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Landweir House Chapter 18

Blog Posted by Tony Lane: 12/20/2011 4:55:00 AM

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Date: 12/20/2011 4:34:00 PM
Oh, you left us with a glimpse of perhaps Lisa Marie going a bit crazy there!! (that unsettling smile on her face!) the plot thickens. . .
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Date: 12/20/2011 2:20:00 PM
NO, it has a great ending. I would never burn down a classic house even in story form. I am so please with all of your comments. You are following my path perfectly.
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Date: 12/20/2011 10:38:00 AM
tony,perhaps TPS can have a catgory for short stories.. wowowow!! :) hggs!
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Date: 12/20/2011 7:40:00 AM
Hmmm.. An unsettling smile on Lisa Marie's face. I'm thinking the curse is about to strike again? Really enjoying this story, Tony. Kim
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Date: 12/20/2011 6:28:00 AM
It's 8:20. She's still asleep (?) I'm so weird I actually want to wake her. She's 2 and a half and I still worry that she's breathing. How abnormal is that??? Anyways, wanted to add that I like the theme woven throughout, that we keep repeating history, won't learn from our past, the self-absorbed stupidity of man. Two more days... I will never begin reading one of your stories now until I know how long I have to wait to get to the final chapter. When I was young, I used to sneak a flashlight into my room and read Nancy Drew under the blankets. I couldn't stand waiting for the final chapters .... you reminded me of this ... only you're holding the chapters prisoner! LOL. Have a great day! We are attending a Christmas party held by our Supers today. BIG. With many tennants. Should be fun...ah, she wakes!
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Date: 12/20/2011 6:02:00 AM
10 to 8, just enough time to read this and she's going to wake up any minute. So, these people just aren't going to get it, huh? Tracie's right. Your pacing is primo. I'm still stumped. Chapter five, I think?, revealed that the original home owners were killed by owner number 2 who then killed the detective/gardener and the pretty young wife (who'd heard shoveling in the night). But the diary contradicts this finding, so I am scratching my head. I can't wait to see how this wraps up. LOL. Make that UNWRAPS. Nice Christmas gift you've given us, Tony. This poor house. I swear, if you end this with it being burned to the ground, I'll be quite miffed! And we are still waiting for the DNA tests, right? The new owners are actually...kissing cousins????
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Date: 12/20/2011 5:41:00 AM
3 chapters left and im still as hooked as the first one.. Awesome!!
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