Memory of a Brief Encounter

With excitement, and hearts beating with anticipation
Five of us held hands...as if declaring, "We're in this together!"...
We sped upwards,..into the clouds,...or so it seemed....
Enclosed in a silver capsule...like amateur astronauts, ...
A steel and concrete world of modern, miraculous, and amazing engineering!  
Nervously, we looked at one another with the same wide eyed expressions.
"We are such country bumpkins!...."Do we look it?" I laughingly asked my husband....
"Hey, kids ! We're almost there...can you believe it??"  
"We're almost to the top!!"

A soft spoken gentleman, wearing a bushy, yet neatly trimmed, mustache,
smiled and said to us...."Your first time, I can see?"..

He wore a uniform, (our host, a guide, I supposed)....he had the kindest smile.
"If you like,....I can point out places of interest for your children?"...he offered kindly.
Our three children nodded in delight.

Doors opened at last, and we stepped into a large room
We made our way through the milling crowd, and found a spot for observation.
Our mustached gentleman, chuckled when we gasped for air
As we looked for the first time at the breathtaking views
It was if we were looking down from the heavens...
City lights had just turned on, and we knew what it was like to look upon the stars...
Only, this time, they were below us...!
A magnificent city spread out before our eyes...
       stunned, and speechless,  we were breathless...
      
Our new friend pointed out Ellis Island, the bridges, Statue of Liberty...
"Oh yes", ....he said,...."over there, ....you can see almost into New Jersey"
"And there,...that is Staten Island.   "Do you see the ferry?"
He charmed our young daughter, and impressed our sons with his knowledge..

Here we stood...on top of the world...inside this magnificent twin marvel....
Oh, dear God.....our innocence....who could know...? 
Oh, dear God....the significance ....

  one brief moment in time....
     spent in the company of one kind gentleman who wore a friendly mustache


   We will never forget that day................or him................. Oh, dear God....
                                   
                     ~

Dedicated to a kind stranger....





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In honor of New York City at Dusk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/19/2012 7:51:00 PM
Carrie, my eyes are burning. This is powerful, and YES significant. Well deserving of its first place. I can't imagine... well, perhaps a bit. I used to regularly walk this sidewalk and there was a path that met it. The path led to some homes. I often would find myself admiring the little path... then one day, police tape. Murder right there. Literally inches from where I would tread. The murderer is currently in trial... so I understand the shock in this, but the magnitude? No...
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Debbie's "City Lights" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2012 11:02:00 PM
This is such a touching read Carrie. A piece of history you cannot reclaim except through memories. Well deserving of first place. Congratulations
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Date: 4/2/2010 1:38:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Carrie and seen from another perspective. I am glad you and the children had such an experience knowing now that it can't happen again. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 4/2/2010 1:17:00 PM
Carrie, many congratulations on your win in Nathan's fine contest, based on the tragic events of 9-11,2001 > this world of ours could do with all strangers being kind as we are un to them >> James
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Date: 4/2/2010 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on a Honorable Mention in my 9-11 contest! Nate
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:04:00 PM
This poem is a winner..a man with the kindest smile and a poet with gratitiude...:)very beautiful life is and the people we encounter--Charma
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Date: 9/10/2009 5:16:00 AM
Thank you Carrie. A sure winner. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 12:05:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 9/9/2009 7:19:00 PM
I came back to wish you Good Luck in the contest! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/9/2009 7:01:00 PM
Capturing the moment of time as if it were this morning, very moving Carrie ..........a sure winner ;-) alopez
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Date: 9/9/2009 3:57:00 PM
This is such wonderfully written piece, Carrie. Very moving. I think I'll join Barbara. Thank you so much for your warm welcome! How I've missed everyone here! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/9/2009 3:04:00 PM
Carrie, this is great..this will stay with me for quite awile. I think Ill have a good cry. Bg
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Date: 9/9/2009 2:27:00 PM
A lovely and different entry for the contest. Best of luck and thank you for your kind domments on my win. Love, Joyce
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