Notes About The Poem

Author’s Note: These spoken word adaptations are drawn from my original poem ‘He Has a Name’, first published on PoetrySoup in 2021. You can read the original version (link below). Time moves, voices shift — everything changes, nothing changes.

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The Poet’s Vigil

Inspired by He Has a Name, by Suzette Richards (2021)
I. Ink and Ashes Steeped in the pain of his slain countryman, surrounded by the t u r m o i l of real fears laid bare — exposed — on the s.t.o.n.e - c.o.l.d T A R M A C. A poet dipped his I N K in the spilled T E A R S Hero or Zero? He had a name — he had a nameII. The Son Who Stood A mother’s S O N stood up to be counted in a time when voices were made M U T E; indoctrinated — to the edge of S T U P O R. A poet watches. Waits. Remains R E S O L U T E. He had a name? He had a name. III. No Monument NO statue would be erected in his name because he wasn’t the first man to be s*l*a*i*n. At the next roll call of C I V I L U N R E S T this poet’s words E A S E some of the N A K E D P A I N. He has a name! HE HAS A NAME!
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Daniels Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Excellent redo, Su. like how you’ve played with psychology of time-space & identity change within 1 contextual framework. Tesla & Einstein will give you a hug for this one. At edge of stupor is best line 4 me & how you’ve written TEARS : hero/zero ! Love this conceptual write of sadness 100%. This is what I mean when I say : bring Emotional Body, as entity, into Rationality 2 make humans Compassionate. Eckhart doesn’t give practical ways 2 do this, except thru meditation, but poetry can do it.x
Richards Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 6:05 AM
Thank you for reading and the high praise, Ghairo. Your detailed examples make me beam with pride. :-) It means a great deal to me coming from an accomplished poet like yourself. Your Spoken word has set the bar high.
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September 20, 2025 at 2:47 PM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful/creative "The Poet’s Vigil" write with a great picture. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a Blessed day/weekend writing away..........
Richards Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 11:47 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Hind Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 2:40 PM
Powerful, and just amazing, Suzette- the flow and rhythm truly got the point across
Richards Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 11:46 PM
Thank you, Paige.
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