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Free Will Hath Limitations

(following on figurative heals 
   sans, l'amour, 
i.e.,and that bastard conception 
   of life, liberty, and the
pursuit by George - Marshall ling, Grant 
   ting, and Bing Frank.)

Expectant motherhood generates aurorean
sonogram x-ray zooms 
   bringing developed fetus 
   healthily shimmering viz, 
   quasi hologram seen
glowing halo, inducing 
   jubilant kickstarter lil bean, 
administering capitalone 

   earthlinked joyful lyft, 
   natural pheromone readying cerulean
tommorrows, venerated ecstacy doth gleam
zinging bounteous 
   dizzying feelings hormones houseclean
jackanapes leviathon nestling 
   pinterestinly interocean
reaching terminus vista 

   xing zee birth canal mien
doctor readies Fallopian tube cutting 
   helping jiggle little nymphean
possibly ranking... 
   as future topnotch venerated Olympian 
fast forward to joyful loving neuro
   logically plain resplendent teen
knee weeny tiny 

   vaunted expanding zing 
   baby dripping Vasoline
like goo fully gesticulating 
   happy jolly newborn.
Which miracle whipped 
   purely by chance
given reason to the most orthodox 
   to sing and dance,

sans said singular biological 
   phenomenon does enhance
freshly minted parents, 
   or the mommas 
   and papas genetic 
   copy wrought grants
who already passed along 
   to a brood of offspring
 
   gushing with excitement 
   akin to fire hydrants
spewing forth fountain head 
   treasuring such Kodak moment, 
   cuz such instance
and subsequent tender 
   wonderful blessed 
   Instamatic reverent cherished instants

will zip at greased lightening
   via speeding hurled lance
sing remembrance of things past 
   during twilight years, 
   an eye blink those yesterdays, 
   when my troubles seemed so far away
   and upon being centenarian, 
   doddering fogie gripping hold,

   hugging intensely, indubitably decrying
   how quickly of 
   decades long ex pants
   didst elapse, when tendering
   to a coliciky, finicky, 
   inscrutably lemony snickety offspring
   wishing infant would grow up already, 
   now onset of autonomy 

   Das Agean sea sunned 
   father or mother 
   hood doth rants
at father time, he doth access
   without a word an excel lent 
   power point demonstration 
   with near vertical line brevity
   of how mortality slants.


Premium Member Fair Ground and Stadium

FAIR GROUND AND STADIUM
                                                                                                                               
   Remembering open ground and stadium.
                                                                                                                                  
   Loud applause and cheerful noise to hear.
                                                                                                                               
   Games, shows, fair, exhibitions, circus at random
                                                                                                                                 
    attracting populace throughout the year.
                                                                                                                                
    
   Memories of immense joy on childhood day
                                                                                                                                   
  Moving in circular motion on swinging wheel.
                                                                                                                                
   Rustic village seller knew well to play    
                                                                                                                                 
      flute violin in tune for kids to thrill.
                                                                                                                                 
   
    Now video games startling kids in fair ground.
                                                                                                                                  
    In stadium robot toys speak, make movement,
                                                                                                                                  
     Yet still fireworks and crackers produce loud sound.
                                                                                                                                  
    Present crowd on clamor as in past with excitement. 
   
   10/29/17    Photo 1

 The sounds of The Past Contest by Eve Roper
                                                                        
Third Place
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Supermoon

I was rather informed on definitions but on time frames, not so much.                                                                    I was anticipating an experience never realized for more than 150 years.                                                                  The sun, moon, and earth were orchestrating one giant and rare exposition.                                                 When I heard that a Supermoon was coming on January 31st, I said, "This I got to see".                                                                                                         

I, a mortal with a far lesser task, did something very wrong yesterday.                                                                                                                        It was absolutely unnecessary and wrong for me to get up before 2:30 AMPT. It was simply too early for me to be gazing at the moon on a chilly winter's morn. Moreover, such unnecessary and inexcusable time was just wrong no matter what.  I also did something very right yesterday, and it wasn't yielding the 'right of way' to a wrong way driver. It was courageously right for me to get up early this morning, and accomplish my goal because I refused to be denied seeing a Supermoon.                                             

At 2:28 AM, the moon could be seen from just outside of my front door, looking straight up into the western sky.  It was not as large as I had anticipated but very bright.  Besides, I would soon learn that I was too early and I was in for a little wait to really benefit the best show of the Supermoon.                                                                                          At 3:55 AM, I noticed a partial eclipse beginning to take shape.                                                          At 5:50 AM, from my back window, with excitement I beheld a Redmoon.                                                   At 6:18 AM,  there was a great view of the eclipse.                                                                                                  At 6:49 AM, the great view of the moon is breaking up.                                                                                             At 6:54 AM, the veiw of the moon had disappeared and my moon watch was over.                  02012018 PS
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Em Bracing the Joy

