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Mangled Time

Datura(belladonna perhaps in another form)

Matures the galaxy in jealousy despising love

Releasing jasmines death twisting Aphrodite's heads upon loves rewinding failures

Creation in question

Call from my mouth your kindness

Respond silence

Squander obnoxious craft

Illness requires me

And again

I disappear your vapors

Mangled Mind

I'm afraid
I'm broken
Time's delayed

Imprisoned in my mind
Its eating me alive
All hope is left behind

Tears flow like rivers carving casms
Down my face and straight into my heart
Holding my will to live at ransom.
My choices stolen, never returned.
Hopelessness, helplessness, lonliness
Wandering blind, Lessons never learned.
What would i say with my final breath
Suicidal thoughts consume my head
Inevitably a pointles death

A 3-6-9 Poem
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Monday 26th July 2021
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member The Supplicant Sabotuer

How interesting can you be ?
Once whole and confident 
Focused Intent
A likely pre set present tense 
All my ducks in a row
Ready to cluck out in militant fashion
A prepubescent repetition
Shallow and still
Reflection and refraction


The reinvention of perfection is a fruitless pursuit

Decades of good intentions
Mirrored by calloused intervention
In a frigid current 
Bent, by shifting sedimentation, 
its perception 
Busted back 
Crumpled putrid  IF- I-CA-tion
Mangled fingerling 
Chewed up and spat out
Indistinguishable platitudes 
Presented for inspection 
Consorted and Contorted
Beyond Recognition 


The Reclamation  paralyzed, in part, by Bombastic Voyeurs and 
The Chief Architect


Whose The Supplicant Saboteur ?

Mangled Fate

This fate is severely mangled
fierce storms define its exterior
And in this daze, 
they do not cease
Heartstrings tear its beliefs,
and fatality enjoys it

Shades withstand its 
diminishing effects
So without pace
its slowing trance atones
Passion draws its pangs
and futility reminds it

A Mangled Heart

A Mangled Heart...


Why do my tears not simply fall,

my heart mangled, cast along these empty streets
a wreck left to rust, bleakly lost in the blurry haze,
my dreams blowing in the dust of the passing days.



Why do my tears  not simply fall,
weeping within, fractured inside,

memories of you wounding me still,
a void so vast no one else can ever fill,

cradling memories, glowing with your light,
as another day departs, beckoning one more,
barren, cold, hollowed-out wednesday night.


Strangled and Mangled By the Estranged

To know a man

to know a man
is to know what he expects
without him telling you

know what he hates
know what he loves
know what he wants

without a word said
his desires are understood
and prepared for him on a platter

but, once love, respect, and honor
has left the marriage, it becomes
all for nothing

there's nothing i can say that matters
nothing i can do that'll change a thing
just the cold hard facts he no longer desires me

Premium Member Mangled Minds

Mangled Minds
Mangled Minds entwined with Rhymes,
My brother’s repeat this nonsense,
Once brilliant men, now lost my kin,
Just ramble in confusion,
Many a man that I’ve met on life’s road,
Has endured the weight of trials untold,
And some survived to thrive and die,
But most just fell, into this hell, that sometimes still afflicts me,
Where are you God? And are you fair? For then these men needed you most, you 
didn’t seem to be there.
And this is the fate which grabbed many a man,
Who stood the tied, and proclaimed Christ to this land,
And I wonder if, it is not finally my lot, 
To Join Them.

Shakespearean Tale Mangled

Romeo, my Romeo, I adore thee, whispers Juliet,
oh you cause my heart to race with each tiny beat,
many times I dreamt being a wife and all your own,
end this torment, sire your babies, take me home,
oh, Romeo, beloved Romeo, say you will have me.

No, Juliet, I'm afraid not, replies hard-to-get Romy,
age and situation tell me we're just not meant to be,
circumstances do not smile on us, my luckless lady,
eighteen summers you are whilst I'm almost sixty,
sire babies? spirit is willing but the flesh is weak.

Daytime arrives and starry-eyed Romeo awakes,
realizing he was dreaming from night till daybreak,
engaging in romantic thoughts he could ill afford
amid obligations and a quite unforgiving landlord;
might as well start working, go straight for the kill,
sleep and nightmares would not pay his utility bill!
Form: Narrative

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