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SHORT AND NOT SO SWEET

Blog Posted by Tim Ryerson: 4/13/2014 8:14:00 PM
OH-MY-GOD! Thank you SO much for commenting on my comment on your poem that I commented on and you commented back on your poem that I commented on and I'm getting somewhat confused at this point. You have no IDEA how much I am honored and will forever be in your debt and how can I ever repay you (You take personal checks?)
But if it's not too much to ask (and I realize that your time is valuable) could you PLEASE possibly: COMMENT ON ONE OF MY FREEKIN POEMS??? I don't care if you like my poetry or not...I took the time to read through YOUR poem carefully, make sure I understood it and then tried to offer some kind of coherent comment on said poem that I commented on that you didn't comment on my poem and here I go again one mo time
Also, if all you have to say in return is 'nice', 'enjoyed', etc. PU-LEEZE don't bother

Okay that's it... 


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Date: 4/17/2014 5:17:00 PM
Tim I comment on Poems that I can relate to. I believe in sincerity. I am not good at wording myself as you can probably tell. I have social phobia and so I never know what to write on comments only to tell them how good it is and to make them feel valued. You tend to get views and comments Others get completely ignored and some of those poems are pure gems. I have never given to receive I wasn't raised that way. If I don't get comments or views because I don't give back then so be it.That wont stop me from commenting even if all I say is nice or this is good some people need to be valued heard and noticed I read peoples current work because that is their frame of mind now. Just a thought.
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Date: 4/14/2014 4:04:00 PM
tim, this is incisive and funny.. okay, can i say, " i like!"..lol..:) hugggs. willl soupie you soon
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Date: 4/14/2014 1:10:00 PM
- Sorry ..... but I have to laugh :)) - I do not write 100% correct English ................. but ........ oh no ... is this a joke, Tim .... (( ? )) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/14/2014 12:23:00 PM
Hi Tim Ive just posted on andreas blog - cant agree with you more - nothing more disheartening than spending time commenting and getting nothing in return. Have only been here since February and seen the amount of comments I receive go down - hey ho won't stop me writing - in fact am collaborating and working more with incredible poets so we get two bites of the cherry as the poems are posted twice. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/14/2014 11:53:00 AM
LOL, you confused me with the whole, thank you for commenting on my comment. --- I don't mind if someone, stopped by and left a hello, half the time, no one gets my poetry. H3ll sometimes, I don't get my own poetry. :)... But, that reply button has to go. Andrea's blog expresses much about the reply button. That takes from all of us. I know many don't care about it, or will not admit to it. The reply button's a thief. LOL ;)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/14/2014 3:41:00 PM
sorry.. it's a blog! ..lol... commenting on a comment commented to your blog.. _Aiyah :O)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/14/2014 3:40:00 PM
Here I go... Commenting on a comment commented on your poem, Tim,,,, he he... things have changed a lot!! .. comments on one's comment... isn't it fun?!! lololol... Hi PD!! ..hello ANNE LISE!!! :O))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 1:12:00 PM
- Agree : the reply button has to go !!!!
Date: 4/14/2014 11:45:00 AM
:) Tim, some comments on here are all for show. I love how some indicate, to be better than others. LOL, I THINK NOT! The poetry soup is not as awesome as it was before 2013. Everything has gone sour. Now, it's all about groups, like it or not. I can't believe everyone is worried, about how poets comment one another. What is it to he or she, how we decide to offer support, to the new poets, or contest winners. Your 500 character comment, does not mean you read and fully understood the poem. Your praises and rant, aren't better than a smile some left behind. Sorry I have no time for kissing ass. "Constructive criticism" -Them days are over, and charred, all due to the ones who act as if they are better than the rest of us. I can't even call it envy anymore. It's the rude way of seeing thing. I've been discouraged for over a year. All I have time for, is my true poetry friends, and my contest. Every now and then I will find a day, and return comments to he or she who continue to offer support. Another thing, I'm not gonna give in to all the one's who hate seeing us leave a copy paste when welcoming the new poets. $h!ttt-ersss, if it wasn't for us, more than 3 dozen new poets, would not even receive a welcome hand to the soup. So split, splat, to all the HoTW. :) Love your blog by the way. XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 4/14/2014 3:53:00 AM
One mo time then I'll shut my pie-hole (Not much into pie anyway) I sometimes comment on contest winners in which I have either won or placed in and freely admit it is nothing more than an ego thing...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/14/2014 8:54:00 AM
Tim, I think it is difficult to go see lots of poems if one is not on that particular winners list. I have done it once in a while, but I think most people are going to be more interested in seeing winners of contests in which they too have won. It's only human! Also, it's easier for me to see winners of short form poetry contests, whether I won or not. I just love flying through cute little poems. Where the judges are very selective, like Charlotte, for example, I really enjoy seeing the longer poems. Saw some of superb quality in and other judges' also doing more free verse type contests here.
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/14/2014 4:28:00 AM
On second thought, after the above comment maybe some humble pie would be in order? (choke-gag) WELL! You didn't have to shove it down my THROAT did you?
Date: 4/14/2014 12:18:00 AM
Hey Tim..just wanted you to know I have been sick for awhile now but I will be back to reading and commenting now that I'm feeling better!I know just how you feel...I always look foreward to comments on my poetry ...It's such a good feeling to know you are being read!
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/14/2014 2:46:00 AM
Thanks Deb and I'm glad you are feeling better...
Date: 4/13/2014 9:35:00 PM
hahaha!!!
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/13/2014 9:44:00 PM
KNEW you would indentify...
Date: 4/13/2014 8:56:00 PM
;You are my hero..you have said it better than I ever could. And made it funny to boot. BG
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/13/2014 9:31:00 PM
Wrong Barbara. You are MY hero...
Date: 4/13/2014 8:49:00 PM
OH-MY-GOD! I love your blog. I don't know why, I'm laughing. I hardly ever, ever, reply to a comment left on mypoem. Tim, you know me, I stop by whenever I can. Even if it's 2 say, hey thanks for supporting my contest. You Rock, Tim.. I won't say more than that. I thank you for your random visits. Thank you for not being lazy and replying to the comments I leave when Viewing your poems. ~SKAT~
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/13/2014 9:47:00 PM
Shoulda said I GET LAZY...Ya'll sure don't
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/13/2014 9:29:00 PM
SKAT - I would Lmfao but I ain't got no 'a' to 'flo' anymore (been kicked too many times)
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/13/2014 9:22:00 PM
Yep SKAT, I get lazy too and don't comment as much as I should...I go through 'dry' spells when I don't write anything and don't even log on to PS...Now please tell your sis to take a look too...A little birdie told me that she has become somewhat frustrated lately. I admire you both for the hard work you put in...
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Skat A
Date: 4/13/2014 9:15:00 PM
I'm true to my commenters if they are 2 me. It works, both ways. Sometimes, I run across poets I don't like at all. However, that does not stop me from leaving a small congrats, on a poets win, when they enter my contest or my friends contest list. Nowhere did my mom raise a daughters with ugly hearts. I agree with my sis, when she says, never show the same face others do. It leaves, dodo behind. Lmfao.
Date: 4/13/2014 8:31:00 PM
LOL well it is nice to get mail!!! ;) you try giving constructive criticism see how far you get ;)
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/13/2014 9:59:00 PM
You be da bes Sha!

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