All those High School years, she stared at smiles
and would envy those, lined up in rows
shoulder to shoulder, enjoying the carefree days.
They with porcelain jewels, of sparkling white
she would have given her life to have such shine,
but was much too shy, to seek their eyes

At fifteen years old...she averted her eyes
while beneath her nose, no winning smile
would grace her face.  So, to avoid disgrace, she declined to shine
or laugh with the kids in the algebra rows.
How often she'd long to star in the play and dazzle her whites
"Be patient," they'd tell her...."You'll be a beauty, one day"

And while she waited impatiently for that far away day
keeping chin down, this ugly duckling, with lowered eyes
It may seem extreme, but a few kids, with straight and white,
called her "Metal Mouth", which dampened her spirit and also her smile.
Barely could she eat the mushy fruits, passing the rows
of cripsy foods, ate mostly mashed and white, pining for a crisp apple to shine

She talked with a lisp, while awkward wires shined
and wore horrid bands.  Then on those "Ortho" days
after school, while in uncomfortable chairs lined up in rows,
he'd greet, "How are you, Missy?" ..with his bespectacled eyes.
"Open wide"....(and with pliers that looked like her Dad's, but could fix a smile)
as, with all of his might, he adjusted and tightened....correcting her whites

Branded with bands across the whites
Correcting the gaps, the lapse, the crooked shine
A few like her with awkward smiles
Would count the hours and count the days
Longed for smiles to please the eye
And be so blessed with perfect rows

Finally one day, while sitting in rows
Snip-snip!, at last, he cried..."Let's free these whites"!!
With excitement, the life came back to her eyes
"I'll grant your wish, with a brand new shine!"
She was the happiest girl on the planet today
and she left his office with a brand new smile!

While sitting in school rows, she beams her white teeth, merrily joining the fun
Her eyes always shine now, she stands tall and proud, singing out loud in the sun
And during each school day, she smiles all the time, finally her life has begun!

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For Debbie's Joy contest (Sestina)
Form: Sestina

Premium Member Sweet Mixture

The formula was so simple that even I could follow it and make some
little creatures very happy.  I read the pamphlet that came in the box               with the feeder, and followed directions so as to create the taste that                 all hummingbirds would enjoy.                                                                        

My wife and I had been gifted with a Humming bird feeder.  It sat for             several weeks before I decided to give it a shot, and grace my home                with the tranquil presence of the red oval feeder.  I knew that this back             yard addition would be a new source of joy as we relaxed on the                  enclosed patio. 
	
After adding one cup of sugar to four cups of water in a small pot, I sat it on
the stove and allowed it to boil.  After boiling, I let it cool and put the sugar
water in the feeder.  I tell you, this senior citizen was filled with excitement,
knowing that before long, like the squirrels, birds too would feast in my
little back yard. After putting it all together and hanging the feeder just outside of our bedroom window, I waited with anticipation for the day that I would 
personally witness a bird feeding outside our window.
	
I did not count, but it seemed there were many days before I saw my first 	   little hummingbird drinking the sugar water mixture from the feeder. And when        I saw my little bird friend drinking, it was absolutely exhilarating! It was exciting!  Who knew that such a small effort could produce such emotions of happiness  inside of me?  Who knew that feeding a bird would open such flood gates of pride within me?  

Sometimes it's the small things in life that makes a man feel like a giant inside.        I never knew that such beauty and joy would rain down on a stoic like me, simply from watching a hummingbird drink sweet water. It was pure delight. The pamphlet indicated that each day the hummingbird consumes half its weight in food. What are they doing?  Where are they going?  One has to assume that they are consuming so much food and expending vast amounts of energy, because they are working so hard at producing things most useful for mankind.  Basically that food consists of a diet of nectar from flowers and insects.  Oh, and also my sweet mixture.
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Form: Prose


Premium Member Memory of a Brief Encounter

With excitement, and hearts beating with anticipation
Five of us held hands...as if declaring, "We're in this together!"...
We sped upwards,..into the clouds,...or so it seemed....
Enclosed in a silver capsule...like amateur astronauts, ...
A steel and concrete world of modern, miraculous, and amazing engineering!  
Nervously, we looked at one another with the same wide eyed expressions.
"We are such country bumpkins!...."Do we look it?" I laughingly asked my husband....
"Hey, kids ! We're almost there...can you believe it??"  
"We're almost to the top!!"

A soft spoken gentleman, wearing a bushy, yet neatly trimmed, mustache,
smiled and said to us...."Your first time, I can see?"..

