Unpraised Poems


The Unseen Bloom

Not every blossom greets the sun,
Nor every triumph shouts it's won.
Some flowers bloom in silent grace,
Unseen by crowds, yet touched by faith.

They grow in corners most forget,
Where pain and prayer and love have met.
And though no stage may hold their name,
They burn with soft, eternal flame.

So let them bloom, those quiet souls,
Unpraised by fame, yet deeply whole.
For heaven sees what earth looks past—
The unseen bloom, the ones that last.
Categories: unpraised, inspirational, school, silence, spiritual,
Form: Quatrain

Possibility

I fantasized of a possibility we couldn't foresee,
a reality I would grasp between my dusted fingers
before it slipped away into the reaches of beaches,
in the shorelines' bays of an emotion that still lingers.

I'd walk with you in the crystal ball of our fate,
encased in a clear dewdrop of peace so undesecrated.
We'd dream of an angel-eyed crimson enclosure,
where we'll hide our daggers and sharp opinions.

That unlawful loving thinking that forged our home,
does its embers keep you warm where I couldn't?
Do you think of me as a lurking burden never known,
or am I the tangled knots in your life you'd comb?

But you keep my heart wrenched and unchanged.
it sinks my hopes but I can't help and figure you'd
leave me reeling for a feeling you couldn't pay,
yet all your kind signs give me shine and disarray.

You fill the gaps dug by my angers, I promise
my hopes aren’t a future unpraised and dishonest.
Categories: unpraised, longing, love, love hurts,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberA Lukewarm Child of God-

Father I'm your Son
lately I've been lukewarm, though
please forgive me Dad

I am unspoken
sometimes it's hard to cry those
the tears do subside

as I open mine 
eyes I'm blind by your Glory
please forgive me Dad

for being lukewarm
for being unpraised worthy
I am unspoken



3/10/23
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr.2023©
Categories: unpraised, analogy, anxiety, child, god,
Form: Haiku

Ah, Unpraised Soldier

The tall veteran
wears a camouflage faded cap 
and dark shades to hide
his smooth, scarred face: doesn't he wish
that somebody shook his hand...
ah, unpraised soldier!


Written on 6/10/2017
Categories: unpraised, america, emotions, hero, identity,
Form: Haiku

New Odessey

Stepping onto foreign soil
I take my first newfangled breath
"Here skies are blue
And dreams come true" -
They say, this is success.

With every step I take, I see
My peers ten steps ahead of me
They all began
Where I now stand
Much earlier than me.

Every time I try my skills
They say I must conform my ways.
My mother- tongue
Is here, unsung
My culture in this land unpraised.

I now must renovate myself
Must keep the stars I long in reach,
So let me paint
A new constraint
Upon my heart as they reteach

My actions to be like the "norm"
I feel a new identity!
At first averse,
But now immersed,
I start my walk in novelty.

The path I trek is frightening!
No matter what, I need to fight -
I trip and fall,
With demons, brawl,
Torn to pieces, move in fright.

But now I stand upon a hill
And now the fog has cleared a bit
I stand achieved,
But soon I leave
To conquer mountains greater still.
Categories: unpraised, america, change, discrimination, identity,
Form: I do not know?


Premium MemberThe Second Miracle,,,,,,,

Oh "Great Spirit" hear my words of truth and prayer

Long life for this child, breathing the earths fresh air

Teachers were given this precious gift, from your guiding hands 

My grand-daughter they named Mali, who has all the lesson plans 

So, that all may learn your lessons and the wisdom of your word, 

to her parents you gave choices, instead of following the herd. 

To choose the best for Mali, with all the fear and doubt you raised 

Is a challenge to the best yet, they completed it unpraised. 

They overcame each obstacle and hurdle that you made 

With fear and doubt they fought so, she won't be dismayed. 

I know life is Yours to give or take, anytime you choose, 

with that give her life, on earth, and put mine as a muse. 

This world no longer has use of it and I feel its course is run 

So let, your child, Mali live the life, that Liam had begun 

I see she has much to give this world, that it could surely use 

My plea is that her life be renewed, before you must re-cuse
Categories: unpraised, faith, hope, inspirational, philosophy,
Form: Couplet

Names Known To God

I SEARCH THE WORLD, 
TO FIND EARTH'S MOST HEROIC NAMES, 
I SCAN THICK HISTORY BOOKS, 
AND PROBE VAST HALLS OF FAME. 

I PONDER MYRTYRS, 
BURIED BENEATH CHURCH SPIRES AND STEEPLES, 
AND I WEPT BY SHRINES OF FREEDOM, 
WHERE PATRIOTS DIED FOR PEOPLE. 

UNPRAISED, 
MOST HEROES OFTEN LAY DOWN THEIR LIVES, 
WITH NO ONE TO NOTE THEIR DEEDS OF BRAVERY, 
AND DAYS OF FACING STRIFE. 

YET I THINK GOD, 
STILL TAKES NOTE OF THOSE WITHOUT PRAISE, 
THOSE WHO STOOD AT THEIR POSTS OF DUTY, 
AND THOSE WHO STRUGGLED THROUGH LIFE'S DAYS. 

SOMETIMES I THINK I FOUND SOME NAMES, 
WELL, AT LEAST MOST OF THEM, 
BUT THOSE NAMES ARE KNOWN TO GOD, 
AND ONLY KNOWN TO HIM.
Categories: unpraised, dedication
Form: Quatrain

Teasing

Tonight
when I come back
clad in wounded memories,
one seed deep
the pod would lie in the forest of hands,
I will wake you up in between
the kisses of moon.

The hawthorn lamps –
let me light the last unlit
of empty night, for a farewell
to a black rose, who had collected
the unpraised thorns.

The fugitive wind shuts the smart tears.



SATISH VERMA
Categories: unpraised, adventure, allegory, angst, animals,
Form: I do not know?
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter