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Premium Member She Did What She Had To Do

She would do what she knew her Daddy King would have done.
Stopped playing, it was time to get out a pistol and fight, not have fun.
Her heart was maneuvering spaceship, he was sweet, her kind son.
He had no idea what was happening on the first planet from the sun.

Remember I love you. You will always be my number one.
Prince Vally wondered why his sainted mother was holding a gun.
Is it dangerous? He asked her. He was fearful, her number one son.
More than you will ever guess, she told him. Bar the door when I run.

She took off without a hug, a kiss, or anything else her son might need.
He took her advice; She was wise. His imagination was freed.
If someone took his mother, he would beg, borrow, die and plead.
To get her returned to this ship. He would even sell his favorite steed.

Fate was with the queen that day, the fight was quick and soon over.
I have to tell you, I was worried, she told her dog, sweet gentle Rover.
Did not share outcome with her son. His heart would have turned over.
Empathetic lad would have hated all the dead she left lying in the clover.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Refurbished Fairy Tales: Cinderella, If the Shoe Fits Part Two

At the ball...

At this point in the tale, a happy ending should be pending,
But readers now are more demanding,
And so, I'll tweak a bit the plot.
Cinderella made an entrance like aurora borealis
That sent a shockwave through the palace,
"Who is this chick? Man, she is hot!"

When the prince caught her attention, his anxieties enflamed him,
But when she smiled, he overcame them, 
And asked her if she'd care to dance.
The king and queen were sore relieved
Because they'd had some apprehension,
To girls he'd never paid attention,
They thought him something of a "nance".

But by the time the waltz was over he was thoroughly enraptured,
This girl his royal heart had captured,
And her to wed he was inclined.
Mom and Dad looked on with pride, 
And it was then and there decided
To get the two of them united
Before the prince could change his mind.

But he was well and truly hooked, and as to true love she surrendered,
Cindy suddenly remembered
She must be out of there by twelve.
If she hung around too long 
Until the tower bell stopped tolling,
The whole darn thing would start unrolling,
The midnight knell would end the spell.

So Cinderella fled the ball, but just before the spell was broken,
She dropped a slipper as a token,
And hoped the prince would come around.
But when the clean-up crew was through,
Along with hairpins and nail clippers,
At least a dozen single slippers
Had been turned in to Lost and Found.

When the prince saw all those shoes, he didn't ponder which or whether,
Just one was crystal, the rest leather,
And he knew what he had to do.
He had his mother pack a lunch, 
And Benzedrine he grabbed a fistful,
Then off he shot just like a pistol
In hot pursuit of that glass clue.

To be continued...

Endurance

Ahead a trail that stretches with his finish line unseen,
at the start he ponders what this one will mean,
this obstacle will be like no other he thought,
an obstacle different than everything he's fought,
cool crisp morning air fills his lung,
pistol raises, the starting chime has rung,
months of discipline has lead him here,
even the thought of loss isnt severe,
content the journey was the path to the start,
this trail, this obstacle will be the final part,
cloud of orange dust left at the beginning,
a pack of runners begins thinning,
weaving through Utah's canyon,
traverse to reveal the true champion,
his stride and breathing has reached the maximus,
by endurance we conquer - Fortitudine Vincimus,
ahead the finish line still unseen,
but now he knows what this will all mean.

For my good friend Matt, Ultra marathon runner. May you let no obstacles get in way of your mission!
Form: Rhyme

Musicals - Part 1

Have you ever been in a musical show?
I have done some, so this is how I know.
They first hooked me when I was in high school,
but stage fright made me feel the fool.

So, I began on the backstage crew,
Oh the things we had to do.
Painting sets and handling props, 
sometimes I wished I was a farmer harvesting crops.

Dressing all in black the day of the show
moving sets in the dark so no one would know.
We did some things that only a crew can do
I'll try to list a few here for you.

For example, during the "King and I",
There is a tearful scene with a Buddha to cry.
Since our Buddha was a person who spoke to Tuptim,
We did all in our power to get a laugh out of him.

Two of us moved his pedestal onstage,
his scene was to be all the rage.
We had to hide below his pedestal for his soliloquy,
So we tried to crack him up for all to see.

I worked behind the scenes again, for "My Fair Lady",
Some of the things we did there were also shady.
Professor Higgins takes a big drink in one scene
so we decided to pull one of our pranks on him.

The bottle he poured from was usually filled with ginger ale,
when we switched it to the real stuff he turned pale.
He could barely speak the next few lines
and was off key in his song the next time.

The classic we pulled was in "The Unsinkable Molly Brown",
our prank was the talk of the town.
If you don't know the story let me enlighten you
because then you may get a laugh or two.

Molly is aboard the Titanic's first trip
and the scene has to deal with the sinking of the ship.
We had a lifeboat with people on stage with waves across the floor,
she gets their attention by firing several shots in the air.

During the final dress rehearsal before show night
we knew this scene would be just right.
The Titanic sinking in the background, the waves, the lifeboat,
Molly pulls her pistol, raises it to the sky, and began to shoot.

The auditorium goes silent as the people raise their eyes to her to engage,
When a rubber duck came flying from the wings and landed on stage.
You never saw a director as mad as that
if she had a gun she would have blown off your hat.

"Who did that? Who did that?" was all she could say,
as the stage crew just laughed as we went on our way.
I finally got the nerve to perform in some shows later on,
But for now...this is just an introduction.
© Dan Cwiak  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Say Her Name

Snowballs met with red iron bullets

Someone
Has lost their compass
On the neighborhood streets of Minneapolis

The direction
Of wet splat on an officer’s back
To the metal response from a pistol splitting a windshield
Then a brain’s mesh

No one really knows
How the Albatross finds her way
Three times around the globe
Gliding on winds from one Pole to the other

What pulls her what pushes her
What power gets in her head
Ruffles her feathers and tickles her wings

Points her in one direction rather than another

It is to wonder

From the ice cold shale tumbled by glaciers
How she bares but one child every few years
While she shields with her feet and belly
A nest

From carbon bombardment

She can only fight with snowballs
Ducked under
By the President’s soldiers
Weighed down
With the oil and Crypto of Teflon vests cannisters badges radios

All our heads

The entire world

Spinning spinning out of control.


Waiting

When you're lost in the clouds in the shroud of winter and there's a sharp rap tappin' at your creosote clad door,
And you know full well your proudest punchline no doubt will flounder in the wake of your rough scuff ballroom floor, 
Whilst the soft scent of Jasmine barks at the sight of your once so prevalent, eloquent rapport, 
You know I'll be waiting darlin', resting steady, salivating for your quick six shot pistol draw 

When your masks of the butterfly fall without grace like rain from those cherub cheeks,
You clasp at the buttercups that sit chained tight to your leather wrapped Chelsea boot feet,
And a look of distained dismay blankets your distant wedding bell Champagne stained streets,
I'll sit here waiting darlin', steady resting, and gently claw you back from those jagged jaws of defeat 

When the flowers you collected on that moonlit meadow morning, wilt and wither and fold back into the night, 
When the colourless crisp frosted foliage underfoot, bends and melts at the dance of first light, 
And as you sleep and sweat and dream upon your pure silk fantasy guilded white,
You know I'm waiting darlin, resting steady, to feel your skin warm soft close and tight 

When your list of endless acquaintances gobble up the last of the Lion's share, 
When you really weren't ready for that cold steel playground truth or dare,
And the schools, parents and prophets who never really did get your precise style, beauty and flair, 
Eternally here waiting darlin', steady resting, cup half full, relaxing, basking sweet in the knowledge that your energy is there
Form: Rhyme

The Man Who Never Smiles

There is a man who never smiles
He works his life away day by day
His past was bad so bad he will never smile again
At the age of ten his mother passed in a horrible car crash
He was lucky to have survived
Laying in the hospital striving to survive
At the age of fifteen he lost his daddy
Forty years of smoking and drinking finally caught up with him
His brother worked himself to death
He worked 25 years in the red hot sun never took a day off
Took a lot of hits from the prisoners he guarded
Now all this man has left in life is himself
A pistol and a bullit
A shotglass and whiskey
Pull the trigger
Say goodbye
Form:

Premium Member Another Work Day

(This is something different. Playing around and having some creative fun. One word per line, three lines per stanza. What do you think? Tear it apart and share your thoughts, opinions and criticisms. Thanks)

