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Fear Is a Liar

Fear, a liar that can delude or mislead you. It tells you that you are cursed and doomed. Have courage to stop and look at Fear in the face! It comes, like hooded serpents from dark holes, with venom in their fangs ready to snap at. Like, monsters from roaring seas that rest on the sands as boulders on a low - lying ledge Or, vampires hurtling down to suck your blood in dark with their outgrown canine teeth Fears are wasps swarming round, like embers from a furnace or scorpions with poisonous stings, hidden in their tails. Living with them is like getting enclosed in a blind alley, pacing forward and rushing backward, seeing the gates fastened tight with iron shutters, or being chased after, by an elephant on rampage. Never succumb, but defend its onslaught, for your arch enemy sure shall shred you to pieces if you let yourself to be subdued! Jan. 21. 2023 ~ Placed First~ Fear is a Liar Poetry Contest Sponsor- Sotto Poet

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Date: 1/24/2023 6:48:00 AM
Brilliant descriptions and write about fear my dear friend Valsa. Strong affirmation in every line expressed well by your creative words. Another impressive masterpiece from you. My warm and big Congratulations on your first place win! I like your poem so much and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs
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Date: 1/24/2023 6:35:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win, Valsa. Have a wonderful day.
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Date: 1/23/2023 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a write. I really enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Date: 1/23/2023 9:17:00 AM
This was excellent! Sincerest congratulations for winning first place in my contest, VALSA.
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Date: 1/23/2023 5:47:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Lasaad for picking up my poem for a first place win . So Glad for the chance given and the efforts taken in holding a contest in such an organized way. I won't be able to post comments or poems for three days as I am going on a tour.
Date: 1/21/2023 7:55:00 PM
An impassioned poem, Valsa. lt acts as a weapon against fear ! A true inspiration.
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Date: 1/21/2023 7:24:00 PM
How about a cannister of 'Stinging Insects Spray' for a Chinese New Year present?! ~ Mr. Always Thinking of the Other Person (lol).
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Date: 1/21/2023 6:34:00 AM
Amazingly penned! It's very heart-wrecking that fear can make anything inside out... As a teenager I constantly live in fear of independence and being away from family...hope I would be able to overpower it sooner! Have a great day! :)
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Date: 1/21/2023 5:30:00 AM
So well conveyed--the destructive power of fear. It roils humanity ceaselessly. Great advice in the ending lines, Valsa.
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Date: 1/21/2023 2:19:00 AM
I am always living in fear these days. Too many issues. But with God's help I survive. Lovely poem, dear Valsa.
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Date: 1/20/2023 6:16:00 PM
You got me running for the light, : ). I have seen enough: )
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