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Landweir House Chapter 21 (Conclusion)

Blog Posted by Tony Lane: 12/22/2011 5:55:00 PM

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Date: 12/23/2011 10:35:00 AM
Tony-Plz. don't delete these-I will have time to read them all soon and I really want to :)
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Date: 12/23/2011 7:05:00 AM
Yep good one realy enjoyed this you turn it into a series on the telly .Excellent well done. Can get on with some chores now. x
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Date: 12/23/2011 7:04:00 AM
Cyndi I know what you mean about wanting someone to like at Landweir. I wrote it this way very much on purpose. It is a love conquers all story but at what price? I wanted it to be upsetting for people to think of love in this way. (Remember I wrote it as a Halloween story.) No one who kills anyone get caught for it. In each case the murderer gets away with killing someone. Poor Jean Breen's lover was supposed to kill Richard but when he couldn't, he got killed. I have another one that is much more conventional and the plot only works if I get you to like the main couple. They are very nice and remain so throughout the story. I'll run that one next time. Ask more questions if you have them, it helps me see where the weak spots are.
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Date: 12/23/2011 6:53:00 AM
Marie Turnow praticed voo du and placed a curse on the house and all who would seek happiness there. She had to be buried with her gris gris bag since it contained her soul. She then had to protect it and Carlton's gris gris bags until their bodies came back. That's why no one could dig up the garden until she was ready to be found. Marie controlled anyone who lived in the house. If you remember the script that Robert Breen wrote, he said it was like he was an actor n a play. He no longer controlled himself. Miller Terhune lost his limp and became homicidal when Marie took over his actions. Breen became a hoarder because Marie made him. She controlled everything right from the start. Donald and Lisa Marie did not know who they really were until they touched their gris gris bags. Remember, Lisa Marie got a wicked grin on her face right after she took hold of the bag and when she handed Donald his gris gris, all of the sudden he knew who he was. Ask more questions if you have them.
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Date: 12/22/2011 9:05:00 PM
Incredible story, Tony. I wasn't expecting the ending. I'll have to go back now and read it all at once. You are a talented man. Merry Christmas to you and your family. God Bless.
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Date: 12/22/2011 7:15:00 PM
Tony, thank you so much for not making me wait any longer! I think you've done a great job with the story, and its probably my sleep deprived brain that has me a bit lost. Now, Miller pretended to be wounded and his limp disappeared, and he was aware of the bodies in the garden, or at least that is the impression I have. How? Why? What role did he play? Was he THAT afraid of scandal that the discovery of the bodies led him to murder Vanessa? Was he so angry that she disobeyed him that he resorted to murder? This part of the plot left me with questions. I love the spooky ending. But I have to be honest, no I'm not happy. The house deserves a new start with decent people. Carlton is/was evil enough to kill a child and his mistress was evil enough to utter a curse on everyone... It is a fantastic write. I'm just not an evil-lovin' kind of gal. You should feel honoured, I've squawked at King's endings, too. And the man is a genius. I really wanted someone to like at Landweir...
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Date: 12/22/2011 6:47:00 PM
VERY clever, Tony. Love how you tied the end to the beginning that way though I don't think Lisa marie was always aware of who she was. I forget now. When did it first dawn on her that she was that free woman? This would make a marvelous novel if you worked in many new and different subplots,you know it?
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Date: 12/22/2011 6:07:00 PM
Ooooooooo Wow..What an ending Tony..What a story..Thank you for sharing it with us xxx Merry Chrissy
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