Untitled, La Boheme Series

I have begun a short haiku series based on my favorite opera La boheme.  This haiku may begin the series,not sure.  Hoping for feedback.  Thanks for reading.


le bon homme Puccini smiles
white magnolias
by concert halls bloom


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(c)sally Young eslinger 1/14/2021
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Levasseur Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Enjoyed this write.
Eslinger Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Hi, Rob. Thanks much for your time to stop by, read, and comment. Means a lot.
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