Overdone
Surrender to be free
Shut your eyes to see
Saying yes to hear no
Finding love by letting go
Being fast for a slow burn
Satisfy to always yearn
Whisper low high scream
Waking into a daydream
Being first for last place
Losing to win the race
Asking why when you know
Falling up through a hole
Hurry up and wait
Leaving early to arrive late
Working hard for fun
In the raw overdone
11/11/2008
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