Brand New

I would say I love you to the moon and back but that’s so overdone

So instead I’ll say I love you like love is something new

We all treat new things like glass, handling with care

Because your heart is so precious I would never want to let it fall from my grasp

Let’s make love last forever again

Like the old times of the past

p.s. old fashioned love needs to be brand new…
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December 18, 2023 at 1:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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