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MY BABIES, MY BAD AND MY UGLY - Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther's Blog

About Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
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Bloggers PhotoMy Biography is Coming Soon... When I was 13 years old I began my conquest Of poetry. I put my hobby on hiatus after Determining that my efforts were fruitless. After ten years I returned to writing. This Episode i was much improved. I wasn't Able to keep track of any of my early work Due to a number of relocations. Now I am an Active member of poetrysoup where I have Published about 400+ poems including: HAPPINESS OF LIFE ON THE PATH OF PASSION TWILIGHT LIFE SHOOTING STAR DREAMER WHEN DREAMERS DREAM OF TRIUMPHS That's a micro collection.

MY BABIES, MY BAD AND MY UGLY

Blog Posted:2/16/2015 5:37:00 PM

As I WRITE this, I'm thinking of the snow that has not yet fallen it is everyone's  nearly  everyone's  anticipation and anxiety.  I muse  about my own POEMS I  absolutely hate and ones I adore.  On second thought hate is to strong an emotion. Some of my material I dislike  others I adore for instance,  INDIGO GARDEN INDIGO ROSE  and  AT THIS LONELY HOUR written  today.  Of course   TONGUE KISS  is also one I adore. These I LOVE the most.  My  BABIES.   The ones I don't really  CARE for is NOTES ON DEATH  and Of POVERTY.  YES , I  crit my own.  A WORD A SENTENCE wasn't  one of my best.  I'M forgetting some honorable mentions such as INSATIABLE HEARTS,  NEW YORK CITY,  LOVERS FAIRYTALE.    The point is, I've written  some bad poems, I want if possible, to become famous for those as well.   NOTES ON DEATH  is not what comes to mind.  What say you??

Another one of my absolute FAVORITES is  SOLDIER. I could sit here for another mentioning my own POEMS. I won't  ALLOW my  that undertaking, besides  I do admire other poems and POETS.



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Rhonda
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Date: 2/17/2015 4:14:00 PM
I've read some of your poems, Valerie. You write great prose and your free verse comes from the heart. Don't be so hard on yourself...experiment, try different forms, and above all, have fun! :)
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Date: 2/17/2015 2:28:00 PM
I don't hate any of the poem's I've written - having only been writing just a year now I can look subjectively at my early writes and realism that maybe they could have been improved - but I leave them as they are - it is a steep learning curve and i for one am having the journey of my life - enjoy your writing Valerie and please don't be too harsh on yourself:-) Hugs \jan xxx
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Rhonda
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Date: 2/17/2015 12:10:00 AM
(cont) I hope all your dreams come true! Hugs, Rhonda
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Rhonda
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Date: 2/17/2015 12:09:00 AM
I'll check out some of your above mentioned poems when I have time...in the meantime, I think you're being too hard on yourself...have fun, enjoy the process. We are always our own worst critic. For myself, some of my own poems I like more than others, but even the ones I wrote that aren't great, I think of as a learning experience. Everyone has their own idea on the subject of good poetry. Some only like rhyme or think if a poem isn't written in meter, it isn't poetry. Some only like free verse. It's all subjective. You can always revise a poem you don't like. One day, I'm going to go through my own poems to remove some and revise some.
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Date: 2/16/2015 6:33:00 PM
I usually don't keep the ones that I hate. What I do is keep working on it until I flesh it into something that I do love. One of my poems actually started out one way and now only maybe one of the sentences is even the same anymore. lol I kept the original in a file, but I call it more of a "draft" than a poem. :)
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Date: 2/16/2015 6:22:00 PM
Hi Valerie, interesting blog. You got me with the anticipation and anxiety of yet not fallen snow. I'm a little tickled and puzzle on how one can love and hate their poems. I can't relate. I love everything I write, especially when it's not good. It only proves I ain't got the time to hate my poems. A very cool blog. I guess I'd rather not write something I'd hate. I like writing poems that make me giggle. LOL :) I'm gonna go read one of the poems you mentioned above. Hugs ~SKAT~
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My Recent Poems

