Low Lying Poems

Gold Seats

Gold Seats

Tiers of 
gold seats will 
descend from a 
low-lying cloud only when you 
attach two handles (bike handles) to 
your letterbox.
Categories: low lying, humor,
Form: Free verse

Compensation

Compensations

Compensations for 
those spat on or 
were bullied: glow in 
the dark expressions, grasshopper identity (for 
one day only), free tickets to
the birth of bees at
The Big Bee Hive tourist attraction in 
Elmwood, and
become an 
Activity Manager of the 
low-lying clouds.
Categories: low lying, humor,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberCATs EYE

low-lying cloud - one-eyed gray and white purring
Categories: low lying, animal, weather,
Form: Monoku

Premium MemberFear Is a Liar

Fear, a liar that can delude or mislead you.
It tells you that you are cursed and doomed.
Have courage to stop and look at Fear in the face!

It comes, like hooded serpents from dark holes, 
with venom in their fangs ready to snap at.

Like, monsters from roaring seas
that rest on the sands 
as boulders on a low - lying ledge

Or, vampires hurtling down 
to suck your blood in dark
with their outgrown canine teeth

Fears are wasps swarming round,
like embers from a furnace
or scorpions with poisonous stings,
hidden in their tails.

Living with them 
is like getting enclosed in a blind alley,
pacing forward and rushing backward, 
seeing the gates fastened tight with iron shutters, 
or being chased after, 
by an elephant on rampage.

Never succumb, but defend its onslaught,
for your arch enemy sure shall 
shred you to pieces if you let yourself to be subdued!

Jan. 21. 2023

~ Placed First~

Fear is a Liar Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Sotto Poet
Categories: low lying, allusion, angst, dark, fear,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberIn the Chilly Month of December

In The Chilly Month of December

And so comes Winter, after late Fall,
Where from ashen skies of low-lying clouds,
Snowflakes fall enshrouding the town
And piling on people tramping around,
Who are out and about embracing nature,
In the chilly month of December.

Snow fills footprints extinguishing traces
Of icy stares glinting on smiling faces,
From people uttering steamy graces,
When encroaching upon each other’s spaces,
Expressed gaily with warmth of timbre
In the chilly month of December.

And this I say to these venturous kind,
Who are enjoying the wintry weather,
“Beautiful the sight that enthralls my eye.”
In the chilly month of December.
Categories: low lying, december, perspective, snow, winter,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberInvitation Only

Spellbinding place where rainbow water flows
Frogspawn and tadpoles such enormous change
Arcadian forest where pixie dust blows
All creatures are welcome no one estranged.

Twilight is magical what will happen?
Atmosphere filled with dire baritone croak
Whispering rustle, low-lying bracken
Fae folk appear under red velvet cloak.

Fireflies lighting wonderful oasis
Elderly toad croaks musical score
Pompous owl tries to intimidate
Proud of position he is the law.

Beetles scurrying they are so anxious
Happy invitation it's party time
Cantankerous bees prickly as cactus
Covered in honey they buzz "all mine".

Terrapin plays music on his bassoon
Boisterous sound that creatures adore
Leprechaun baked magical mushroom
Mesmeric food eaten they all chant more!


Pixabay image by Sandra_Schoen
Categories: low lying, fantasy, fun,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberBrace For Impact

Global warming is heating up now:
it's no communist Chinese cash cow.
And the low-lying lands are flooding:
they can't be saved; we lack the know-how.

Many people are going to die
as oceans rise to an all-time high.
And we need to brace for its impact,
for a severe climate change is nigh.

As starvation and disease increase,
looters will be shot by the police.
And countries will fight for resources;
thereby thwarting any chance for peace.

We're no longer able to prevent,
nor slow down this climatic event.
Cash can't stop the inevitable:
it could have, but that coin has been spent.

Bound to Earth, we share the same tether:
no one is immune to the weather.
And there's no point in assigning blame:
we must face this crisis together.
Categories: low lying, angst, anxiety, change, environment,
Form: Rubaiyat

Through the Eyes of My Demise

When the ripples unfold, a story untold; far, far away. 
In the brume of the cold, my humble abode: far, far away. 

From a birds-eye view, I watch as they mooch,
Pirates they loot off my roots. 

From the tip of the nuke to the low-lying truce,
Compacted the power abused. 

I cry I cry, far away I cry 
They flow with life but take no form.
Sugar honey coconut from a birds-eye view 
My tears straighten from the bending of the storm. 

