Short Overdone Poems

Are 
you going
to the circus?
Is never a good line
to use when she 
asks how her 
make-up 
looks...

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the tips look overdone
there is no more burning smell
a pyre, but what has been here?
No smells or remnants left
Only ashes
...

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A gushing response,
deeply forgiving.
Oral translation,
ripe for the picking.
ADORED AREN'T YOU?
Thrilling moments,
Isolation abating,
Overdone on the waiting,
now....

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My young blind date thought he was hilarious
His antics were corny, ridiculously overdone and nefarious
Mother thought he was charmingly gregarious.
Why don’t you date him? Suggested Uncle Darius....

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Lustifully
Overreaching
Vainly
Eager


Sensually
Public
Rendering
Everything
Alternatively 
Disfigured
Sexual


Optimistically
Neurotic


Teenaged
Overdone
Always
Sexually
Tired...

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She has a pink catitude that cannot be undone.
She is clever and funny with lots of feline fun.
I love her cat ears, they are not prissy or overdone.
I am quite all right that she is cat number one...

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Hyena the ringmaster with a hidey hidey ho
We gawkers love the enthusiasm that you always show
Your ways are loud and proud, but in no way overdone.
Proving to us circus folk that ring-mastering can be fun!...

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marshmallow earth
spinning on gravity' stick
hovering over embers of the sun
perfectly singed
life begins-is
quickly overdone
licked by the embers of the sun
marshmallow earth
burnt to a crisp
deserted...

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Lunatics are people too, although off their bolder
Well what's normal, isn't it in the eye of the beholder
Lunacy can be fun
If not to be overdone
I'm a prime example, could be the titleholder...

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Wall-to-wall women, a dream I often have
Not complaining, but it maybe overdone a wee tad
Lying here on the floor
Screaming, “mercy, no more”
But the gaiety in my voice betrays me, lying unclad...

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Wall-to-wall women, a dream I often have
Not complaining, but it may be overdone a wee tad
Lying here on the floor
Screaming, “please, no more”
But the gaiety in my voice betrays me, lying unclad...

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Uncouth In Kissing Booth

Trump was out of control and uncouth;
Grabbed women's anatomy in kissing booth;
He was one;
Had overdone
His screws are loose and so is each tooth.

Be prepared for fallout.

Jim Horn...

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Lunatics are people too, although off their bolder
Well what's normal anyway, isn't it in the eye of the beholder
Lunacy can be fun
If not too overdone
I'm a prime example, could be the world titleholder...

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A dad was washing the car with his son!
Here we go again with the literal stuff, so dumb!
Son said next time, let's use a sponge
This really hurts me quite a bunch
Now how silly is THAT... seems a bit overdone!!!...

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Knowingly overdone
                  kind of low brow drama.
         Kooky, loud and splashy
keen on melodrama.
         Kinky and weird, it can
                  knit one's emotions in
knots, with its garish ways.




Written on 3/8/2017
Pleiades...

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Semantics and Antics and Fanatics

Is special place in my mind for semantics
Even allows additional space for antics
Words come together and are logically appealing
No matter what you think or how you are feeling;
If overdone are considered to be fanatics.

Jim Horn...

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soup overdone comments blow hot air ~ AI bubbles up everywhere 

bits and bytes chain reactions going spare ~ does admin really care 

esoteric brainwashing on blogs here and there ~ bullsh!t doctrinaire 

witnesses hold high ground au contraire mon frere ~ sisters in a lair

HMS...

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Laughter- part of life's fun-
May cause tummies to ache if it goes on too long-
Overdone.

Our ears and eyes-
Getting lost in our giggles song-
Devise

Loud stores
That let loose strong
Roars!

Laughter- part of life's fun;
Getting lost in our giggles song- 
Roars!
...

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Oxymorons are cynical and fun.
Be careful though if you want to use one.
If it is familiar, it may sound quite trite.
Which murders your poem with a harsh bite.

Deafening silence is way overdone.
Boisterously shy is a good one though, hon
Brilliant idiot may be available in a tweet.
But avoid cliques like bittersweet....

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"Watch out! This here is much worse than falling timber!" --quote by poet 


You flirt with risk one too many times.
The pin is p u l l e d; it's now airborne.
Oh boy, you've really overdone this one.
You chose the wrong toy to play with;
And this sword of Damocles blows BIG!
Mama sure wasn't around to warn ya...
...

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I would say I love you to the moon and back but that’s so overdone

So instead I’ll say I love you like love is something new

We all treat new things like glass, handling with care

Because your heart is so precious I would never want to let it fall from my grasp

Let’s make love last forever again

Like the old times of the past

p.s. old fashioned love needs to be brand new…...

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Scorned and scorched by the flames of the sun
Burnt by hell’s fire, her reign’s begun
I tremble with fear of the chosen one
Ballsy, cocky, arrogance well hung
This talentless slander seems to be fun
(k)No(W) judgment or guilt, excuse the pun
But if the shoe fits, wear it and run
While tucking tail, think temple and gun
and Russian roulette or combustion
Stick a fork in yourself, you’re overdone...

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Even his score
detached a dirigible in a storm?

Nothing abhorrent-

or should the dogs take with me?

Making jogs..?

Hog logs?

I had to remain detached;

the fuzzy are right,

reaching storm height,

long overdone night...

I should have come twice,

knowing it'd be so nice-

you have had the scare,

and many slices of pie-

why so many vices though?

Language-
lion's-
loans....

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Surrender to be free
Shut your eyes to see
Saying yes to hear no
Finding love by letting go

Being fast for a slow burn
Satisfy to always yearn
Whisper low high scream
Waking into a daydream

Being first for last place
Losing to win the race
Asking why when you know
Falling up through a hole

Hurry up and wait
Leaving early to arrive late
Working hard for fun
In the raw overdone


11/11/2008...

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Life is a roller coaster
  No, no, no. That’s been used

O.K. Life’s hard, then you die
  Nope. Heard that one too

Alright. Life’s a series of hairpin turns
  A little overdramatic, perhaps 

Hmm… Life’s a sucker punch to the gut
  Anthony Blinken would sue me…

O.K. Life’s a never-ending series of surprises
  Eh… Way overdone, don’t you think

I’ve got it now: At today's prices
  Life's a never-ending crisis...

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