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5/10/2024 BIG IDEAS? THESE WORDS Free verseabsence,allusion,beach,be
5/9/2024 THE POWER Free verseallusion,color,fire,
5/9/2024 EVERYBODY SHOULD WRITE POETRY Free verseabsence,allusion,
5/5/2024 BLACK TO BLACK AND BLACK Alliterationbeautiful,beauty,black lo
5/5/2024 THIS LOVE BETWEEN US Free verseafrica,allusion,corruptio
5/5/2024 THIS SPACE Free verseallusion,deep,devotion,
5/2/2024 I FELL IN LOVE Free verseallusion,angst,beach,best
4/24/2024 DIARY OF DIONDRA POSH: June these DAZE weary ways Free verseallusion,business,color,c
4/18/2024 DIARY OF DIONDRA POSH: Temporary Employment Free verseallusion,beach,best frien
4/17/2024 GODS SCHEME- Ariddleculous Haiku? IN TIME? Free verseallusion,color,death,
4/16/2024 DO NOT TELL Free verseabsence,allusion,
4/13/2024 LooK My Love pt 2: RIVER AT THE BAY Free verseafrica,allusion,beautiful
4/5/2024 WHAT IS THIS LOVE? Alliterationallusion,confidence,deep,
4/2/2024 ALTERNATIVE REALITY OF THINGS Free versecolor,corruption,devotion
3/31/2024 A NIGHTMARE ABOUT A DREAM Free verseallusion,beach,birth,
3/30/2024 HOLLYWOOD TIMES Free verseallusion,confidence,creat
3/25/2024 IS SHE A ROSE? Free versecolor,confidence,romantic
3/23/2024 FOR THE LOVE OF THE GODS Acrosticallusion,business,good mo
3/22/2024 Chapter 157 cont'-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: CRUEL BALL Competition Alliterationallusion,beach,birth,deep
3/19/2024 THIS ROSE OF MY LOVE Alliterationcolor,confidence,deep,dev
3/19/2024 Chapter 157-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: CRUEL Ball FAMILY DaY Proseabsence,allusion,best fri
3/16/2024 IN THE BACKYARD Free verseallusion,cat,
3/16/2024 LIFE IS POETIC Alliterationabsence,beautiful,birth,b
3/16/2024 Chapter 156-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: TIME Keepers and CRUEL BALL Plans! Proseabsence,allusion,child,ho
3/15/2024 WONDER WONDER WONDER Free verseallusion,color,creation,
3/11/2024 WHEN I WAS WHERE Free verseallusion,
3/11/2024 Look my LOVE Free verseallusion,beautiful,black
3/8/2024 Another one Alliterationbeach,
3/4/2024 I AM DAYTIME Alliterationbest friend,birth,
3/1/2024 AT THE FEET OF MERCY Alliterationabsence,allusion,emotions
3/1/2024 Chapter 155 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: HoMeCoMing Prosebest friend,birth,black l
2/28/2024 Chapter 154-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Time To Go --Eventually Alliterationafrica,allusion,black lov
2/26/2024 Chapter 153-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: The Things That FAMILIES DO Proseafrica,allusion,
2/25/2024 Chapter 153-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: HONEYMOON!!! Free verseafrica,allusion,anger,bea
2/23/2024 BEAUTIFUL Abecedarian3rd grade,allusion,blessi
2/23/2024 THIS IS who we are - USON Proseconfidence,corruption,cre
2/22/2024 IN THE BRIGHT OF DAY Alliterationcolor,creation,death,feel
2/21/2024 DaytimE DeliGhT Alliterationallusion,angst,beautiful,
2/21/2024 Chapter 152-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Honeymoon soon GROOM? Proseabsence,allusion,birth,
2/20/2024 Chapter 152-- same day--DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: The reception and These Hawaiian Daze Alliterationallusion,birth,
2/20/2024 BOASTING OF FANTASTICAL ROSES A GARDEN Alliterationbeautiful,creation,enviro
2/19/2024 A SIGN Free verseallusion,anti bullying,
2/16/2024 chapter 152- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Wedding Surprise Alliterationallusion,black love,
2/14/2024 Chapter 152 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: pt 4 Almost Time for a Wedding Proseabsence,allusion,
2/12/2024 Chapter 151- Pt 3 same day - DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: The Wedding PLAN Alliterationabsence,africa,allusion,
2/11/2024 Forever now Alliterationafrica,allusion,best frie
2/10/2024 Chapter 151-- Pt 2 DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: The wedding planners Surprise Alliterationallusion,beach,best frien
2/7/2024 ME AND ALL OF HER Alliterationallusion,beach,beautiful,
2/3/2024 Chapter 151-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Pt 1 This Day This Family Alliterationafrica,allusion,birth,chi
2/1/2024 My Say: WE BE THESE! Free verseafrica,allusion,beach,bir
1/26/2024 NOTHING NOTHING SOMETHING? Free verseallusion,child,
