Home » Poems » Blogs » Some Things Which Make a Good Haiku

Charles Henderson

(Click for Poet Info...)

Never would I have thought I would start writing at 73 years of age. I have thoroughly enjoyed my voyage into the written spirituality of poetry and am thankful for the opportunity. In my seven years here I have met many new and wonderful persons. Having them accept me as a friend has been a moving experience.

Home
Previous Blogs
Photos

Charles Henderson Poems

Some Things Which Make a Good Haiku

Blog Posted by Charles Henderson: 7/19/2012 2:24:00 PM

*The two lines which make up the long phrase should be grammatically linked.

*Parts 1 and 2 should be conceptually linked.

*There should be no misspelled words.

*The poem should only be two parts.

*There should be no caps unless it is a proper name.

*There should be minimal punctuation.

*Both parts should have sensory perception.

*It should exhibit a “haiku” look, feel and tone.

*It should only be as long as it needs to be.

*It should not be one long, run on sentence.

*It should be written in the present tense.

*It should have seasonality, a season word if possible.

*It should have a recognizable “cut”.

*It should not have rhyme, metaphor, or simile.

*It should not have “Tonto ism”

*It should show the perception not describe it.

*It should have clear, sharp juxtaposition.

*It may be written about concrete, objectivity which is experienced or observed.

I think all of these would apply to any haiku. However MODERN haiku could usually employ all of these in addition to :

Content may include abstract, subjective attitudes, moods and ideas, which is experienced or conjectured.

Most of this is off the top of my head so if you have any thoughts or comments I neglected, please add your information in a comment.

the willow

bending in the wind

job search

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Charles
Henderson

Date: 7/21/2012 9:31:00 PM

Suzette, thank you for your comments whice are all correct as far as I can tell. In the US "on" are not used as the base for haiku because of the reason you stated of their difference from syllables. Therefore all major influences in the US agree that somewhere around 12 to 14 syllables will be closer to the same parameter as the Japanese use to write their poem in "on". All other things being considered the defining trait of haiku is not its form or tone, but its seasonality. However, poems which are written in the preponderence of public expectation of haiku are still considered haiku even though they are not seasonal.

Jack
Horne

Date: 7/21/2012 11:56:00 AM

thanks for an interesting and informative blog, Charles

Nette
Onclaud

Date: 7/20/2012 11:52:00 AM

haiku in simplicity is poetic,charles..why?..i guess it has a flavor all of its own, contemporary or not...the seasonal tone in itself lends magic to this form, notwithstanding the juxtaposition...:) huggs

Charles
Henderson

Date: 7/19/2012 9:05:00 PM

@Ruben, re: two verbs: Basho wrote "with a fan//I drink sake in the shade//falling cherry blossoms If he can do it I guess anyone can

James Marshall
Goff

Date: 7/19/2012 8:58:00 PM

Schneikies! Wonderful guidelines for sure, Charles....as with all good poets, a firm foundation allows the building of art to flourish..for example...I am fond of Jack Kerouac's "pop" haiku...utterly free of restraint...but...the big but....the ability to succintly allow the reader to DREAM with 3 short lines...MAGIC! that elusive wisp of genius separates the obvious from great haiku....I implied most of your above guidelines in my current haiku "dying rose" but not all...and love it! The poet first must satisfy themselves...by doing so...the opportunity for others to concur is greatly enhanced...jimbo

Cyndi
Macmillan

Date: 7/19/2012 8:40:00 PM

Debbie, HAIL MARY! xox

Charles
Henderson

Date: 7/19/2012 8:04:00 PM

@Ruben again, In my example my long phrase (line 1 and 2) is something I see, but "job search" is of a more modern application and it could bring up a whole string of emotions, depending on who reads the poem. Most of them would be "feelings" Some might say "patience" might crop up for the person not able to find a job. Another may read into it that in order to get a new job you have to bend with the tide, so to speak, much as th willow has to do the wind. You may not like what you find but may have to compromise. So, the readers personal experience bleeds into the interpretation of this particular haiku. That is what I like about it. Not the words but its versatility.

Charles
Henderson

Date: 7/19/2012 7:52:00 PM

@Brian, yes that falls under the haiku, look, feel, and tone thing. If you have that it should be poetic. @Ruben, yes the juxtaposition is always in the second part, so since you are comparing esentially two like perceptions, the second part has to also have a perception, not necessarily the same perception as the first, but sensory none the less. In other words the first can be hearing and the second could be seeing. But both have a common thread in that particular haiku.

Debbie
Guzzi

Date: 7/19/2012 3:47:00 PM

being poetic...I would have you explain what you mean by that Brian? for in normal poetry, poetic devices are used and in many haiku none are used..HELP

Brian
Strand

Date: 7/19/2012 3:19:00 PM

One key point Charles, is that the haiku as a poem, should be poetic,notwithstanding these guidelines you have given above .Rgds Brian

David
Williams

Date: 7/19/2012 3:16:00 PM

Chas, great blog, I have not forgotten to post you some, I am working hard, and this helps a lot, love the haiku as well...David

Sara
Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2012 2:29:00 PM

Interesting Haiku..Sara

Previous Blogs


My 129 mile walk down the Appalachian Trail Date Posted: 12/13/2018 1:56:00 PM
How to make copyright and other symbols on the computer. Date Posted: 2/20/2017 1:31:00 AM
Why Read Poetry Soup Poems Date Posted: 12/6/2016 10:22:00 PM
True Beauty Date Posted: 1/19/2016 6:48:00 PM
Objective and Subjective Haiku Date Posted: 1/13/2016 3:15:00 PM
new kiddie trick Date Posted: 1/8/2016 4:53:00 AM
A Neat Card Trick Date Posted: 12/22/2015 8:33:00 PM
Charles' Answer to the Riddle blog Date Posted: 12/22/2015 4:18:00 PM
A Riddle Date Posted: 12/22/2015 9:51:00 AM
Haiku Date Posted: 12/21/2015 9:08:00 PM
Expanding Deb's Blog Date Posted: 5/19/2014 11:44:00 PM
Possum Branch Road Date Posted: 3/31/2014 11:22:00 PM
Calling All, Want To Be, Haiku Writers Date Posted: 2/20/2014 3:46:00 PM
My Bear Story Retold Date Posted: 2/5/2014 2:35:00 PM
Poetry Soup Imbeded Ads Date Posted: 11/4/2013 7:31:00 PM
The Elusive Monoku Date Posted: 7/27/2013 11:20:00 PM
Computer Games Date Posted: 7/12/2013 9:08:00 AM
Contest Winners and Bear String Date Posted: 5/3/2013 11:47:00 PM
My Contest Date Posted: 5/2/2013 2:01:00 PM
The Bear III Date Posted: 4/1/2013 5:23:00 PM
Another Bear Story Date Posted: 3/31/2013 10:23:00 PM
The no contest Contest Date Posted: 3/30/2013 2:51:00 AM
Hanging Ten Date Posted: 3/22/2013 10:59:00 AM
Feedback Wanted Date Posted: 1/27/2013 1:06:00 PM
Wise Guys Date Posted: 1/22/2013 9:28:00 AM

Some Things Which Make a Good Haiku

Post Comments

Previous Blogs

My Photos

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources