Vigil Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Marble Vigil

statues keep their marble vigil
shadows pooling like old thoughts
history holding its breath

Vigil

Midnight, faced again,
after failing once more to let yesterday go,
feels familiar—
like a night’s shadow resting,
its hands heavy with darkness.

Stung by the hard glare of a streetlight,
my shadow—myself—stretches out
and deliberately rummages through
bitter memories
blooming like pale gourd flowers.

The long night should leave
only after shaking loose its faded past,
yet my shadow keeps searching,
not ready
to let it pass.

Premium Member NUTCRACKER'S VIGIL

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a wooden body with steady onyx eyes
fixed through the warm, festive glow of
glimmer-strung branches heavy with ornaments
crimson ribbons curling like frozen candy canes

stalwart he stands, gray musket upright
at rigid attention guarding wrapped promises~
stern eyes track the vintage train’s circuit
buzzing relentlessly round tree-rooted tracks.

devoted guardian rooted in pine needles
preserving whimsy’s last spark in tinsel-strewn shadows~
protector of wide-eyed wonder when snow silences streets
keeper of memory’s embers — cinnamon, carols, and cold cheeks.

no mouse king approaches, no cracked walnut threatens;
yet, still he stands watching over Christmases present and past~
a soldier of sentiment safeguarding the fragile, the glitter,
the longing, the ache in the throat when the last bulb dims.


Premium Member A Humble Soul


                                                 The mountain stands, so tall and grand,
                                                            A silent vigil, on the land;
                                                     It does not claim the skies above,
                                                     Nor drives away the birds of love;
                                                  It weathers storms, invites the breeze,
                                                  And hosts creatures beneath its trees.

Premium Member NUTCRACKER'S VIGIL

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a wooden body with steady onyx eyes
fixed through the warm, festive glow of
glimmer-strung branches heavy with ornaments
crimson ribbons curling like frozen candy canes

stalwart he stands, gray musket upright
at rigid attention guarding wrapped promises~
stern eyes track the vintage train’s circuit
buzzing relentlessly 'round tree-rooted tracks.

devoted guardian rooted in pine needles
preserving whimsy’s last spark in tinsel-strewn shadows~
protector of wide-eyed wonder when snow silences streets
keeper of memory’s embers — cinnamon, carols, and cold cheeks.

no mouse king approaches, no cracked walnut threatens;
yet, still he stands watch over Christmases present and past~
a soldier of sentiment safeguarding the fragile, the glitter,
the longing, the ache in the throat when the last bulb dims.

Premium Member The Vigil

I just wanted you to know that I love you, I did my best to do what's right,

It took from me my ego, I gained long and sleepless nights,

I just want you to know I miss you, and I tried my very best,

But the world is old and broken, a toxic angry mess,

Someday I'll make a difference, because I refused to simply quit,

For everything that I have lost, my broken heart still fits,

I know you didn't leave me, you've simply gone ahead,

In truth, I wish that I had left, the toxic world instead,

I wouldn't quit tomorrow, and I couldn't quit tonight,

for every other one I saved, gave reason for this life.

I wasn't born so healthy,  I wasn't born to wealth,

I was born to go with god, and help those with no one else.


Vigil night

Little lights shine
Through darkness
Church bells rings
Down streets
Hand in hand
Sparks rise
Embers glow 
From the flame
Of electric candles
Showing the way

Premium Member The Poet’s Vigil

Inspired by He Has a Name, by Suzette Richards (2021)
I. Ink and Ashes
Steeped 
in the pain 
of his slain countryman,

surrounded by the t u r m o i l 
of real fears 
laid bare — 
exposed — 
on the s.t.o.n.e - c.o.l.d 
T A R M A C.

A poet dipped his I N K
in the spilled
T 
   E 
      A 
         R 
           S

Hero
or 
Zero?

He had a name — 
     he had a name …

II. The Son Who Stood
A mother’s S O N
stood up 
to be counted

in a time 
when voices 
were made 
M U T E;

indoctrinated — 

to the edge of 
S T U P O R.

A poet watches. 
Waits. 
Remains 
R E S O L U T E.

He had a name? 
     He had a name.

III. No Monument
NO statue 
would be erected 
in his name

because he wasn’t 
the first man to be 
s*l*a*i*n.

At the next 
roll call of 
C I V I L  U N R E S T

this poet’s words 
E A S E 
some of 
the N A K E D  P A I N.

He has a name! 
HE HAS A NAME!

The Poet's Vigil

In the quiet corners of his own mind,
he walks alone,
a poet whose pen drips with moonlight.

He counts the hours by the hum of his thoughts,
each one a lantern swinging in the wind.

A thinker —
he weighs the weight of names,
dreams of the laughter not yet born,
imagines a tiny hand curling around his own.

In solitude,
he builds worlds of words,
hoping one day a child will wander in,
pick a flower from his sentences,
and plant it in their own heart.

The waiting is a long horizon,
but he watches,
because even a lone soul
knows the fire is not for himself alone.

Premium Member THE WAKE WITOUT VIGIL

THE WAKE WITHOUT VIGIL
           

Time longer than rope
Chokes hearts dangling
In the reality of struggle:-

Grieving mothers and widows
Veil their grief in sagging bosoms
As they wail in excruciating silence:-

Fragments of men, void of hope,
View and count communal graves
Swelling with dirt burying the dead:-

(Buried are “The Wretched Of The Earth”)

In the neap tides of sorrows,
Mourners wade the airy blood
Of the children of Pilate’s hands:-

In the stale winds of time, “woe is me”
Cries the forsaken land–lamenting scriptures—
Echoing Freneau: “They saw their country’s woe:-”

Stacked like molded bread slices,
Decaying bodies release spores
Of death to weary eyed mourners:-

Like an aching bosom’s colloidal tears,
Life sags on, and Sisyphus-like children
Sit under the warrior ghost of lingering hope:
 
(Indeed, “At this wake…none keep vigil…None:-”)*


*A line from the poem, RECESSION, by Wole Soyinke

Idyllic Retreat

In this charming retreat,
the silence of nature and hills talk to me,
whispers of forgotten tales in the breeze,
of hidden secrets of times bygone,
an era of luxury and grandeur,
where every stone holds a story untold.

In the marble statues and king-size portraits,
etched in elegance, they gaze through time,
their faces frozen in an eternal grace,
gripping the pulse of a golden age.
Laid in every nook and corner of the mansion,
they speak of grandeur 
of feasts and whispers in the halls,
of laughter echoing beneath crystal chandeliers.

The velvet curtains, the blinds drawn in quiet reverence,
softly filter the light, casting shadows of tranquility and peace,
the swimming pool in the front yard 
girdled by palm trees standing tall and erect like  silent sentry
the mango tree laden with fruits drooping over the pool 
a visual treat  for hungry eyes sore with city life.
and outside, the hills stand,
ancient and proud, keeping their vigil.
on the idyllic retreat 
where wealth and wisdom reign in peace.
and time slows, and memories breathe.

Premium Member THE WAKE WITHOUT VIGIL

Time longer than rope
Chokes hearts dangling
In the reality of struggle:-

Grieving mothers and widows
Veil their grief in sagging bosoms
As they wail in excruciating silence:-

Fragments of men, void of hope,
View and count communal graves
Swelling with dirt burying the dead:-

(Buried are “The Wretched Of The Earth”)

In the neap tides of sorrows,
Mourners wade the airy blood
Of the children of Pilate’s hands:-

In the stale winds of time, “woe is me”
Cries the forsaken land–lamenting scriptures—
Echoing Freneau: “They saw their country’s woe:-”

Stacked like molded bread slices,
Decaying bodies release spores
Of death to weary-eyed mourners:-

Like an aching bosom’s colloidal tears,
Life sags on, and Sisyphus-like children
Sit under the warrior ghost of lingering hope:
 
(Indeed, “At this wake…none keep vigil…None:-”)*


*A line from the poem, RECESSION, by Wole Soyinka

Premium Member Vigil

Through the curtain chink a ray
Shines across the darkened room
At the end of sunless day
Snow had fallen in the gloom 
Later on it will melt down
But the early snow is there
Is it warm, or cold in town
Can be either way, who cares
Clocks are ticking in the night
Time goes by, I'm sitting still 
Looking at the strip of light 
Flowers on the window sill
Cast a shadow on the floor 
I am counting ships at sea
Like I did the night before
Shall I stand and make some tea
But the tea will make me pensive
Anyway it's time to sleep
Talking now becomes expensive
Silence better, and its cheap.

The Vigil

Sitting death a corpse of times loss in drips

I'll wait, she said in eons voice while zealots rage

His source of pride lay as dust once adorned

Pendulums swing marking time dresses in rust

Her echo of words speaks in his minds hollow

Soon the decay will banish her to tumble

The bend of limbs absent flesh to move

The signs of sanity melt the madness of his face

This shining vigil remains on a promise of return

His decrepit chair and spinal pour becomes one

The morass of synapse dissolves her face.

Banished the last of a believed memory

Halloweens gestures come and go in spectres

Why do I remain? The question roars

Last command with thoughts to leave results

.....in a quiet elbows creak.

Be Vigil

Today is here, tomorrow is never promised,
Yesterday is gone , but never forgotten. Things happen for a reason no matter the season.
All good things come to those who wait, never does it it hesitate. Green and blue, black and gray blessed to have another day.
So remember today, pray for tomorrow, learn from the past or have you forgotten?

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