Rain Whispers

Low-lying duvet of grey clouds hover 
like a damp gray hat hopping over heads
Soon a promise of rain whispers and spreads 
on parched gardens waiting like a lover.

Smears of rain will dim the air taunting leaves 
their whispers dilute the rhythmic tapping 
of rain pellets on rooftop eaves crashing, 
melting to nothing as earth dreams and grieves.

On the dreaming surface of the river 
rain whispers false promises to the wind 
that the tides of night forgive those who sinned 
on their shores, and moon glow will turn silver. 

Darkness encroaches as the faintest chill 
sneaks in, rain whispers to a fading pain, 
“Wait till morn, it’s time to be grass again, 
to be wild, grow green, your cup of dreams fill.”

Jjote 013121
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcintosh Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 5:45 AM
Lovely.. Rain can so inspire... God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Costales Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Regina. I agree with you - nothing is quite soothing as gentle rain.
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 9:58 PM
Lovely poem, Josefina ~
Costales Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Line. Sorry I missed your reply earlier
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 4:27 PM
what a beautiful poem. Yes, I can see that you like personifcation same as I do. Wonderful.
Costales Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Yes, personification gets me inspired too. Thanks
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