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Landweir House Chapter 13

Blog Posted by Tony Lane: 12/15/2011 5:05:00 AM

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Date: 12/16/2011 9:55:00 PM
Oh you got me wondering why he laughed as well! hmmmm but I sure found Breen's poem to be very gripping :)
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Date: 12/15/2011 8:27:00 PM
Hmmm, now why was he laughing so hard over that letter? Seems something is now awry with THAT guy. I hope that letter puzzle leads to the dead body of the Breen's wife! Read the comments below. I think it would be cool to do a story like you suggested, Tony.
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Date: 12/15/2011 6:57:00 PM
Tony, the pass-the-buck story idea is a hoot. Of course, somebody would start writing a mystery, than it would warp into a western, suddenly a space alien would land, than a bodice would get ripped, repeatedly, and the next thing you know the detective is really a zombie with an evil vampire twin... so shoot, who starts? LOL. I was hoping you'd up Chapter 14 tonight. Hard day. Had to put our old cat down. She's been really sick. I'm drained and off to bed. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff (hopefully) in the morning. Hugs ta ya!
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Date: 12/15/2011 2:25:00 PM
Don't worry Kim, I don't leave any loose ends. Everything is resolved by the end.
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Date: 12/15/2011 10:49:00 AM
Wow, you really brought back the fear of Hurricane Katrina. It looks like Lisa Marie and some others decided to wait it out. By the time the levee broke, most people had evacuated. Very touching poem she found on Breen's desk. Can't wait for the next chapter! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2011 8:48:00 AM
Curiouser and curiouser. You are going to tie up all the loose ends aren't you, Tony? Usually when I read a book, unless it's over 300 pages, I will read for hours to finish it. This chapter a day is killing me.LOL
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Date: 12/15/2011 6:22:00 AM
I think thats a great idea Tony.. :)
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Date: 12/15/2011 5:59:00 AM
This is too much fun. Here's what I think we should do. Let's all write a story. One of us can write the first chapter and then pass it to the next author until the story is done. What do you think?
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Date: 12/15/2011 5:55:00 AM
You posted this and you STILL get coal! ARGH! AND NOW WHAT!!! I haven't read a novel in a year. My brain can not usually handle it after getting as little as 3 hours sleep if my monkey wakes up 4 times! So, this is the first 'longer' piece of fiction I've read in eons and I am ready Now! NOW I SAY! for the next installment. I just realized you are barely HALF WAY THROUGH your story. I am completely absorbed. Love this. GREAT writing. Cheers friend. Okay, diamond I give, not coal. And cheeseballs. Thousands of cheeseballs. Hugs....
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Date: 12/15/2011 5:47:00 AM
Ooo I cant wait till tomorrows installment..a very creative chapter Tony xx
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