He wore a uniform, (our host, a guide, I supposed)....he had the kindest smile.
"If you like,....I can point out places of interest for your children?"...he offered kindly.
Our three children nodded in delight.

Doors opened at last, and we stepped into a large room
We made our way through the milling crowd, and found a spot for observation.
Our mustached gentleman, chuckled when we gasped for air
As we looked for the first time at the breathtaking views
It was if we were looking down from the heavens...
City lights had just turned on, and we knew what it was like to look upon the stars...
Only, this time, they were below us...!
A magnificent city spread out before our eyes...
       stunned, and speechless,  we were breathless...
      
Our new friend pointed out Ellis Island, the bridges, Statue of Liberty...
"Oh yes", ....he said,...."over there, ....you can see almost into New Jersey"
"And there,...that is Staten Island.   "Do you see the ferry?"
He charmed our young daughter, and impressed our sons with his knowledge..

Here we stood...on top of the world...inside this magnificent twin marvel....
Oh, dear God.....our innocence....who could know...? 
Oh, dear God....the significance ....

  one brief moment in time....
     spent in the company of one kind gentleman who wore a friendly mustache


   We will never forget that day................or him................. Oh, dear God....
                                   
                     ~

Dedicated to a kind stranger....





____________________________
In honor of New York City at Dusk
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Sweet Rose

“Of all flowers, methinks a rose is best.” – William Shakespeare, The Two Noble Kinsmen

Sweet Rose, for ages you have blessed the human race
with your beauty, elegance and grace.
You show yourself to us in so many ways . . .
as miniature, teacup, floribunda, rambler,,climber, and
as so many other species of loveliness - a true wonder of God's creations!
Whether on the ground, in the wild, in gardens, or on bushes,
you bring me such pleasure to see your many shapes and sizes.

Unlike pansies and other annual flowers,
which glimmer for a time, then die – never to regrow,
you come and you go, sweet Rose, continuously
from spring, through summer, and until the chill of fall.
Oh, sweet Rose, with your names so charming,
I love you all.

With female names like “Princess Diana,” “Lolita” or “Bathsheba,”
you intrigue me. 
With names that reflect the splendor of your many hues
such as “Toffee,” the pale yellow “Sahara,” the bold “Gold Medal,” 
“Beyond Blue,” and “Black Magic,” 
you enchant me.
With cute precious names like “Adorable,” “or “Angel Face,”
you delight me!

My muse reawakens each spring as your glorious scent
perfumes the air, and you offer yourself to the worshiping bees.
In those rare moments when I see a hummingbird
partaking of your nectar, I nearly gasp with excitement.
Oh, sweet Rose, 
whether posing steadfastly in the summer sun, 
dancing with breezes, or dreaming beneath the moon,
there is no flower so popular as you.
And no other flower bears so many different meanings
as those found in the paleness or in the vibrancy of your many colors.

Innocence is your white; your friendship, yellow; your modesty, peach;
In burgundy and dark pink, you show forth admiration; 
in coral, good fortune; and in light pink, the cheerfulness of youth. 
In the tint of amaranth is your passion; in rare green, your freshness;
in purple, your whimsy; however, your ruby red 
transcends them all with the purity of love.
The deeper your hue, the deeper is your meaning.
You are the symbol for so many things of which the poet dreams!

Oh, sweet Rose, I adore you. How you inspire me
with each bloom of your dewy petals that I chance to view.
Never do you cease to amaze me, sweet Rose.
May you blossom ever sweetly into eternity!
Form: Ode

A Boy Following His Dream

Once upon a time, there lived a curious boy who lived in the land of corns.
He always adored the work his parents did – his father was an astronaut,
while his mother was a doctor.
“What should I do to be great like you?” one day he asked his parents.
“Follow your dream,” his father replied.
“How will I follow my dream?!” he curiously asked.
“Follow the voice in your heart!” his mother replied.
In the middle of the night, he heard the voice tell him to pick some of his clothes,
a sandwich, pack all of them in the bag, and head to the nearest bus station. He
 did all his heart told him that night.
At sunrise, he had reached a bus station. The voice whispered “choose any bus”.
And he did! He chose the first half vacant bus that came right beside him, and sat 
next to an old man.
The journey seemed boring for him. The bus was moving slowly, and there were
no planes, cars or buildings to see.
The road they were traveling by seemed deserted, as though the other people
outside the bus had mysteriously disappeared.
“Where are you heading young man?” the old man asked the boy.
“I’m heading to my dream!” the boy replied. His eyes glittered with excitement.
“What about you? Where are you going?” the boy asked.
“To meet Charlie.”
“Who’s Charlie?”
“My dog.”
The boy was very happy for the old man, only to realize later that he was heading to Charlie’s grave , at a pet cemetery.
Tears rolled on his cheeks, as he mourned Charlie’s death.
As he comforted him, the old man told him that life was like a dream,
and death was like waking up in another world. A better world.
The boy felt better.
An hour later, the bus came to a halt. The stop looked like a semi-desert, unlike 
his home, where everything was green. 
His heart was silent throughout the journey.
“Where is the dream you were to meet?” the old man asked.
“My heart hasn't showed me yet…” came the innocent reply.
The old man laughed to tears.
“Son, your dream is not here yet. It is in the future! 
“You’ll arrive at your dream when you become obedient, hardworking,
and fill your heart with wonders of any possibilities.”
Let’s spend the night in a hotel, then tomorrow you’ll pick a bus to head back 
home.”
Little did he know that the old man was an angel!
Form: Prose