Another
Work 
Day

Alarm
Shower
Coffee

Husband
Wife
Goodbye 

Driving
Car 
Work

Neighbor 
Wife
Bedroom

Coffee
Sex
Cigarettes

Forgetting 
Husband 
Laptop

Taking 
Off-ramp
Next

Crawling
Traffic
Congested 

Turning  
Car
Around

Driving
Home 
Again

Parking
Driveway
Home

Panicking 
Wife
Disbelief 

Hiding 
Neighbor 
Closet 

Approaching 
Husband
Door

Greets
Husband
Door

Kisses
Wife
Entry 

Smelling
Husband
Cigarettes 

Smoke
Wife 
Doesn’t 

Searching
Husband
Suspicious 

Increasing  
Husband 
Anger

Backyard
Cigarettes
Found

Questioning 
Husband
Livid

Denies 
Wife
Tears

Investigating 
House
Yelling

Following 
Wife
Pleading

Searching
Bedroom
Threatening

Approaching 
Husband
Closet

Intercepts 
Husband
Wife

Pushing 
Wife
Floor

Tearing
Wife
Hysterics

Opening
Husband
Closet

Standing
Neighbor
Closet

Pleading  
Wife
Tears

Holding
Husband’s 
Pistol

Trembling
Neighbor’s 
Hands

Infuriated 
Husband
Roars

BANG
BANG
BANG

Ringing
Ears
Smoke

Hysterical
Wife
Crying

Stumbling 
Husband
Floor

Closing 
Neighbor 
Husband

One
Head
Shot

Pooling 
Blood
Floor

Bleeding
Husband
Dead

Shot
Own
Gun

Sharing
Husband’s
Bed 

Adultery
Wife 
Whore

Coward
Neighbor
Murderer

Scarlet 
Wife 
Accessory

Awaits 
Prison
Both 

(Based on a true story. This happened a few blocks from my previous residence. I took some creative liberties with the story, names are fictional.)

Premium Member The Pitiful Parable of Pistol Pete

Pistol Pete is Peaceful Peter now,
Married life has altered him, and how.
He used to be a honky tonker
Always spoiling for a fight,
Now he's always home with Mama
And in bed by nine each night.
It was a huge mistake to take that wedding vow.

He had to give up hanging out with all the boys,
And had to throw out all his "girlie" mags and toys.
Nor can he scratch, nor cuss, nor chew,
He had to kiss that life good-bye,
And when he's dragged to church on Sunday,
She even makes him wear a tie.
There's not a thing about wedded bliss that he enjoys.

Six months in and she can't take it anymore,
All she does is wring her hands and pace the floor.
When Pete proposed to her he promised
He'd reform and get a job,
But no one wants to hire a guy
To sleep, drink beer, and be a slob,
And Mama's sick and tired of being poor.

What the last straw was for Mama, who can say,
But the police came and carted her away.
What she claimed as her defense,
That made the judge and jury frown,
Was he forgot too many times
To put the toilet seat back down.
"Justified, perhaps, but guilty, anyway."

To see her tried Pete's old friends flocked from miles around,
Then stayed to see her fried and Pete put in the ground.
As each one heard the eulogy,
This thought was racing through his head,
"If I had followed Pete's example,
That could be me there lying dead!"
And not a dry eye in the parlor could be found.

If there's a moral to my tale, this truth will fit:
If you only "like" someone, do not commit.
Before proposing, think again
'cause it's a fairly well-known fact
That married life can be a pain
When complete opposites attract.
If you don't believe me, just read his obit
Because Pistol Pete's the pitiful proof of it.
Form: Narrative

A Man Who Became a Monster

A suitcase was left on my porch that was full of body parts.
When I learned whose body it was, it really broke my heart.
I burst into tears when I learned that it was my son.
I hunted the killer down and shot him with my gun.
My son was in trouble with a bookie because he owed him a lot of cash.
It took over two weeks to track him down and I killed that piece of trash.
That bookie begged for his life as I pointed my pistol at his head.
I pulled the trigger and it felt so damn good because he was dead.
But I became a killer and I learned that I was just as bad as that bookie was.
I learned that a man can become a monster because of the things he does.
After I became a monster, you don't want to know how it made me feel.
When I looked in the mirror, I saw the face of a man who decided to kill.
I couldn't live with myself so I decided to call the police and turn myself in.
I will spend the rest of my life in prison, I will never see the light of day again.
Form: Rhyme

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