WHAT IS THIS LOVE?

If I should I would could I could lay
By your side tonight? What with
Wounded or every tender mercy
Make me more merciful a magnetic 
Dream touching touching me ecstasy!
I'm sure. So some say love is just
A very NATURAL BEAUTY OF HUMANITY 
if I could would I if I should love you
More I lay by your side knowing you
Will keep this stride alive? Do you
Wish me to be with you now in this
Space? Is this my place? Say it's 
Right. If you say soothe me. Then
I will soothe you and move you I can
Bring you to existential heights you
Have not ever ever known. What do
You say? What do you need FROM
ME MADEMOISELLE ask me you will
Receive! I will all THE WAYS aspire
FOR YOUR DESIRE! I am dangerously 
Pleased to please you! If YOU SO
DESIRE my belove. I will be elated
And embrace and please you squeeze
You then TAKE YOUR BREATH! 
Do you feel that you may behold
This pleasured exquisite treasure?
If we laid and laid in each other's
Ecstasy aaah! Together and gather
All the love of our essence is that
Pleasant? Enthralling OVERWHELMING!
aaah! Say you say you? Does this
Measure? With what this feeling 
So ooh deep down inside me I struggle 
To explain only in vain I claim 
Regardless!  WHAT IS THIS? this
Love?  WHAT THIS LOOOVE?
Thus this trust this that it must be
Potent TOUCH?!  What iiis thiiis
Looove.....






VBR Black Pantherrrr  Val 
Jet Black Answerer!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 4/5/2024 4:19:00 PM
I think if you post this ten more times it'll get more attention
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Date: 4/6/2024 12:22:00 AM
Hey Tom Thanks for reading. It's not complete though, that's the first verse. I'll finish it soon.
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