At last I feel, the burns and the lies 
Far, far away, through the eyes of my demise. 

Mama I’m home.
Categories: low lying, betrayal, blessing, corruption, culture,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberMy Mountain Home

Where eagles soar above the low-lying hills
Here towering pines hold up the azure skies
In humble mountain home my heart thrills,
Where eagles soar above the low-lying hills
And dip suddenly for water in rippling rills
If I think of leaving tears well up in my eyes,
Where eagles soar above the low-lying hills
Here towering pines hold up the azure skies.

If I think of leaving tears well up in my eyes
In humble mountain home my heart thrills
Where eagles soar above the low-lying hills
And dip suddenly for water in rippling rills
Here towering pines hold up the azure skies
My love for my mountain home never dies.

written January 13, 2022
[a Trionet. my poetic form combining
the triolet and the sonnet with alternate
rhyme scheme. See "New Poetic Forms"]
Categories: low lying, home, mountains, nature,
Form: Triolet

Premium MemberLow Lying Fear

Heart pounding with fog 
low lying fear froze my feet 
devouring me.
Categories: low lying, emotions, fear, weather,
Form: Haiku

Barrier of Thunder

Searching the shortest
path to earth

Elementary theoretical physics

Sat watching in wonder 
the greatest show on earth

I just saw lightning strike the
mast of the north tower come
stroke of midnight

And even though it was covered in
low lying cloud from the 50th
floor up

It made it visible 
by bathing it by it's
strikes violent afterglow

Nature's way of reminding
us the power it wields by
means of a common everyday
weather phenomena

Countless many times more powerful
than any passanger or war plane
Categories: low lying, slam,
Form: Free verse

Rain Whispers

Low-lying duvet of grey clouds hover 
like a damp gray hat hopping over heads
Soon a promise of rain whispers and spreads 
on parched gardens waiting like a lover.

Smears of rain will dim the air taunting leaves 
their whispers dilute the rhythmic tapping 
of rain pellets on rooftop eaves crashing, 
melting to nothing as earth dreams and grieves.

On the dreaming surface of the river 
rain whispers false promises to the wind 
that the tides of night forgive those who sinned 
on their shores, and moon glow will turn silver. 

Darkness encroaches as the faintest chill 
sneaks in, rain whispers to a fading pain, 
“Wait till morn, it’s time to be grass again, 
to be wild, grow green, your cup of dreams fill.”

Jjote 013121
Categories: low lying, dream, rain,
Form: Quatrain

Premium MemberThe Chilly Month of December

The Chilly Month of December

And so comes Winter, after late Fall.
Where from ashen skies of low lying clouds,
Snowflakes fall enshrouding the town,
And piling on people tramping around.

Snow fills footprints extinguishing traces
Of icy stares glinting on smiling faces,
From people uttering steamy greetings,
Who are out and about in the wintry season.

And this I say to these venturous kind,
Who are enjoying the snowy weather,
“Beautiful the sight that enthralls my eye.”
In the chilly month of December.
Categories: low lying, december, imagery, seasons, winter,
Form: Quatrain

Premium MemberAfter the Hurricane

Deadly hurricane surged and diffused all over
Destroyed all with its diabolical power 
Devastated and submerged the low-lying realms
Demolished all docks, houses, roads and toppled elms
Decimated the life in a large proportion
Dismantled violently the secure position
Disfigured beautiful landscape of rich green lush
Dispelled existing course of action into gush
Danger bells were ignored and there so many wails
Distressing ghastly sights are heart rending tales
Detached life from nature is inexcusable
Destined grief, a wound which is incorrigible

After the Hurricane Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: craig cornish
Date: 27/10/2020
Categories: low lying, rain, wind,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberThe Fall Season

Summer is now fading and fall draws near
Chill in the morning and last thing at night
Leaves are dying out they'll soon disappear 
Before they go we'll see colours delight. 

Fall paints a canvas of blues, reds and gold 
As late fall comes they'll be all blown away 
By strong northerly gusts biting and cold
The low lying sun will shorten our day.

All the trees now take on an eerie scene 
Skeletal limbs that look spooky at night
Kids trick or treat celebrate Halloween
Wear scary ghoul outfits in the moonlight.

The fall takes a bow it's now time to go
Winter marches in with frost, ice and snow.




Written 25th August 2020.
Categories: low lying, autumn, seasons, weather,
Form: Sonnet

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