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NUTCRACKER'S VIGIL

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a wooden body with steady onyx eyes fixed through the warm, festive glow of glimmer-strung branches heavy with ornaments crimson ribbons curling like frozen candy canes stalwart he stands, gray musket upright at rigid attention guarding wrapped promises~ stern eyes track the vintage train’s circuit buzzing relentlessly 'round tree-rooted tracks. devoted guardian rooted in pine needles preserving whimsy’s last spark in tinsel-strewn shadows~ protector of wide-eyed wonder when snow silences streets keeper of memory’s embers — cinnamon, carols, and cold cheeks. no mouse king approaches, no cracked walnut threatens; yet, still he stands watch over Christmases present and past~ a soldier of sentiment safeguarding the fragile, the glitter, the longing, the ache in the throat when the last bulb dims.
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Wolf Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 7:38 PM
Really elevating the maudlin into a stalwart guardian of all treasures past. Nicely done, Sara.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 6:51 PM
thanks, Gershon. Nutcrackers matter :-) appreciate your visit and always your support.
Gauthier Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 9:38 AM
Totally charming and perfect for the holiday season upon us. Thanks for sharing, Sara ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 5:58 PM
thanks for your ongoing support and for your kind words. Merry Christmas, Line.
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