Rain

Are you a threat?

 

You come from the ominous warning of

dark and heavy clouds as if a cry 

when the burden can't be held up

by a mourning sky...

 

You drop so sudden, no time to take shelter

only to realize one is drenched with cold

and mire, left in defeat and ire..

 

Probably, at times we dislike  and least expect you

Especially when traffic jams cause some delays

In our busy life, at times, you are  a cumbersome

and messy stuff too...

No choice , we may only sigh and curse you..

Till we get tired and cry..

 

But are you a heaven sent as well? 

 

If you were, take us to an open field where

daffodil unashamedly blossoms as your touch

tips its petals...and promise us tender days

ahead and storm free tomorrow...

 

Let us hear the rhythm of your songs as you

sway gently and obediently to where the hard and

proud  wind brings you...and assure us

you are neither cut nor hurt..

 

That in the darkness of the night , you create

a hymn to quench the thirst of summer

and  sustain the color of the sleepy flower

bud supposed to bloom in spring

and flow down to the bottom of the earth to

give warmth to the yearlings frozen in winter

 

Let us realize that our dream is as

translucent as your stream

that even the shady light

can understand its longing.

And sails you to commune with the infinity of the

ocean to kiss playfully the willful waves..

and carries you up even to unknown cities..

and washes out the fear behind

 

Your suppleness  teaches us how to bend

gracefully through adversaries that chafe

our spirit and break our peace...

Just like you at times you punch

our window sill in anger and splatter your

frustration against the windshield of our car..

Does something from nature disturb your peace too?

 

But should we forget, how the innocent child enjoys

The tenderness you bring, as he circles and plays

with you and blurts out a shrieking laughter

When a drip trickles down his face and ears

And shouts with excitement when your tiny mists

slip out from his tiny palm...

 

Rain, whoever you are, so simple to feel yet too 

complicated to care about..

We can only enjoy or hate you every time you are here

But rest assured, the lesson you show is something else

we learn...

God Saw My Distress and Healed Me Part 4

This question drives me up and down the walls
I know for certain that God has answered my calls
I can’t hang up on Him…He’s so brilliant
And I’m so little compared to Him…
Maybe I’m little in size and very insignificant compared to the most High
He gives me quite a natural high
He brings me back home and kisses me good night
Without His love, I’d be lost like a sheep losing his shepherd
I feel like I’m separated to God
As if God and I are on both sides of the coin…
Our oceans don’t collide with each other,
But He does make huge tidal waves…
And I make baby waves that swerve up and down
Like a wave’s movement, my life seems to have its low points and high points
But, when I build enough energy, I glide higher than the clouds
Though, unfortunately, I’ve only been dreaming this
Then, I collapse into the sand...my face rubs against it and I have scrapes all over
Sand and water do mix well, but afterwards, the sea shore’s weight will pile up on the bottom of the ocean floor
I can’t imagine how many grains of sand there are on Earth
There are countless amounts of ants on Earth as well
Trillions and trillions of them are in existence
It’s amazing how plants take in Carbon Dioxide
And we breathe in oxygen…
God is a fantastic creator and He did carve His creations pretty well
God saw my distress and He healed me
When I think about Him, I’m speechless and can’t say much
He’s made out of love and He bubbles me up with excitement
I haven’t given Him the credit of working miracles in my life…
But, I don’t want to divorce God…I must propose to Him like a wife
Does to her husband…I want to submit to Him
He made the sunset, the moon and stars
Look! He even made the planets and He healed our scars
He made the flowers, the roses and the creeping bugs
Look! He even made leaves for our eyes to see…
He made the change of seasons
God saw my distress and healed me
God made the wild cats, bears, reptiles
He made us have a brain that is as neat as black and white tiles
God healed me…and I’m simply glad He did so
God wiped out my distress…and He simply dressed me with happiness and He’s in high spirits to see me grow

 ~ Inspired by the band of Evanescence’s song: Never Go Back 
~ God inspired me to write this poem…

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