Rowena Velasco Poet Quatrain

The Unseen Bloom

Not every blossom greets the sun,
Nor every triumph shouts it's won.
Some flowers bloom in silent grace,
Unseen by crowds, yet touched by faith.

They grow in corners most forget,
Where pain and prayer and love have met.
And though no stage may hold their name,
They burn with soft, eternal flame.

So let them bloom, those quiet souls,
Unpraised by fame, yet deeply whole.
For heaven sees what earth looks past—
The unseen bloom, the ones that last.

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Emilia James August 12, 2025 at 3:07 AM Have just read a few of your poems and you write so beautifully and this one is no exception. I especially like the feeling of strength in the last stanza. Hope you have lovely day Rowena. Emilia : )

Duke Beaufort July 18, 2025 at 4:27 AM Hi again. Sounds like you are describing a certain person, and I suspect I know who it is. If we like what we are doing, then we shine no matter what others think. Just have your heart in what you do and rewards will come. Smiles!!! Rowena Velasco July 18, 2025 at 4:32 AM Hi! You might be right—I do believe when we truly love what we do, that passion shines through no matter what others say. Keeping the heart in it is the key. Thanks for the smiles!

Zyrool Gifford June 30, 2025 at 4:32 PM Hello Rowena, this is a touching piece, beautifully written. So true Heaven sees everything. Wishing you a great new week ahead, fellow poet. Rowena Velasco July 2, 2025 at 6:56 AM Thank you so much Zyrool for your kind words and encouragement. They truly mean a lot, especially during times when silence can feel heavy. Yes, Heaven sees everything—and that gives me strength to keep writing, hoping, and healing. Wishing you a beautiful and inspired week as well, fellow poet.