1/25/2024 WHO AM I Alliterationallusion,child,confidence
1/22/2024 Love you more dear Alliterationallusion,
1/20/2024 ALL FLOWERS Abecedarianbeautiful,birth,flower,ro
1/17/2024 Plush Posh Alliterationallusion,
1/16/2024 DIONDRA POSH DIARIES Proseabsence,allusion,
1/15/2024 SHALA ILLUSTRIOUS EMOTION Free versedeep,
1/15/2024 SINCERELY YOURS Free versebeach,best friend,black l
1/14/2024 DIARY OF DIONDRA POSH: Sheba moves Proseallusion,beach,
1/13/2024 DIARY OF DIONDRA POSH Proseafrica,allusion,
1/9/2024 Chapter 150 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Alliterationabsence,allusion,beach,
1/7/2024 Chapter 149-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Next Hawaiian Day Alliterationallusion,
1/7/2024 Chapter 148-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Forever Island Alliteration4th grade,absence,adventu
1/7/2024 Chapter 147--DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: the day continues-Heavenly Hawaiian Destination Proseallusion,child,
1/3/2024 Chapter 147-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: A Hawaiian Approach Alliterationamerica,anxiety,black lov
12/28/2023 Chapter 146 --DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Mass Family Vacation Invasion Plan Alliterationabsence,adventure,allusio
12/25/2023 Daytime VACATION Alliterationallusion,environment,summ
12/25/2023 MY ROSE OF ROSES Prose Poetrybeautiful,mythology,persp
12/24/2023 Chapter 145-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Homes for the HOMEBOUND Alliterationallusion,birth,child,
12/23/2023 Chapter 144 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Offspring and Desharah's Birthday Alliteration11th grade,allusion,best
12/22/2023 Chapter 143-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Prodigal Aquarius Paradise Restaurant Alliterationbest friend,birth,husband
12/18/2023 Chapter 142 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Holly's Birthday Alliterationallusion,best friend,birt
12/17/2023 2024 WE GET MORE Free verseabsence,africa,
12/16/2023 KENTE CLOTH STORY Free verseafrica,allusion,beautiful
12/11/2023 DREAM I DREAM A THING Free verseallusion,confidence,
12/10/2023 I DID THAT Alliterationallusion,science fiction,
12/8/2023 SCHOOL BUS FIGHT: true life Alliterationallusion,
12/7/2023 Chapter 141-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Business inventory Alliterationallusion,business,
12/3/2023 Chapter 140-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Dasheri Hakim Alliterationchild,
12/3/2023 NEW ERA Haikuabsence,color,
12/1/2023 Chapter 139 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: The Small House Compromise Alliterationallusion,beautiful,birth,
11/28/2023 I AM BEING Proseallusion,color,confidence
11/24/2023 Chapter 138 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: New Triplet ADDITIONS Alliterationbeach,child,
11/20/2023 Chapter 137-- same day DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: DJ Desharah Amadeus Proseallusion,child,
11/20/2023 QUESTIONS of AN OASIS Free verseblessing,color,
11/18/2023 I AM BABY Free verseallusion,birth,
11/18/2023 YOU SAY TERRORISTS Alliterationallusion,emotions,
11/17/2023 CELESTIAL LOVE BATH Free verseabsence,africa,allusion,
11/16/2023 BLACK PANTHER NIGHT Alliterationallusion,cat,
11/16/2023 WORDS of WISDOM Free verseabsence,allusion,creation
11/13/2023 DECODING a FractioN of the ENGLISH LANgUAgE? Alliterationbeautiful,black love,clot
11/11/2023 Chapter 137 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Damian Hakim's Realty Rentals and Condominiums Alliterationbirth,confidence,deep,dev
11/8/2023 THE LIGHT of THINGS Alliterationchange,dream,earth,good m
11/6/2023 Chapter 136 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: PoPuLatioN PROJECTS Alliteration3rd grade,birth,confidenc
11/5/2023 THE GRIM Alliterationafrica,best friend,confid
11/4/2023 Peppermint Persuasion Alliterationappreciation,beautiful,da
11/3/2023 The HUMAN WAY Haikuemotions,love,
11/3/2023 Chapter 135-- Damian Delilah Mallory Holannya: We Are Hakim Family Alliteration9th grade,courage,dance,
10/30/2023 Vanessa's LIFE Alliterationallusion,business,
10/30/2023 TRUE NAME TRUTH Free versebirth,home,

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True Essence Rhymeidentity,vanity,
A Child's Good Night Quatrainchildren,dream,home,night
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