Victor, a beautiful purple dream. Warm wishes… Belle
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Date: 2/19/2023 1:33:00 AM
A winner for me, Victor Whimsical, Enchanting and delightful. Now all pretty butterflies will be fairies to me. Thank you for sharing your lovely poem. Take care, Shirley
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Date: 2/18/2023 8:39:00 PM
beautiful... I wrote one and it was too late to enter. I'll wait to another day.
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Date: 2/18/2023 6:50:00 AM
A magical verse Victor, have never seen one but others claim they have. Tom
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Date: 2/18/2023 4:24:00 AM
Great writing, Victor. I can only hope the sponsor recognizes the beauty of it. Best for a win!
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Date: 2/18/2023 1:00:00 AM
Goodness! I just read this, the last thing before my prayer then sleep. How marvelous that your beautiful fantssy will go with me into dreaming, especially after i spent the evening thinking about sin and forgiveness. I fell right into flight beside your fairy.
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Date: 2/17/2023 8:23:00 PM
Purpleness in fairy dreams. Watch out for that wayward wind.
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Date: 2/17/2023 7:11:00 PM
Victor, very enchanting with a melancholic ending, best for a win!
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Date: 2/17/2023 2:36:00 PM
Those are some really vivid images.
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Date: 2/17/2023 1:40:00 PM
How lovely to be carried off in dreams, to visions of rapt delight! I enjoyed this tale, with its music, colors and magic. :)
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Date: 2/17/2023 12:41:00 PM
Very enchanting imagery. Magical and delightful to read and feel mystical atmosphere.
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Date: 2/17/2023 8:01:00 AM
Magical and enchanting ! Your fancy is glowing more and more everyday ! May lovely poems flow from your pen.
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Date: 2/17/2023 6:18:00 AM
Beautiful poem Victor--a magical, mystical write. Wonderfully descriptive, as always.
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