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Marshmallow Earth

marshmallow earth
spinning on gravity's stick
hovering over embers of the sun
perfectly singed
life begins-is
quickly overdone
licked by the embers of the sun
marshmallow earth
burnt to a crisp
deserted
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Romios Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 10:49 AM
I don't know how you combine such concepts to create a masterpiece in a poem. A FAV. Your poems are so natural. Like a waterfall, no matter what the subject. I learn from you but canniot be you. Darn!))
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