Noel Flater Poet Rhyme

Polar Vortex

Polar Vortex

Knock, knock, knock,
Open the door
The cold rushes in
Knocks me to the floor!

Lock, lock, lock,
Locking the door
Cold go away
Come back here no more!

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Comments: Minus something, it’s cold outside! FEEDBACK WELCOME.

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Leotis Hargrove April 6, 2022 at 2:21 PM Nice piece! Thank you for sharing! Great work of art!.

Darlene De Beaulieu March 11, 2019 at 5:16 PM Hello Noel Flater, so nice to meet you. After opening the door, it would take time to warm up from the frosty cold draft. have a nice day my friend. Wher do you live? Darlene De Beaulieu March 13, 2019 at 11:31 AM I will read your poems. It ls a Spring thaw today. have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu March 12, 2019 at 7:15 AM Hello Noel, I live in Canada and we have some winter storms that are rough. I don't mind the snow, I do not like the freezing rain. I live in Kitchener Ontario. Have a nice day my friend. Noel Flater March 12, 2019 at 4:40 AM Darlene, I live in Maryland USA, which sometimes gets cold. Noel

Debbie Duncan March 8, 2019 at 10:49 PM Nice rhyme, I'm in Calif. :) Noel Flater March 9, 2019 at 4:54 PM Debbie, lucky warm California you. Noel

P.S. Awtry February 3, 2019 at 6:10 PM adorable! Noel Flater February 3, 2019 at 6:45 PM Thx P.S.

Phil Capitano February 1, 2019 at 7:29 AM Good one Noel, its -25C here in Muskoka Canada which is about -50F. Bundle up!! Noel Flater April 27, 2019 at 2:36 PM Will do Phil, -25C below is a bone chiller. Sand Blown February 1, 2019 at 9:58 PM canuck eh!?...round northern ontario here we got wind chill...dry enough to steal your soul...mmmhahahaaaa Noel Flater February 1, 2019 at 6:26 PM Will do Phil, -25C is a bone chiller!