Polar Vortex

Polar Vortex

Knock, knock, knock,
Open the door
The cold rushes in
Knocks me to the floor!

Lock, lock, lock,
Locking the door
Cold go away
Come back here no more!

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Comments: Minus something, it’s cold outside! FEEDBACK WELCOME.

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Date: 4/6/2022 2:21:00 PM
Nice piece! Thank you for sharing! Great work of art!.
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Date: 3/11/2019 5:16:00 PM
Hello Noel Flater, so nice to meet you. After opening the door, it would take time to warm up from the frosty cold draft. have a nice day my friend. Wher do you live?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/13/2019 11:31:00 AM
I will read your poems. It ls a Spring thaw today. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2019 7:15:00 AM
Hello Noel, I live in Canada and we have some winter storms that are rough. I don't mind the snow, I do not like the freezing rain. I live in Kitchener Ontario. Have a nice day my friend.
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Noel Flater
Date: 3/12/2019 4:40:00 AM
Darlene, I live in Maryland USA, which sometimes gets cold. Noel
Date: 3/8/2019 10:49:00 PM
Nice rhyme, I'm in Calif. :)
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Noel Flater
Date: 3/9/2019 4:54:00 PM
Debbie, lucky warm California you. Noel
Date: 2/3/2019 6:10:00 PM
adorable!
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Noel Flater
Date: 2/3/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thx P.S.
Date: 2/1/2019 7:29:00 AM
Good one Noel, its -25C here in Muskoka Canada which is about -50F. Bundle up!!
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Noel Flater
Date: 4/27/2019 2:36:00 PM
Will do Phil, -25C below is a bone chiller.
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Sand Blown
Date: 2/1/2019 9:58:00 PM
canuck eh!?...round northern ontario here we got wind chill...dry enough to steal your soul...mmmhahahaaaa
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Noel Flater
Date: 2/1/2019 6:26:00 PM
Will do Phil, -25C is a bone chiller!
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